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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yuvraj -Yuvrani

Hey, guys this is my first work ever posted in india forums.so please cooperate and tell how it is.

I haven't written any dialogues coz I don't know much how to write them!!

Prologue

The story contains same character as in the story .with some additional characters:

( you'll come to know details about them as the story progresses)

Yuvi's dad

Yuvi's mum

Yuvi's sister

The story is about how suvi learns about yuvraj's true feeling for her n yuvraj proposes suvi in a grand way..!! ;-)

There are still differences btw yuvreen as they are not talking 'but slowly the differences are disappearing as now suvi is appreciating yuvi's help in the fashion show. And now'. Yuvi after rathi's lecture, have realized dat he has always been in love with his topper!


so,here is the first part...

Part 1

COLLEGE

Suvi searches for yuvraj in the college but when R.C tells her about vivaan's b'day n the remorse associated with the day in vivaan's life, she wants to cheer up the b'day boy n so she goes to d market to buy a gift for him.

Meanwhile yuvraj n r.c. meets each other in the college n other gang members too joins them (ani, rathi, naro, mannu, zoro). R.C. acknowledges cheetah's courage n courtesy to help suvi n indirectly him in the fashion show. Yuvraj receives a call from suvi's number but on listening to the caller's voice he frowns in anger'

ROAD TO MARKET

''Suvi was on her way to the market but was stopped by some lofty men carrying hockey n all sort of stuff used in street fights...Suvi is hell shocked to see two men stepping out from the jeep. One of them was ever irritating Gyanesh n the other one was the main goon whom yuvi n suvi had already encountered before (remember during election campaigns the one who was carrying a gun n was hit by yuvraj in college when he pushed suvi n then aneesh stopped them from fighting).gyanesh had made suvi a captive, grabbed her phone n had called Yuvraj. Gyanesh called yuvi to that place only if he wanted to see suvi alive'he did so because he wanted to take revenge for all his past failures in confronting Yuvraj'

COLLEGE

Yuvraj on listening to gyanesh's words yelled his name in full anger n headed towards his laila.other gang members along with r.c. understood that something was wrong n they followed yuvraj in r.c.'s car.

ROAD TO MARKET

Everyone was shocked to see the situation there'

I know it's not something great but plz do read n comment..!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Amazing start!!
Continue soon :) Good job 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for d encouragement...!!!😃
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do continue amazing..!👏
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Part 2

Suvi was made to sit on her knees in the middle of the road, her legs n hands tied with the rope n a man standing next to her pointing a gun on her head.

Yuvraj immediately jumped out of his jeep n rushed towards suvreen. He saw suvreen crying 😭n looking up to him for some hope. Hope that her cheetah will save her as he has always been doing in all her difficult times. Meanwhile the horrid evil souls gyanesh n the other head of the goons came out of the thin air 😲n behind them stood their men who had already started encircling yuvreen in a big circle...

A small smile played on gyanesh's lips 😃as he thought of defeating the cheetah n in the same shot he can take the revenge of suvi's rejection for him. The gang members were too been caught by the other goons and they were helpless n dejected from the thought that now they can't help yuvi in his fight..

Yuvi was feeling pathetic to see suvreen in this condition but he made a thought clear in his mind that he's gonna rescue his topper from all this men n from all these pains. Without wasting any time he sprinted towards gyanesh n in fractions of seconds hit him hard on his face n then punched hard in the stomach of the main goon. Both of them were relocated from their positions due to intensity of the blow. On learning what happened the main goon in anger announced that only he, gyanesh n yuvraj will fight, no other person should interfere n if yuvi wins then he can take back suvi or else both of them will be killed. He thought that two of them can defeat the cheetah but no one still knew how much the cheetah loves his topper n what all he can do to save her..to bring her back in his life..!!!😃

Hope all you happening guys up there like it!

All constructive criticism are acknowledged...

Edited by ainaboss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thriller kind of love story huh??...nice...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks...feel gud that u guys like it!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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most welcome...do update soon ya...aina ryte?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the update is late coz my exams are going on.will be able to update the next part in the end of the month😔...till then bear wid dis very, very ...small update!!

Part 3

Entry of new characters

He tackles both of them with great valor n ultimately both gyanesh n the main goon were lying in the ground all profusely bleeding. Yuvraj too have got cuts in his hands n face, blood was coming out from his wounds but he hurried towards suvreen n untied the ropes. They hugged each other to feel that the other still existed, they were crying on remembering how the other was suffering all this time. They broke the hug n looked towards each other with blurred vision. Yuvi wiped away his as well as suvi's tears n then they shared a long eyelock until they heard the blow of the horn..

The gang rejoiced on seeing yuvi defeating gyanesh n the main goon, they too were released as the other goons surrendered on their master's defeat. They turned to their right when they heard a horn. They saw yuvraj's cousin (V-spot cafe' manager), and a lady in her fifties all dressed in heavy sari n complimenting jewelries , stepping out of the car. Yuvraj stood dumbstruck on seeing them. suvi was turning her head like tennis ball from yuvi's face to the women heading slowly towards yuvi.

Yuvraj too headed towards the two advancing figures. His cousin had a content smile on his face while the lady had tears brimming in her eyes..yuvraj on reaching right in front of her again had new tears forming in his eyes and he in a chocked voice uttered MAA!!!

Edited by ainaboss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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O teri...Yuvraj ki mumma ki entry toh show mein bhi nahi hui...

nice one !!

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