YuvReen OS Contest Voting Round#2 Last Date 23rd April 2014

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Entry 1

Yuvreen OS : Happiness After A Pause


It was their 2nd wedding anniversray and happiness came their way after 2 years. Suvreen Woke up early and do aarti and then she sat waitinf for Yuvraaj to come down for breakfast so that she can wish him 2nd anniversary. She was in her thougts that how last 2 years passed without enjoyment and life was just stuck in one place. She was remebering hoe Yuvi face loss in Business and his parents just after their marriage and then how dey spent whole year separately only becoz Yuvraj went to London to restablish the business so that He can Give Suvreen all that happiness which she deserves and which he promised to give him. Yuvraj and suvreen both from rich families who never saw thta kind of face in their life were shattered and sad because it all happned so sudden and they didn't not even get time to enjoy marriage. it was new for them But they become each others supporter and that 1 year left. Yuvraj established his business in london after so much hard work and came back to India to promote it here too as he wanted to take his company to that level where it was 1 year ago. Suvreen was happy to get back Yuvi but Yuvi's work never let them enjoy their Lyf Togtehere and dey dun even remeber when their 1 st marraige anniversary came and passed. The only Happ moment they saw was when they go to know about Suvreen pregnancy and They both were on cloud 9 but This again made Yuvraj work more harder as he wanted to give every possible luxury to his child which he once had as child.But their Lyf little changed after that news and dey started to enjoy life again slowly n slowly.Now the tym comes when Suvi is on the delivery stage and also their second marriage anniversary and Yuvuraj is successfull business person again. Suvi was still in her thoughts when somebody came from behind and Hugged her. Suvi came out of her thoughts and look backwards.

Yuvraj: Wishing u a very happy Anniversary Mrs. Suvreen Guggal Singh.

Suvreen: Yuvraj U here I didn't notice Anyway Wishing U too a very happy Wedding Anniversary To my sweet and handsome Hubby.

Yuvraj: Suvreen Tum khush nahi ho kya. Tumhara chehra kyun itna uttra hua hai.

Suvreen: Kuch nahi Yuvraj woh bas Aaj itni khush hoon main but phir woh last 2 years ki woh sabh yaadein mere ankhon ke samne ghoom gayyi.

Yuvraj By holding Suvi hand Yuvi sat down on his knees.

Yuvraj: Suvreen dun be upset and bhool jayo purani baatein. U know very well ke HUmien yeh khush ka din poore 2 saal baad mil hai. Aur aaj ke din tum sad hoyugi to

hamara baby bhi sad hoga and mera baby sad hog to min sad ho jayoonga. To tum hum sabh ko sad karogi kya.Plzz cheer Up Topper apne cheeteh ki baat maan jaoo na.

Suvreen: By holding Yuvi's hand Tightly started smiling. Yuvraj okie me theek hoon main nahi cahti ki mere wajah se hamar baby and mere patidev jo ke world famous cheetah hai sad ho jayee.

Yuvraj: Topper yeh world famous cheetah kaun hai main to bas Topper ka cheetah hoon.

Suvreen: ahaan cheetah badibadi baatein karne lagg gaya hai. well Life bhi bande ko bahut kush sikha deti hai circumstances ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti.

Yuvraj: are meri maa abhi sad mat ho nahi to main bhag jaoonga aur raat tak dhoondte rehna mujhe main naraaz ho jaoonga. Now dun upset again and get up lets make do Breakfast and we need to do arrangements as there is party at night and I have some imp. work to do.

Both Yuvreen had breakfast and Just then Yuvi gave peck on Suvreen forehead and left by excusing that he has some work. Suvi too engrossed in Tonights party arrangements as she just have to order servants. Doctor advised her rest so Yuvi already took promose from her that she will not do anything whole day.

Yuvi and Rathie phone convo.

Yuvraj: abhe rathie ke bachhe tujhe ek kaam bola tha woh bhi dhnag se nahi hota . ek bachhe ka baaap ban gaya phir bhi ghadeh ka ghadah hi hai. Annie sahi kehti hai tera khush ni ho sakta.

Rtahie: bhai aap gussa mat ho sabh kaam ho jayega, main kissi kaam mein phass gaya tha to late ho gaya.

