SwaSan and RagLak SS: SWARAGINI, Still Together?? part 4 on pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Disclaimer

All the characters are a necessary need and an work of fiction. If this story seems similar to any FF on IF then its either a co-incidence or I may be have inspired by that.This not only Swaragini Story but also Swasan, RagLak, SwaLak and SanGini bonding also So do not bash any character here. Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.


Part 2

Swara was packing her bag when laksh enters. He opens the cupboard and started packing his stuffs in another suitcase.

Swara: Kuch Sweaters b rakh lena...

Lakhya looked at her. She bowed her eyes down.

Laksh: No need of being so over excited.

Swara was confused. Why would she be over excited?

Swara: Excuse me!

Laksh: Hum sirf maa papa ka dil rakhne k liye jaa rahe hain, par kisise koi umeed mat rakhna ok?

Swara: mujhe kisi se ki umeed hai b nhi! Manaa tum logon ne nahi kiya.

Laksh: Oh please! Hum tumhare jaise nahi hai k apne k pyaar I kadar nahi karte!

Swara: Laksh!

Laksh: Chillao mat! You know what Swara? Tumse shaadi karna, meri life ki sabse badi galiti thi, aur tumse pyaar karna, use b badi!

He left the room.

Swara: Ek tumho laksh, jo bina socha, itna kuch keh dete ho, dusri ragini, jo kuch bolti hi nahi. Aur ek sanskaar hai, jo bina kuch bole hi bahut kuch keh deta hai!

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Sankaar was packing stuffs. Ragini entered.

Ragini: Need help?

Sanskaar; Almost done.

Ragini: sanskaar..

San: Hmm..

Rag: Hum saath din swara k saath kaise bitayenge?

Sanskaar: Ragini relax. Hum honge tumhare saath. Lakshya hoga tumhare saath.

He said giving a force to laksh's name. She looked at him.

Ragini: Hum toh phir b reh lenge, par aap??

Sanskaar: main kya?

Ragini: Sanskaar you know what I m talking about.

Sankaar: No ragini I don't know what you are talking about!

Ragini: It means you are ignoring me?

Sans: No, I m ignoring Swara!

Ragini: I m confused sometimes, aap swara se pyaar zyada karte hain ya nafrat?

Sanskaar: pyaar toh use bht kia tha ragini, par nafrat ki wajah wo khud bani. Usne hum sabka dil toda hai, mainuse kabhi maaf nahi karunga.

He left wiping his tears. He was just passing by the corridor and swara came in front.

Sanskaar: maine kitni baar kaha hai mere saamne mat aya karo!

Swara: sans...

Sanskaar: Shut up Swara! (Pointing her) tum kyun aa jati ho baar baar insult hone?

Swara: Tumhari problem kya hai?

Sankaar: meri problem tum ho! Mujhe problem hai tumhare naam se, tumhare face se, tumhare attitude se! So just get out of here!

Swara: Sanskaar...

He fold her hand.

"Ah...!!!"

Sankaar: kYa hua? Dard ho raha hai? Jo dard tumne hum sabko diye hain na swara, uske saamne yeh kuch b nahi hai,,,!

He pushed her and turned to go.

Swara: Itni nafrat! Itna gussa???

Sankaar: Mera gussa tumne ab tak dekha hi kahan hai? Aur jab nafrat dekhogi, toh Iss Sanskaar ko bhul jaogi!

He left.

Someone knocks the door and ragini open.

Laksh: Bhai...

Ragini: wo nahi hain...

She turned.

Laksh: Ragini...

She didn't face him.

Ragini: Laksh, tum pehle hi bht maafi mang chuke ho, and we both know, tumhari koi galti nahi hai!

Laksh: Main kya karta ragini, I loved her.. mujhe nahi pata tha k wo... I m really sorry ragini..

Ragini: Ab inn baton ka koi fayeda nahi laksh...

Laksh: Ragini I m really sorry, I can't believe k maine uske liye tumhara pyaar thukra diya!

Ragini: laksh hamne kaha na, inn baton ka koi fayeda nahi.

Laksh: ragini ek baar puchun?

Ragini: hmm...

