Meethi Naseeb SamReen FF : New Dancing Show ? | Ch.3 on pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice naz...loved it.. please do continue.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

Samreen???😲😃ok thts gr😃😃t...naz di...u r evil😛😆...why a cliffhanger😡

ok do continue soon...thnx for the pm

you dont like samreen kiyaa????😆😆
thanks😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanaya_shanu

hey dear

Samar suvi ss 😳
so excited to read further...update next soon😃😃

thank you soo much dearEmbarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .nightqueen

Great one

Do write more cutie

thank you sumi😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

@Naz yaar superaaa jhakkas wala update and this siggie was awesome

thank youu soo much snehal😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Jenelle--

very nice naz...loved it.. please do continue.👏

thank you soo much jen😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Before I start with the Second Chapter of my FF, I wanted to say that I've updated the first post on first page. Have added new siggies and character sketch =)

______________________________________________Chapter 2: Phir Milenge Chalte Chalte

In the party after Suvreen left, a man comes to Samar and asks him to come to a marriage to dance and sing there.

Samar gets shocked and asks him: Are you serious?

The man says: Yes, I'm Khurana. Nice to meet you. I liked it how you singed and danced.

Samar gets happy and says: Thank you soo much.

Khurana tells him when and where the marriage is. And he says that he was searching for a great dancer and singer. Now he found the person which he was searching for.

And then Khurana goes. Samar gets very happy and jumps.!

He wants to go home and tell everybody about it.

AFTER 1 MONTH!!

Samar gets ready for the marriage. He wears a black suit. After 30 minutes, he arrives at the marriage. He goes in and sees a lot of people there. He gets nervous. The man, (Khurana) who invited him to the marriage sees Samar and asks him to sit. He sits. After sometime, the bride comes with a girl. (The girl is Suvreen) Samar first hasn't realized that it's the girl who danced with him but then he looks at her again then he realized her. He recalls the dance moment with Suvreen. Suvreen wears a blue and purple saree. He gets confused why is she here? Did she follow me? He gets happy to see her after so many days. He doesn't believe it. Suvreen didn't see him. After sometime, a man stands up and asks Samar to dance and sing. Samar stands up and gets nervous and then he leaves. Everybody gets shocked. But then the song : Dilliwali Girlfriend is playing.

(O what a look, what a grace, Tenu hi karaan main chase, What a naksh, what a nain, Dil tera ho gaya fan, What a smile, what a style, Lut'ti neendo ki ye file, Kabhi soft, kabhi rude, Killer tera attitude)

Samar turns around and sings the song. While he sings, he shows Suvreen. Suvreen gets shocked and nervous.

Samar sings: Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke, Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke (x2)

Samar holds Suvreens hand and starts dancing with her.

Suvreen sings: O teri ankh da ishaara mujhe fraud lage, Tu toh Majnu aawaara by God lage

Samar: O kasme waade khake, Apni pocket money bacha ke, Aaya tere liye paise waise jod jaad ke..

Samar & Suvreen: Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke, Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke, Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke, Aaya Dilli wali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

The song turns off. Suvreen is on Samar's arms. They both look at each other for sometime. Everybody starts clapping. Suvreen gets shy and leaves. Suvreen turns around and looks at Samar and smiles. Samar looks at her too and smile too. Suvreen goes to the bride.

Khurana who invited Samar says: Thank you so much Samar. Your dance was just amazing. Please don't stop dancing and singing. You have a super talent.

The man asks Suvreen to come. She comes. The man says to Samar: She is my daughter!

Edited by Naz_YuvReen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing!!!
loved the cs in the beginning!
great work Naz!
ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good..do continue naz.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow what an awesome start

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