SwaSan OS-- Their moments together...

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Hello Viji...

Whenever I read this it brings smile on my face and then as I reach to end of this I grin like idiot...

but never mind I love SWASAN so much in your work...
Sanskar's thoughts going haywire first while drinking tea and then while answering her...God Can I love him anymore...

Swara...you perfectly showed her here using her every quality as we have seen and sanskar us have fallen for...fierce, playful...

Really liked this piece alot and their silly fights...
that was very funny when she called him beshram I think her cheeks might have changed their color..

No comment for ragini and her thoughts...
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I loved this...

Love
Mukta

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Viji thank you for this beautiful os. Hey, write a one shot on this memory loss also, provided you have time. With love 😳

----------- Aparna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: muktai
Hello Viji...

Whenever I read this it brings smile on my face and then as I reach to end of this I grin like idiot...

but never mind I love SWASAN so much in your work...
Sanskar's thoughts going haywire first while drinking tea and then while answering her...God Can I love him anymore...

Swara...you perfectly showed her here using her every quality as we have seen and sanskar us have fallen for...fierce, playful...

Really liked this piece alot and their silly fights...
that was very funny when she called him beshram I think her cheeks might have changed their color..

No comment for ragini and her thoughts...
...

I loved this...

Love
Mukta

Hey Mukta my dear buddy 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so much yaar. I wanted to show some light moments between SwaSan, at the time when they had become such close friends during their "pretend marriage". Glad you liked the deepening of their relationship, their cute nok jhoks and almost couple-like mild disagreements. They are certainly becoming rather possessive about each other, so Swara doesn't like Sanskaar being a fan of Deepika, and Sanskaar doesn't much like Swara fangirling over Siddharth Malhotra. 😉 😆

I had a lot of fun imagining and writing their disagreement over the AC temperature, so happy that you loved this my dear. Made my day. 😊 🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Apudeep
Viji thank you for this beautiful os. Hey, write a one shot on this memory loss also, provided you have time. With love 😳
----------- Aparna

Thanks so much, Aparna my dear. Am so happy to hear you loved this OS. 🤗🤗

I'll come back to write a piece on the memory loss track, just as soon as I have some time.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much, Aparna my dear. Am so happy to hear you loved this OS. 🤗🤗

I'll come back to write a piece on the memory loss track, just as soon as I have some time.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Thanks for the response 🤗

Looking forward to read that 😳

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WriterAtHeart

@WriterAtHeart

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Beautiful OS dear Viji. I was going through official FF index to check out some works on Swasan and found this. I havent read much on Swasan. I have only read arshi fictions when I was a non member. Arnav and Khushi are the first ones whom I love and adore so much from television and now Swasan.

It was a fun reading this. Really liked how you took a very simple concept of crossword puzzle game and portrayed relating it to Swasan in an amazingly beautiful way. Completely enjoyed reading Apsara and swara 😳 and Raginic 😆

Their relationship has deepened gradually in this fic and in show as well...and that was beautiful to read. Their possessiveness for each other was something which made evident that they do feel for each other to get annoyed if the other one is admiring someone😳

- Ani

Edited by WriterAtHeart - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: WriterAtHeart
Beautiful OS dear Viji. I was going through official FF index to check out some works on Swasan and found this. I havent read much on Swasan. I have only read arshi fictions when I was a non member. Arnav and Khushi are the first ones whom I love and adore so much from television and now Swasan.

It was a fun reading this. Really liked how you took a very simple concept of crossword puzzle game and portrayed relating it to Swasan in an amazingly beautiful way. Completely enjoyed reading Apsara and swara 😳 and Raginic 😆

Their relationship has deepened gradually in this fic and in show as well...and that was beautiful to read. Their possessiveness for each other was something which made evident that they do feel for each other to get annoyed if the other one is admiring someone😳

- Ani

Hi Ani 🤗🤗

So happy to know that you loved this. 'Their Moments Together' was the second SwaSan fic I wrote, as a sort of 'midquel' to my first one 'It was written in the Stars'. 😊

I am really touched to know you loved the portrayal of how their relationship progresses from friendship to something deeper. Something which they haven't named yet, but they are gradually realizing how much they have come to mean to each other.

In case you're interested and time permits, all my completed SwaSan fics are on my index. link to my index is on my siggy , at the bottom of all my forum posts. You could read them when convenient.

Lots of Love 🤗❤️

Viji

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WriterAtHeart

@WriterAtHeart

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

I am not able to see your index in your signature but its alright. I will check through official FF index

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: WriterAtHeart
I am not able to see your index in your signature but its alright. I will check through official FF index

Hi Ani 🤗

I guess, you would need to go to your profile, and update it to say "Yes" to viewing avatars and banner signatures. You might find it useful to do this, as many writers on the forum update their fics in their indexes. The links are usually on their siggies, just like mine.

Love

Viji