Yuvraj: Rathie agar yeh kaam nahi hua na aur mere surprise ki dhajiyaan uddi to tujhe main ni chodunga annie ke kehnd epar bhi nahi.

Rathie: Bhia aap tnsn kyun le rahe ho sabh ho jayega. Just chill. Ghra jayiye aur bhabhi ka khayal rakhiye aur party ki tyaari kijiye bahbhi ko aapki zyada zaroorat hai. abh dekhiye tirlokpuri ke chichore ka kamaal.

Yuvi cut the phoen and bought something from mall and left from there.

Yuvi came and Suvreen asked Him how is the ararngements.

Yuvi: Topper tune kiya hai na To sabh the Best hai . Tum kuch karo aur woh achha na ho ho hi nahi sakta. Akhir biwi kiski ho Mr. Yuvraj Singh. Yuvi tera cheetah hai cheetah.

Just then a cockroach came from outside and Yuvi jumped on sofa and screamed Topper there is cockroach.

Suvreen started to laugh his heart out.

Suvi : dekho mere cheetah ko... Yuvi mera woh cheetah hai jo cockroach se darta hai. Thanku God ji for Giving me this brave Cheetah. She was laughing continously.

Yuvi was staring at Suvreen was very happy to see her laughing her heart out after almost 2 years.last Time he saw her smiling on their wedding day.

Yuvi also started to laugh out and they both sat on sofa laughing and just then baby kicked suvi and she noticed it. Then Yuvi started to talk to his baby and suvreen was just smiling looking at Yuvi as dey were spending this mmuch time after so long.

It was tym for party and Both Yuvreen got ready and welcomed Guests. Rtahie, naro , manu, annie all came and rathie and naro 1 year old baby too came. Super six were together after 2 years and was remebering tehir college dayzz. Now it was time for Cake cutting. Before cutting cake Yuvi said something for Suvreen.

Today we are celebrating 2nd marriage anniversary and yeh 2 saal kabh beet gayye pata hi nahi chala. koi celebraton nahi , koi enjoyement nahi , Itni mushkile but phir bhi hum saat hai, It is all because of Suvreen who stands for me every where and supports me in hard time. He said it was Suvreen's Trust in me and Believe in god that we are together and celebarting our anniversary and raedy to welocme out first child. Toppr is mY lyf and i want to spend My whole lyf like this with her.

Suvreen Got emotional and both hugged and all clapped. Yuvreen cut cake and all wished them happy anniversary. Just then Music starts and Yuvreen danced on the same Tum hi ho. They both engrossed so much in dance then baby again kicked suvi to brought them back from their dreamland. All clapped for this beautiful couple and soon to be mom and dad. All ahve lunch and Super six gang carcked jokes like they usedto do in college. Yuvi took Rtahie on side and asked him if everything is set or not. Rathie Thumps up to show everything done. All guests bid good night to couple and super siz gang too and all left.

Suvi was tired after all this and Yuvi amde her rest on the couch and asked him if she can come with him on Long drive. Suvi refused as her she was feeling low and her mood changes after every few hours de to mood swings in pregnancy. Yuvi made puppy face but as he was also aware that he can't force suvi but what about his surprise for suvi. He was in his thoughts and just then Suvi's voice bring happiness on his Lips. She was raedy to go on drive. Yuvi opened car dorr and made suvi sit comfortably on seat. Yuvi started car and both were silent on the way. Just then Suvi broke silence and asked Yuvi ke hum kahan ya rahe hain.

Suvi: Yuvraj tum itne chup kyun kyun ho. Tumne on the way mujhse baat bhi nahi ki. Yeh kaise long drive thi. main to bore ho gayyi.

Yuvi: JUst wait and then I will told u why i was quite.

Just the they reached on beach and Yuvi stopped car. Yuvi opned the door and suvi came out. Suvi was awestruck with the decoration and arrangemnt there. Yuvi never did anything like this for her in these 2 years.

Yuvi: Topper hairan ho gayyi na yeh soch ke Yuvi ko aaj kya ho gaya. JO 2 saal mein nahi hua aaj kaise. To I have answers for all ur questions. He asked Suvi to come forward and make her sit on the chair. Suvi was speechless.

Suvi: Yuvraj yeh tumne kabh kaise kiya. It is so beautiful romantic. Mujhe nahi pata tha mera cheetah bhi kuch aisa soch sakta hai.