Laksh: kya ab um mujhse pyaar nahi karti???

To be continued...

Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Arre wat a twist can't able to understand wat s gng on. Why they three are angry on swara continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hey just read ur first 2 chapters, great start to ur story
Love how u portray the emotions
Plz could u pm me wn u update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
omg kya concept hain swasan & raglak love each other right laksh was in love with swara thats y he marry her then y d hell he is angry on her wht swara did??? y sangini got married??? if they dont love each other update soon its damn interesting n do pm m if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Thanks for pm...
It is lovely
Waiting for Ragini's answer..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
superb concept dear...pls jaldi se next part update karo...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Nice..
Why sanskar angry with swara??
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Please make swasan and raglak as couple. . superb update.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Part 3


"Ragini, kya an tum mujhse pyar nahi karti??" Lakshya asked hopefully to get a positive answer.

"Maine kaha na lakshya, its all over now... Jo kuch b hua hai, WO him Charon k beech hi rahega, is baare me ghar me kisi air ko much nahi pata.."

"Aur unhe pata lagna b nahi chahiye.."

RagLak turned and found Sanskaar coming.

"Bhai, usne hamare saath itna bura kiya, air him uske baare me surf acha sochen?? Tum dono ki wajah she main chup hun, warns main khud b nahi janta main uske saath kya karta!" Lakshya said in disgust.

"Acha??" Sanskaar put his hans on lakshya's arms.
"Thik hai, jaa jo karna hai kar... Bata de sabko Sab kuch. Bol de k Swara ne kya kiya hai hamare saath. Come on, go!"
He sighed. Sanskaar chuckled.
"Main janta hun tu nahi kar sakta. Kyun k tu apne family se bht pyar karta hai aur use tutne nhi de sakta.. Aur tu aaj b swara ki care karta hai."
He said removing his hand.
"Main nhi karta!"
Ragini interfered.
"Lakshya, hum tino aaj b uski care karte hain air yeh hum tino jante hain!"
Lakshya put his hands on his hips.
"I can't get k tum dono aise situation me b itne calm kaise reh sakte ho, mujhe toh yeah b yaad nhi k hum akhri baar dil se muskuraye kab the!"

The trio exchanged glances.


Swara uncovered her blanket and sat on the couch. She looked aside and found lakshya sleeping on bed half blanketed hugging a pillow. She got off the bed and took out a diary from the cupboard. She sat on the couch pinning the wall, she kept the pillow on her lap. Today she was going to write a story. Story of love, friendship, sisterhood and bromance. Story of grief, misunderstanding, regret and guilt. Story of Swata, Ragini, Sanskaar and Lalshya. Story of SwaSan, RagYa and SanLak. Story of SwaLak, RagSan and SwaRagini.

5 years ago

Ragini stepped out of her car and stood in front of her college. She was wearing a story red salwar suit with dupatta around neck. She had her hair puff with a point bindi. She went in. It was her first day. She goes in and a football was about to hit her from front, she closed her eyes in fear.

Swara was in deep pink colour kurla and parrot green leggings. She had a scarf with her bag hanging on shoulder. She was new so entered the class and sat where she got a space.
"Excuse me!" She heard and turn.
"You can't sit here, my bro is on the way..." Said the boy sitting next to him.
He was wearing blue jeans with white t shirt and blue jacket.
"Is his name written on this sit?" Swara asked glaring.
He was like... 'Unbelievable'.
"I always sit with him.." He glared.
"Then you get another sit, I m going to sit with my sis.."

Ragini opened her eyes. she found someone holding the ball. He was wearing white jeans with blach shirt and white jacket. His face was covered with the ball. She bent a little to see his face when he threw the ball aside. He smiled at him and she was nervous. But his smile made her nervousness go away. She smile back.

On one side Lakshya and Ragini were looking at each other smiling when Swara and Sanskaar were glaring at each other on the other.

To be continued...

Written from mobile.. Not edited.

Don't forget to like and comment..

Love,
Shirisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome update
The life of swara, sanskar, ragini and Laksh, the life of four people changed by swara's wrong decision.
So many secrets are there. Waiting for unfold the secret.
Really interesting concept.
Waiting for your next update

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