SS ::Karna in Kaliyug,Part 2 Updated 13/12/15

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Prologue


Karna was feeling completely bored in heaven.Its a long time, he is staying in heaven without any work.Now, this excessive comfort getting on his nerves.Vrushali noticed her husband's bad mood.

Vrushali- Why are you so upset Arya??? What happened??

Karna- I am feeling bored in heaven.Everyday, we follow same routine, no work, no tension, only comfort.Its really irritating here.

Vrushali- So, What you want to do Arya??

Karna- I seriously need a change,I want to travel.

Vrushali- Travel?? But where you want to travel?in hell??

Karna- I want to go on earth.

Vrushali- what???

Voice- Excellent idea Radheya.

Karna & Vrushali heard a voice from behind. They both turned back & saw Lord Krishna was standing there .They both did the pranam.

Karna- Lord, I want to go to earth & you are supporting me??

Lord Krishna- Yes, Radheya, I am supporting you.You are feeling restless here in heaven.Why don't you go & visit AngaDesh again?

Vrushali- But Lord, Its Kaliyug in earth.Its not a safe time to go & visit their.

Lord Krishna- Your husband is the best warrior of all times.He can manage any situation.You don't worry.Radheya, I am giving you one month time.Go on Earth, & enjoy your time their.

Karna ( in a happy tone)- Thanks Lord.

Vrushali ( slightly upset)- But times changed Arya..So, how you will understand the language in earth?& no body will able to see you.You will feel lonely.

Lord Krishna( with a smile)- I am giving you blessing, every people will see you in Earth, & you will also speak & understand their language for one month.

Karna felt very happy after hearing this. This way, he can interact with people.He will now experience the changes.He thanked Lord Krishna again.But Vrushali was upset.

Vrushali ( in a upset tone)- What new leela you are starting Lord???



Main Characters


Vasusena Karna-He is one of the central character in The Mahabharata, from ancient India. He was the King of Anga & great warrior & Greatest Danveer of all times.


Tania Banerjee-28 years old, an IAS trainee Officer, now posted in Bhagalpur District in Bihar.Belongs to a lower-middle class family, she is the only child of her parents. Confident,honest, liberal minded, but very witty & sarcastic & full of pride.Many people dislikes her because of her attitude.She is a feminist & hates men.


Author's Note

After writing a write up on Karna, now i am writing a short story on Karna.First of all, this is completely a work of fiction.No intention to insult any mythological character. All views are mine.Its mainly a social fiction.Dont expect any love story.I imagined Aham Sharma as Karna. You can imagine anyone.


All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.








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Posted: 9 years ago
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So radheyajee is coming to earth... ..usse angadesh nehi yaar bangadeah bejo pls..Im waiting for him there... 😛 😳 😆

Very nice concept.. 👍🏼 looking for the next part... 😳
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INDEX


Part 1- Page 4

Part 2- Page 6
Edited by sania_58 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Madhu ppls pls pls write Karnas encounter with Sid tiwary 😆
on a serious note very interesting!
All d bst!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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on a friendly note use NOCOPY code on first post! I wont really be shocked to see if some FB page copies it as a folkfore again😳
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Really a nice and unique concept! 👏 Waiting for it eagerly.
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Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

on a friendly note use NOCOPY code on first post! I wont really be shocked to see if some FB page copies it as a folkfore again😳


What?! Someone copies such stories on fb? 😲 Omg! Then i think i too must use no copy for both my stories related to mb.Thanks for this info.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Story.😊
Characters Sketch was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Originally posted by: Nandita_Siddian

So radheyajee is coming to earth... ..usse angadesh nehi yaar bangadeah bejo pls..Im waiting for him there... 😛 😳 😆

Very nice concept.. 👍🏼 looking for the next part... 😳



Yes, Radheya is coming to earth to meet all of us.
Bangladesh??? Are you a Bengali Nandita???
I am also a Bengali.
Anyway, Thanks for liking the concept.
Will update the next part soon.
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Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

Madhu ppls pls pls write Karnas encounter with Sid tiwary 😆
on a serious note very interesting!
All d bst!



Sansi, encounter with Sid T??? If its happen that it will be the most violent encounter.😉
Thanks for ur good wish & thanks for liking the concept.

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