Yuvi: Topper tum yeh nahi jana na chaogi ke why i was silent whole way. Just becoz of this . I wanted to see these expressions on ur face. I know agar main bolta to suprise disclose kar deta aur tumhare yeh expressions miss kar deta.

She was just staring at Yuvraj Lovingly and was thnking she is so lucky to have Yuvi in his life. The boy who was bhai and spoil brat of the college today become so repsonsible and caring.

Suvi: Yuvraj tumne yeh sabh mere liye kiya. Tumhe pata ni aaj main kitni khush hoon. You are best husband in this world and my bestie too. She took Yuvi' hand in her hand and peck kiss on it.Tears started rolling in her eyes.

Yuvi: Topper yeh sabh maine tere liye iss liye kiya because u deserve it. Jo main tumhare iye abh tak nahi kiya main woh aaj karna chahta tha. I m so happy and glad u liked my surprise. Topper tu janati hai na Jo banda kabhi studies mein top ni kar payeya jiski zindagi ka koi aim nahi tha aaj woh banda Zindagi mein Top kar gaya becoz he has the topper of this world in his Lyf. His topper made him do all this and wtever he is today all because of Topper.

Both Yuvreen got emotional and just then suvi to lighten the mood cracked Joke on Yuvi.

Suvi: waise Yuvraj aaj tak kisne Cheetah ko rote hue dekha hai kya. Kisika to mujhe pata nahi But maine dekh hai. Suvi started smiling.

Yuvi was confused and then he realised Suvree is pulling his leg. Yuvi wiped his tears fats and said who is crying. Who told u cheetah cried and tumne kaise dekha aur kahan dekha.

Suvi took drop of tears on her finger thatw as aboutto fall from yuvi's eyes and told him yeh raha saboot that i saw cheetah can cry too. Both Yuvreen started laughing Loudly. JUst then Yuvreen spend their whole night talking , eating and romancing on the beach and Both wereenjoying these alone moments. But there was third one in between them who they ignored fully but in between a kick reminds them that he/she also there.

After some day

Yuvi was in hospital walking in the corridor. annie, naro, manu , rathie were also there. Suvreen was in delivery room. Yuvi was tensed but 4some made him calm. Doctor came and told them suvi gave birth to a Girl child. Yuv and gang shouted with Joy and just went indide to see baby and Suvi. Yuvraj thanked Suvreen for giving him so much happiness and pecked a kiss on suvi's forhead and baby's too. 4some congratulate them and just then dey started Fighting for name of baby. Annie as Yuvi's rakhie sister told everyone as she has the right to name baby as she is her bua. Anni said the baby will be called by the name Yuvreen. YUV from Yuvraj and reen from Suvreen.

Yuv+Reen=Yuvreen. All got happy and Yuvraj and Suvreen were happy looking at their angel Yuvreen sleeping. Now there were no sadness, hurdles, problems in Yuvi n suvi's life but just happiness all around and Yuvreen just doubles their happiness and their life becomes beautiful. Yuvraj and Suvreen become Unseparable becuase Their Yuvreen made them so.







