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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guyz !! dis is my 1st time 4 riting a yuvreen os !!!
it is dedicated 2 bhavnah !!!!plzz coment or lik !!!! i hope u lik it !! it might b a bit bakwas !!!!

Yuvi , alisha ,suvreen and baby had gone 4 a party . suvi waz bord so she left earlier. While coming back yuvi's laila stopd wrking !!!!

So , dey had 2 walk and go back. Sudenly sum people started to tease alisha and baby.

u kno wat our yuvi is lik !!! he started 2 fight wid them .

But there were many people . yuvi got hurt very badly !!!
sumbody shovd a knif in his stomach !!!!

alisha and baby wer veri scard !!!!
alisha tried 2 call ambulance but der was no network !!!!
by chance zorro waz pasing from dere . he saw dem and put yuvi in zorro's car and went 2 d hospital.
meanwhile zorro cald suvreen and told her everything .
she was devastated.her mobile fell 4rm her hand.
she rushd 2 d hospital.
der she saw all of dem standing near yuvi .

she quicly ran to him and strted crying .😭
she said " NOOO!!! yuvraj wak up !!!!!!
" i luv u yuvraj "!!!!
all wer shockd 2 hear her !!!!!
she placd her head on his chest and went on crying.
sudenly she felt someone's arm touching her shoulder. yuvraj had woken up !!!!
yuvi opend his eyez and said " topper ???"
suvreen lukd at him very intensely .

"mujhe tujhse kuch kehna hai ." yuvi said.

"kya?"she askd .

" i luv u topper !!!"
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pheww !!! finally its ovr !!! i hop u like it !!! its my 1st time !!! jute chapal mat marna !!!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice work...and keep the good work going never give up,..I too stared this way..!! continue it and ya..coming to the OS story line..I just hope this is what happens in the show..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haaa u shud haf written more
but yup gud things cum in small packages so this was super khul!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

nice work...and keep the good work going never give up,..I too stared this way..!! continue it and ya..coming to the OS story line..I just hope this is what happens in the show..!!

thnk u sooo much i hop u likd it !!!!
well i 'll not b continuing it sry !!!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janhavirox

thnk u sooo much i hop u likd it !!!!
well i 'll not b continuing it sry !!!😕


yes I know ...i meant u can continue writing more such OS abd Shor Stories or Fan Fiction..!!! it would be great..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot for the dedication 😳 so sweet of u dear 😊

your os is great dear 👍🏼... hope that's what happen in the show

dear u should continue to write... u r good at it 😉

again thanks a lot ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thats realy good stright to the point no draginggg😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud one...do keep writing more writings
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope d same happen in d showw too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hum tumpe jute chappal nahi, roses aur flowers phekege!!
Its amazing! Do continue soon!! 👍🏼 👏

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