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Geetha...awesome one as usual... I have lost count on the word 'awesome' actually..😆 So many works starting to flow into this forum.. Its wonderful! And yeah, Congo for the promotion! 😎

Goldie Geetha Ma🤗 congrats for golden color..

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan

Nice twist dear...I hope story ussi direction me jaye..Jo me soch rahu hu...😃

Thank you Prachi! 😃. Story direction will be clear soon!! 😳

Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Geetha...awesome one as usual... I have lost count on the word 'awesome' actually..😆So many works starting to flow into this forum.. Its wonderful! And yeah, Congo for the promotion!😎

Thank you. Yes, this forum is becoming active now, though the show is junk. Good that we got a place to post our works!! 😆. Shall update really soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: riti4u

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Coming to update.. Well I didnt expect Dritrashtra to make this move... quite surprise... what caught my attention was ur detail to events of journey which Karna and Padmavathy undertook.. 😊.. And this Suyodhan was concerned about Karna's promise to his wife.. 😳

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Thank you Ritima. 🤗
Thank you for the comment too... They are yet to make the journey. Only preparations still going on. Journey will come up in next chapter!! Which I shall update soon!! 😳

So Dhrit does not want war!😲 Now this was quite unexpected. And i am glad Suyodhana is portrayed well in your story and i am loving it. Awesome!👏 Waiting to know what happens next.
And congrats for becoming goldie dear!🥳

Just completed parts two and three. Very beautifully written. I think you should take classes for me on how to write dialogues. That is an ART. I am loving this imagination of MB ending. Though I cannot wait to see how does this end, take your time and write.😊 And I cannot say how beautifully you handled the KaKri equation. Though today I am not much of a Krishna admirer, I know that KaKri respected each other a lot. That unseen bond has got a new colour now. Hope you write something on their friendship also. KaKri definitely has a different flavour in your words.😊

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

<font color="#ff00ff">oh! good twist.. drith don't want war..</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">so nice as usual</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">bheeshma never missed a chance to praise HIS grandsons...🤔</font>

Thank you Dhi... 😃.

Originally posted by: ramya06

So Dhrit does not want war!😲 Now this was quite unexpected. And i am glad Suyodhana is portrayed well in your story and i am loving it. Awesome!👏 Waiting to know what happens next.
And congrats for becoming goldie dear!🥳

Thank you for both!! And yes, Suyodhana has to be presented well, since it is primarily from Vasusena's pov.
Shall update soon. 😊