Entry 4

Eternal YuvReen

Years passed by. They weren't together. He's old now and stay's at an old age home without her. He has only been left with one memory of her's. Her diary. He read her diary everyday, because it let him believe that he was close to her. Every entry in her diary, every memory and it's words were the most precious thing for him in the Whole world. He would do anything to protect it.
It was a fine Sunday morning and as usual, he was reading her diary.
Wohle story in Suvreen's POV.
24th March 2012
Dear Diary,
Aaj kuch hua jo mere saath pehle kabhi nahi hua. Magical sa, I met him for the first time. I was having butterflies in my stomach. Agar aaj Woh nahi hota toh main shayad zinda na hoti. Agar usne sahi time par aakar mujhe bachaya na hota toh na jane kya ho jata. Main toh mandir mein thi mujhe ata hi nahi chala kab mere dupatte mein aag lag gayi thi. Usne mujhe bacha liya. Par maine toh use thank bhi nahi kiya. Lekin Woh bhi meri tarah har subah mandir ata hai, main use kal thanks bol dungi. I hope Woh mujhe mil jaye.
25th Mar 2012
Dear Diary,
Kya gannuji!! Woh toh aaj mandir mein aya hi nahi. Par Woh har roz ata hai. Kahi Woh mujhse naraz toh nahi ki itna sab hua aur maine use thanks nai bola? Gannuji main use maafi maangna chahti hun ek baar Woh mujhe mil jaye. Sari confusion clear ho jayegi. Main kal mandir jaldi jaungi taki main use mill saku. Please please please meri ye wish puri kar do!!!
26th March 2012
Dear Diary,
Aaj main phir mandir gayi par Woh phirse nahi mila. Par mujhe pata chala Woh kyun nahi aya actually woh mujhe uss din bachate hue use chot aa gayi isiliye woh mandir nahi aa paata hai. Par panditji ne kaha hai woh kal aayega. I hope I don't miss this chance.
27th March 2012
Dear Diary,
I was leaving for the mandir but phir raaste mein itna traffic.. 9 baj chuke hain main late hogai. I ran towards the mandir only to see he had left. Maine panditji se pucha Woh ladka aaj aya nahi? He replied " Abhi abhi nikala hai dhundhogi toh mil jayega" I ran towards the direction he went. And finally yes I did it!!!woh mujhe mil gaya.
*SCENE*
G: Rukoo...
He turns.
B: Haan?
G: Woh main.
B: Tum itna bhaag kyun rahi thi? Sab thik hai na?
G: Main toh thikhun. Par lagata hai tum theek nahi the. Yad hai uss din tumne mujhe bachaya tha? Aur mujhe bachate bachate tumhe chot lag gayi. I wanted to say thank u. Mujhe bachane ke liye and sorry mere kaaran tumhe chot ayi hai.
B: Oh toh ye baat hai. Waise tum woh pehli ladki ho jisne saath mein thanku and sorry bola hoga. Aur rahi baat mere chot ki aur tumhe bachane ki toh. Woh toh main kisike liye bhi karta. Bhagwaan ke mandir mein kisi ko kuch nahi hone deta. Waise tumhara naam?
G: thanku.
B: Bada acha naam hai thanku.
G: thanku? aree nahi mera naam Suvreen aur tumhara?
B: Yuvraj.
G: Nice name.
B: thanks. Kal milte hai.
G: haann byee..
B: Bye.
He leaves.
*SCENE END*
Gannuji aaj main bahut khush hun. Meri wish poori ho gayi thanku!!!!
4th April 2012
Dear Diary,
Sab kehte hain main badal si gayi hun. Kya sach mein aisa hai? Mujhe pata nahi. Ek hafta ho gaya hai mujhe use mile hue. Yuvraj mera acha friend ban gaya hai. Usme kuch toh baat hai jo main uske taraf khichi chali ja rahi hun pata nai kya. Ho sakta hai Woh uski aankhein hain jisme doob jaane ka mann karta hai, ya woh uski million dollar smile. Use dekhna, uske saath rehna acha lagta hai. Kahin main use pya..?? Nahi aisa nahi hai. Woh bhi mujhe sirf ek acha dost hi manta hoga. Main uska vishwaas nahi tod sakti.
10th April 2012
Dear Diary,
Gannuji, Mujhe lagta hai aap sahi the mujhe use pyaar ho gaya hai. Ye baat mujhe aaj realize hui jab mandir mein hum saath pray kar rahe the aur maine sirf uske liye dua mangi. Aankhein kholte hi Woh mere saamne khada tha bhagwaan ke saamne haath jode aur uski achai mein main kho si gayi thi. Aur jab usne mere paas aakar mera haath pakad ke kaha ki main uski sabse achi dost thi aur who mujhe kabhi khona nahi chahta tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki woh mere liye kitna important hai. Aur uske bina mera jeena kitna mushkil.
