OS : THe Engagement.... :P

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ALL THE BEST READERS !!!!!

In the hall :

Swara : Hi Ragini,,,,Hi Lakshya...Yay !!! sab aa gayi...(jumping around)

Ragini : Meri pyaari Behan ; Aaj tumhari engagement hai ... kam se kam aaj ke din shanty se beeto

Swara : Ok meri maa ; ( To lakshya ) : Toh , Honeymoon "enjoy "kiya ?

Lakshya : Kya kahoon ; kabhi kabhi soochthi hai yeh (Ragini) meri patni hai ya meri maa...Waise bura bhi toh nahi tha ...!!!! (saying this he eyes Rags)

Ragini blushes and Swara tickles her ... J

Rags : Yeh sab choodo...(changing the topic)...Re Bagwan tu abhi tak change nahi ki..? Yeh ladki ka kya karoon...!!

Swara was about to say something when Shekhar-Sumi enters...

Rags : Baaba , Maa dehko yeh Swara bhi na...

Shekhar doesn't allow her to complete : Meri beti ki bare mein kuch mat kehana tum...

Rags : Baaba (Huh...?!) aap bhi...!!? ... Teekhe par mera pass maa hain (sticks her tongue out to Swara)

Sumi : Awww!!! Aur hamesha hogi... Lakshya beta kaise hai tu...

Lakshya : Maa; sab teek hai...( Hugs Shekhar-Sumi)

Swara : Okay guys...bahut hogaya drama... Ragini aao nahi karogi ...?

Rags : haan Baba , aa rahi hu...( Both go to Swara's room)

Lakshya and Shekhar talks about something and Sumi goes to attend the guests...

In Swara's room :

Ragini helps Swara in her dress and makeup...and at last she gets ready...

SWARA'S LEHANGA : http://www.cbazaar.in/bridesmaid-and-family/lehenga-choli/perfect-net-fish-cut-lehenga-choli-p-ghshtxan6705.html

Rags : Aww ... So cute...Aaaj Saanskar faint hoga tumhe dekkar...

Swara : Mein toh hu hi na ------ beautiful... (Girls laugh)

Rags : ( Hearing all the drum beats) Lagta hai tumhari hone wali Pati aa gaya...

Saanskar and Lakshya has a friendly chat and then the ring exchange ceremony starts...

Lakshya : (stands beside Ragini and whispers into her ears) Hamare engagement yaad hai..?!

Rags (blushes ) : Nahi , Yaad nahi hai, Budhoo koi aapne engagement bulatha hai ?!!!!

Lakshya : Kaise Romantic mood ko turn off kare ; koi tumse seekhe...( Both smiles)

Along with Swara and Saanskar ; Laksya and Ragini too are about to start a new journey full of happiness and love... <3

I have absolutely less or no experience in writing... So pls forgive me and my mistakes... [ Chappels and Roses ... Welcome ]

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ishqwaalalove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lehenga pic is cute ...it will suite on ragini ..nice selection...
omg ...ragya honeymoon ...and swara-sanskaar engagement...😆😳⭐️

its too beautifully written dear ...👏😳

i loved the starting of nokjhok btw ragya ...hope it starts in serial too soon...😆😳

i will welcome you with roses this time instead of chappals because of this beautifully cute written update...😆⭐️😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Chhavi ... Ur comment means a lot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nands, really really really well written beautiful OS. loved their little kit-pits and their little family moment with Sharmistha and Shekhar. It's perfectly balanced, can just imagine the sceniiro of it. It's really good. Keep writing! look forward to reading some more dear! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanku thanku...never imagined the ow to hit the right cord...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one 😊 though I m not a RagYa fan still a nice one .as we don know how Sanskar is , we can imagine him 😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!!
It's simply awesome nanda 👏
Really , I loved it😳
Every dialogue was nice 😉

I bet u can become more famous if start a FF 😆😉

Looking forward from u nanda 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks everyone...
.@Sam : Hope I didn't upset u ... Or any other Swarya fan...he (in the pic) is hot ... Good imagination... :P
@Sud... I don't know about the ff thing coz its my 2nd OS...I'll try , though..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was amazing!! Continue please!!:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I personally ship swarya but I like this new perspective too
U write well!!!nd love lakshya as usual!!

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