SwaSan and RagLak SS: SWARAGINI, Still Together?? part 4 on pg 7

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Hi lovely people.. I am Shirisha... U can call me Shiri.. Shiru... Shira... or Teddy!! Well, I am a writer and thought to write something on Swaragini for the first time. I am a big time these duo fan and I hope u all will like my work. Here is the prologue.

This story revolves around two sisters Swara and Ragini. The whole story is same as the serial running till now. Ragini asks Swara to accept lakshya's love but swara denies.

6 months later

Swara's P.O.V

6 months. Everything changed in this interval. No one is happy. Everyone's life has changed. We all are together, still apart. Me and my sister Ragini, we are in our new life. In a new house, with a new family. Yes, the Maheswari family. Now, we are a part of this family. It was little difficult for them to accept me, but Ragini handled everything. I love everyone in the house except one person. Who? My Husband!

Ragini's P.O.V

It's really a turning point in all of our lives. We four are going through very critical stages of our lives. Each of us is afraid of losing something, but we don't expect for gaining anything. Our new family is very comfortable. Everything is just perfect, but still I m in search of true love, I wonder, if I would ever get it. But I can manage, I have learnt from my family how to adjust. But this time, I hate her. Who? Swara!

So... how was that? If u like it, I will continue... plz give feed backs...!!

Love,

Shirisha😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An Nice One Sririsha !
But i have an small little suggestion use colourful colors that always give eye an pleasing colour
But Yes its an Nice Shot !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg its much surprising start
well i am in for anything creative
so go ahead
all the best 👍🏼

btw good to see a rosidian here 😳
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Originally posted by: ..Roopal..

omg its much surprising start

well i am in for anything creative
so go ahead
all the best 👍🏼

btw good to see a rosidian here 😳

Hey roopal..happy to c here
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Ab Yeh Raghuvanshi kaun hai. ..
Sounds interesting.. would love to read further.

Can you please give your FF a title so that it's easier for us to track for updates?
Edited by bgscribe - 9 years ago
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Nice start 👍🏼
Waiting to know what is going to happen 😃
Update soon 😊
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seems interesting to me
do continue soon
n do pm me
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Nice start shiru pls continue. Pls pm me whenever u r updating.
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Disclaimer

All the characters are a necessary need and an work of fiction. If this story seems similar to any FF on IF then its either a co-incidence or I may be have inspired by that.This not only Swaragini Story but also Swasan, RagLak, SwaLak and SanGini bonding also but the MAin Couples are SWASAN and RAGLAK. So donot bash any character here. Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.



Part 1

Swara was busy in kitchen when Ragini comes and hugs her from back. Swara smiles and touches Ragini's cheek.

"I m so happy, at last we completed 1 year of our marriage!" Ragini said happily.

"I m happy for you," replied swara casually.

The next moment she realized that, she was talking to herself. There was no one present, there was no Ragini present. She was there alone. And it was a dream. Yes, a very dream, which she wants to come true badly. But she knows, it's an impossible thing. What she did was not all her faults, but for that, no one is going to forgive her. The "No one" includes her 3 dearest persons - Rangini, Sanskaar and Lakshya.

She wiped her tears and went out of the kitchen with the Prasad in her hand. Just as she came out, laksh was just passing by. He was again in the same mood. Not in a mood of not talking to her, but his eyes were saying many things. But the only thing she could she in his eyes now was, "Now, it's your turn!" He went without uttering a word. She also didn't bother to stop him because she knew the consequential anger of him.

Swara moved on. She just came across a room, and the door opened. Sanskaar came out. Their eyes met. He was in the same stage as Laksh. His tears were searching a way to escape. She felt like as they asking asking her only, "Why the hell?" But suddenly the pain in his eyes turned in anger and they went red. Swara had no words to say, in fact, she could not meet his eyes, so she just bowed her face down. Sanskaar left ignoring her.

Swara reached the temple and found Ragini decorating the plate.

"You want help?" she asked.

"No thanks!" she got a sudden reply. "I can manage" Ragini said without meeting the eyes.

Soon all the family reached and Annapurna asked to start the pooja. Swara hold the plate and looked around. All the family was present except lakshya and Sanskaar. She turned and put the plate up. All of a sudden, she felt a hand sharing the plate with her. She looked aside and found a expressionless laksh holding the plate. Swara smiled.

"I never forget my promise." He whispered. "And I m glad, I didn't learnt that from you, at least!"

But Swara was helpless. She couldn't do anything. She was not in a state to say sorry to them also. But it was destiny, which played a very cruel game with them, with the four, with all of them. There was time when the four were best of friends. There was no boundary that could separate them. Swara was the one who had brought smiles on their faces, and today, she was the only reason of their tears. But hell! She can't change anything.

"Are sanskaar aur Ragini ko b toh Aarti karne do, unki b salgira hai aaj!" sujata says.

Laksh turned the plate and saw Ragini in front. Both the eyes went teary but no one could do anything. Sanskaar came in between to handle all. He held the plate in one hand and patted Laksh's shoulder with the other. They share a little smile and SanGini finished the Arti.

"Swara, Ragini."

Every one tuned and got happy to see Shekhar and Sharmistha on the door. Swaragini hugged them and SanLak touched their feet. They sat down to have some gossip. It was their surprise on their daughters' first marriage anniversary. They were having gifts for them.

"What Baba?" Swara asked.

"Abhi batata hun." He takes out an envelope from his pocket. "Here I have 4 tickets. Holiday package of London for Swara and Laksh, and Paris for Sanskaar and Ragini."

"Paris?" Ragini spoke. "No papa, we can't go!"

"But why Ragini?" Sharmistha asked in concern.

"Ah.. Maa.." Sanskaar spoke to handle the situation. "She means, we cant go paris alone. We all will go together, to the same place..."

"Yes," Laksh joined. "Now a days, we can't live without hurting each other." She said looking at Swara.

Sanskaar and Ragini looked at him first, then to Swara. She was looking him in teary years.

"What do you mean?" Annapurna Asked.

"I mean, without troubling each other. In funny way you know... Right Sanskaar??" he asked taking a pen from sanskaar's pocket and putting it in his.

"Right!" Sanskaar replied hitting him on back head.

"Aaahhh!" Laksh exclaimed and everyone laughed.

SanLak shared a Side hug and Swara smiled looking at them but her this smile vanished when Sanskaar, laksh and Ragini looked at her expressionless.

To be continued...


Donot forget to post comments!!😳

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very good update dear.. I want to know what happened to their lives.. update soon

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