Few months passed. They had become more good friends they started having lunch together and hanging out together and the best part was that their parents had no objections for their friendship. Both Yuvraj and Suvreen had jelled very nicely with each other's family. In fact they liked them so much that they wanted them to get married.
7th August 2012
Dear diary,
Aaj main bahut excited hoon. Yuvraj ka birthday hai aur main chahti hun ki main use duniya ka bestest birthday gift dun. Hum dost hi sahi par mujhe ki aitraaz nahi jab tak hum saath hai. Main uska gift sse aaj mandir mein hi dungi jahan hum sabse pehle mile the.
MANDIR:
Suvreen was very excited to meet Yuvraj. She was waiting for him and he just entered.
S: Kahan the tum? Kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi.
Y: Meri maa B'day ke din toh mujhe chod de.
S: Oh haan. Happy birthday!
Y: Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
S: Haan bolo?
Y: Pehle hath jod lete hain.
S: Sure.
They go near the idol and start praying. Suvreen opens her eyes to see Yuvraj.
S: Yuvraj tumhara gift.
Y: Mujhe ye nahi chahiye as a gift.
S: Toh kya chahiye tumhe?
Y: Tum.
S: What?
Y: Haan mujhe sirf tumhara saath chahiye. Main pyaar karta hun tumse. Bahut chahta hun tumhe tabse jab hum mile bhi nahi the. Har roz yahan aakar sirf tumhe dekhna chahta tha. Tumhe dekhe bina mera din adhura hota hai, tumse mile bagaer khali sa mehsus hota hai. Main humesha tumhare saath rehna chahta tha. Tumhare paas rehna chahta tha. Mujhe nahi pata ki tum mere baare mein kya sochti ho. Par main poore dil se tumhe pyaar karta hun. Tumhara chehra mere dil mein bas gaya hai, tumhari saason mein meri saasien ghul gayi hai aur sirf tumhara naam kehti hai. I love you Suvreen. I know maine galat time, galat jagah, galat din propose kiya hai par..
S: Tumne sahi time, sahi jagah aur sahi din par propose kiya hai. Maine bhi humesha se aisa hi chaha hai.
Mujhe toh humesha se aisa laga ki tum mujhe sirf apna dost maante ho. Par main galat thi. Pehle mandir main bhagwan se milne ati thi par ab tumse bi milne ane lagi thi. Maine toh apne pyaar ko dosti mein badal dene ki bahut koshish ki par mera dil woh toh kisi ki nai sunta. I love you too Yuvraj.
Y: Sachi?!
S: Muchi.
Yuvraj was so happy that he hugged Suvreen.
Y: Ye mere life ka bestest birthday gift hai.
S: Aur tum mere life ke bestest part ho.
*SCENE END*
Gannuji ye meri life ka best day hai. Main bahut khush hun. Yuvraj mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai aur main bhi. Yuvraj hi mere liye best life partner hai. Aaj jab mall mein hum uska bday celebrate karne ke liye ghum rahe the tab usne mere hathon mein haath daalkar chala ek pal ke liye mujhe apnese dur nahi hone diya. Pehle toh main sirf use pyaar kati thi par ab ye jaankar k Woh bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai ehsaas hi badal gayahai. Main use aur pyaar karne lagi hun aur marte dum tak karti rahungi.
It was a year since they were in a relationship and it was time to take a step forward but then there was a twist in the tale. SUVREEN.
17 June 2013
Dear Diary,
Aisa kyun ho raha hai mere saath. Meri himmat bhi nahi hai Yuvraj ko sach batane ki Woh se nahi payega. Woh mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai aur agar use pata chal gaya ki main.. woh zinda nahi rehpayega. Woh nahi reh payega agar use pata chala ki main uske saath sirf kuch hi din aur sakti hun. Mere paas zyada waqt nahi hai, mujhe cancer hai third stage. Main ye sach use aur nahi chupa sakti. Use aur dhoke mein nahi rakh sakti. Mujhe himmat dijiyega gannuji aaj main use sab sach bata dungi.
That day later on:
Suvreen had called up Yuvraj at her place to tell him everything. He comes.
Y: Suvreen aisi kya baat ho gai ki tumne mujhe itni jaldi bulaya. Sab thik toh haina aur ye tumhe kya ho gaya hai muh kyun latkakar baithi ho tumhari tabyat toh thik hai na?
S: Meri tabyat toh thik hai par mera dil kamzor ho gaya hai Yuvraj.
Y: Dil kamzor ye tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho.
S: Yuvraj mujhe.. mujhe..
Y: Tumhe kya?
S: Mujhe cancer hai 3rd stage. Mere paas ab aur zyaada waqt nahi hai.
Y: KYAA!!!!Tum mazak kar rahi ho na?
S: Nahi Yuvraj ye sach hai.
