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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmalya

This update was just aussum i really loved it a lot so romantic atleast they kissed for the first time 😃. I just hope they may also kiss in the show😍. You write very well yaar i am just waiting for your next update plz update soon.



hey thnx a lot for z comment 😉
thx 4 z compliment 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimolina

How romantic
Just looovvveeedd it
I must have read tis ss more than 5 times
eagerly waitin 4 d next update


hey thnx 4 loving z story dear😊
Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please PM me?
I won't be ableto comment this
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-vacations- but I will catch up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
before i would like to thanx all my readers who supported me a lot.
i dedicate zis update to my best buddy sahashrabdi22 (aka princess 4 me) and all those who encouraged me since z start of zis ss 😊 love u all ❤️

Part 13

We were still hugging each other not willing to let go. I glanced at my watch it was 10:45 pm. I was suddenly feeling concerned if her parents will find out that she's out.

"suvreen I think we must leave! It's late and I must drop u home. I don't want u to have problems."

"it's ok yuvraj! Ok let's go zen!"

She sighed I knew zat she was not willing to leave me I held her hand to reassure her zat am wiz her. We walked hands in hands till z jeep. She took her seat in the passenger side and I took mine, I again get hold of her hand and put in on the speed gear. She looked at me and I smiled lovingly at her, she smiled back. Within 10 minutes we reached at her place zat is 2 lanes before.

"love we reached but am not willing to let u walk alone as it's really late. Let us walk till ur house. Or else I'll b worried if I let u go on ur own."

"yuvraj it's ok I can go. Don't worry! I'll call u wen I reach!"

"no suvreen am not letting u go alone! Either let me walk wiz u to ur house! Or I'll pick up in my arms and walk down to ur house!"

"no u wouldn't dare do that now!"

"oh yes I can! U haven't seen my dare! Am a cheetah and I do whatever I say!"

I gave her my trade mark smirk, she seemed to be debating wiz herself, then I asked her

"u wanna go or I carry u! either ways will be fun 4 me!"

She was still debating with herself I didn't lose time and grabbed the opportunity I took her in my arms




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(well imagine zey r on the road) (pic credit facebook ^_^)

"yuvraj wat r u doing put me down. plz!"

"no I asked u 2 decide n u didn't! I personally think it's nice like this! Don't u fink love?

I gave her my million dollar smile, she looked at me lovingly, she wounded her arms around my neck and hid her face in the crook of my neck, I could feel her breath.

"love u know ur breath is tickling me."

She immediately straighten her face and looked away but I could see her cheeks having a red color shade.

"hey it's not fair! I didn't told u to remove ur face from zer! Put ur face back zer now!"

She silently did wat I told her, I again smiled.

"suvreen! U know I never thought we'll b zat close! Me carrying u in my arms, u n me in love wiz each other, and u n me shared a kiss! Wow I'm loving every moment we are sharing together! It's just amazing! Wat say love?

"hmm"

"oh wat hap r u sleepy?"

"no yuvraj am just think about wat ur saying! Ya me 2 am enjoying every moments of it. It wud b memories zat I'll carry for ever."

"why memories? Am not letting u go suvreen n ur talking about memories! We still have a long way ahead to go. U know I have a song in my mind rite now and I think am gonna sing it now as we r together!"

kaise mujhe tum mil gayi,
kismat pe ayi na yakeen,
utar aye jheel mein,
jaise chand utarta hai kabhi,
haule haule dheere se
Gunguni dhoop ki tarah se
Tarannum mein tum
Choo ke mujhe guzri ho yoon
Dekho tumhein ya mein sunoon
Tum ho sookun tum ho junoo
Kyun pehle na ayee tum
Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi

(song link: http://youtu.be/4lCIgfr-EaA)

I was singing wen suddenly I felt something falling on my neck, zen I felt her shaking in my arms, I knew she was crying, I immediately put her down, I put both my hands on her cheeks and by using my thumbs I removed the tears and asked her softly

"hey love! Y r u crying? Did I do something wrong?"

Suddenly she hugged me tight and began to sob, and said in a groggy voice

"yuvraj I love u a lot. Don't ever leave me plz. forgive me If even I do a mistake or we have a fight but never leave me"

With that she hugged me more tightly, I was surprised with the sudden change of mood I now understood zat my song made her sad.

"hey hey love am never gonna leave u ok! I love u way too much 2 ever leave u! U know i sang zat song for u as zat's what u make me feel love! Remove the thought zat am leaving u alri8! Cheer up now!"

But she continued on sobbing I knew I had to stop her I broke the hug and took my thumb and tilted her chin up so that she'll look me into my eyes, wiz my other hand I encircled her waist and pulled her close to me. I looked at her lips and again in her eyes I touched her lips wiz mine. I tried to deepen the kiss but she didn't let me. I tried to open her mouth but she didn't after a few seconds I felt her respond to my kiss. we kissed till we were out of breath . I looked at her her eyes were still shut and she was breathing heavily I couldn't resist I took a breathtaking kiss from her again. We were still catching our breath wen I told her

"love I fink I should drop u home quickly or else I'll lose my mind and kiss u senseless on the streets!"

She blushed again, I took her in my arms and brought her to her house. I let her get down. I looked at her

Goodnight love! Sleep tight and dream of me ok! I'll pick u up same time okii! B punctual and yes I love u loads okii"

"ok! U 2 I wish u z same! N I love u too yuvi"

I looked at her and quickly peck her lips and went away.

guys here the update hope it's long enuf and ok types.😊

p.s like and comment okii n ignore grammatical mistakes

p.p.s: school still going on so updates wud b irregular now



Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@bhavnah--if this story gets aired on tv, this is surely gonna send the whole tellywood on fire😳😆😆 and m gonna be the first one to look at this video more than a 100 times in a day!😛

awesome romance! just as i want between them on tv 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aksrajvanshi

@bhavnah--if this story gets aired on tv, this is surely gonna send the whole tellywood on fire😳😆😆 and m gonna be the first one to look at this video more than a 100 times in a day!😛


awesome romance! just as i want between them on tv 👏


Aww really thnx dear. I loved ur compliment ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope tis happens in reality
as I told u dat ur work is just excelent
Can imagine d whole scene
n d song which uv choose 2 sing reali touched mah heart
Eagerli waitiin 4 ur next update
Plz Do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah wah wah...
u really touchd my heart...
as aksrajvanshi said d tv will b on fire if dis happns...
dis was amazin one...
i wish to c them lyk dis...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww, what an update!
loved it 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
very romantic update .loved it.

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