Yuvraj had a breakdown. He burst into tears and hugged Suvreen.
Y: Main tumhe apne se door nahi jaane dunga. India ke best doctor ke paas lekar jaunga India kya main tumhe world ke best doctor ke paas le jaunga. Main tumhe apne se alag nahi hone dunga.
S: Yuvraj aur kuch nahi ho sakta. Maine aur mumma puppa ne saare doctors se baat ki hai. Ab aur koi chance nahi hai.
Y: Tumne mujhe pehle kun nahi bataya.
With that he took out something from his pocket and gave it to her. Suvreen opened it.
S: Ye? Ye kitna sundar hai.
Y: Ye ring main tumhare liye laya tha.
S: Mere liye?
Y: Main aaj tumhe propose kare wala tha.
S: Propose?
Y: Will you marry me Suvreen?
S: Tumhe aisa nahi karna chaiye. Aur ab tum sab jaante bhi ho Yuvraj please aisa matt karo.
Y: Main jaanta hun aur isiliye propose kar raha hun. Main chata hun ki ab tumhare paas jitna bhi waqt hai Woh tum sirf meri hokar bitao.
S: Par main ye faisla.. Ye sahi nahi hai Yuvraj. Main nahi chahti ke mere jaane ke baad tum bandhe raho. Tumhe apni zindagi bitani hogi khushi khushi.
Y: Tumhe meri kasam Suvreen. Agar tum chahti ho ki main khush rahu toh sirf yehi ek tareek hai mujhe khush rakhne ka.
S: Yuvraj please don't do this.
Y: Main nahi jaa raha kahi bhi jab tak tum mere sawal ka jawaab nahi deti ho.
S: You are impossible.
She hugs Yuvraj. He hugs her back.Yuvraj slips the ring on to her finger. And they hug again. Suddenly Yuvraj realizes that Suvreen wasn't responding to the hug. He sees that suvreen was not in her senses he shouts for help and Suvreen's parents come they call the ambulance and go to the hospital.
At the hospital Suvreen was in the room and yuvraj and both the families were standing outside.
The doctor came out.
Y: Doctor sab thik toh hai na?
Dr: Sorry par ab patient ke paas ek hafte se zaada waqt nahi hai.
That was it to make everyone having a breakdown again.
Both the families and Yuvraj couldn't see Suvreen in such a condition so they decided to get her back home. Suvreen returned home the next day and Yuvraj was living with her every single moment. He never went away from her. They got married but in a very simple way. Yuvraj took care of Suvreen, made everything to keep her happy but fate wasn't on their side. Soon Suvreen became more weak. And the day had come when Suvreen left Yuvraj and everyone else alone. She left Yuvraj alone suffering and going through all the pain. After Suvreen left him. Yuvraj was all shy and shattered he didn't speak to anyone and started living alone.
The last entry by Suvreen in her diary:
26th June 2013
Dear Diary,
I'm really sad main ja rahi hun. Yuvraj ko akela chodkar, mumma puppa ko akela chodkar sab ko akela chodkar. Yuvraj ne aisa kya galat kiya jo ise itna sab bhugatna padega. I love him very much aur aaj main ye diary use dene wali hun taaki jabhi bhi use meri yaad aye Woh isse khol kar padhle. Usse wohh saari iss diary ko padh kar mil jaye jo main use nahi de sakti. Ab toh main kuch zaada likh bhi nahi sakti meri body mera saath nahi degi. Iss page par gire har uss asun par Yuvraj ka naam hai. Yuvraj I love you very much.
Forever and always
YUVREEN WILL BE ETERNAL!!
I LOVE YOU UNCONDITIONALLY YUVRAJ.
PRESENT DAY:
30 years passed by still Yuvraj read her diary everyday. This was the last entry he ever read. With that Yuvraj closed her diary with a smile on his face which was indeed very painful.
Suvreen I love you too. These were the last words which came out of Yuvraj's mouth and remembering Suvreen and being happy that he'll be with her in heaven he died.




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All the best to both the writers.
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Really tough to choose.Both are brilliant..
but I'll go with 4..as it made me quite emotional..😭
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entry 4 😊

good luck to all writers 😊
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Defo 4 really made me cry
Good luck to both the writers
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I have a gut feeling that eternel yuvreen is inspired by the movie
A WALK TO REMEMBER
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