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Posted: 10 years ago
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I started this story on Mahabharat Forum but now I feel its better to shift it here hence this show is currently on air and so will get motivated to write here.

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That was a peaceful morning , the village seemed awaken with chirping of birds , and got busy with day to day routine , although it was a village but that was a very prosperous village because near to the village there was a very prosperous town Champa although belongs to Anga but Champa was ruled by Magadh king Jarasandha , most mighty king of eastern region of Aryavart who renamed Champa as Malini so as a result the village too got the fruit of the prosperity. the rivar Champa too used to flow by river's side so that made the village blessed with greenery , village dwellers were quite happy , there was no grievance, they used to spend a peaceful life. The Village was north western boundary of Anga , there was a forest that marks border between the Anga kingdom and Kurupradesh. The forest was quite peaceful where the part is adjoined with the village , no wild animals used to roam in that part so the part was known quite safe.
Few times after the Sun rises two boys from village entered into the forest, One of them was around 13 other one is around 9-10 , the elder one had an extremely handsome appearance , his complexion was bright as sunlight , he was quite tall and well built for his age , his features are very sharp as a cursed demigod , his big eyes were shining and intense , depth of which was like ocean , his hairs were long upto neck , wavy and shining , it seemed the boy might be a prince from kingdom of heaven and forgot his path and ended up being here. The boy was carrying a middle sized bow on his shoulder, the bow was silver in colour and was quite graceful to look at which generally royal people does use. the boy also had a quiver tied on his back full of shining sharp arrows, all over the adorable boy looked like standing in verge of turning into a handsome warrior who can win heart of Aryavart. Other boy was not so attractive in look , he was darkish , his hairs were short , and he was quite thin , he looked like any other normal village boy. He seemed to be quite worried when other boy was aiming his target towards a far away banyan tree.
"Basu bhaiya" younger boy addressed the elder one. Being interrupted Basu bhaiya got disturbed
"Shon i told you not to distract me while am concentrating on my target, why don't you listen?"
"bhaiya i am scared , if mother comes to know about you lied to her about your archery practice she will be angry and if she says this to father? you know father asked you not to touch bow, if they come to know they will punish you but before that mother will beat me for helping you, you know na you are mother's favourite" Shon pouted
"don't worry my little brother, your Basu bhaiya is here to protect you" Basu caressed Shon's face, "until you let them know, none will ever know about our secret adventure , smiles Basu that makes his face looking more shining
"but bhaiya why you have to lie to ma , you remember what does gurudev say , lying is wrong" Shon continued panicking
"I know Shon but i am helpless, Radhama will never let me practice archery again if she comes to know and if pitaji knows he will again start reminding me charioteer's son can't practice archery like kshatriya but never answers why so?" Basu's face becomes grave. "thanks to Suryanarayan that pitaji is now in Hastinapur , driving chariot of king Dhritarastra, if he was here i would have never got the permission of going to Champanagari and buying this beautiful bow, you know how much effort i had to do to earn the mohar to buy this" Basu sighs.
In champa nagari a festival had begin as King Jarasandha reached to spend time there , Basu had to convince Radhama to get permission to go there and for that he had to give up all his adventurist activities for atleast 2-3 days which was not less than a punishment for him , then he had to take job under King's commander and also had to serve the rich merchants and he also had shown stunts in festival in order to earn required gold coin to buy his desired bow and arrows to satisfy his desire for archery, and now too he had to lie to mother to come here for practicing archery , that was not an easy task for this young boy , but his dream compels him. "now let's not waste time , let's go to the big rock , aiming will be easier from there " Basu pulls shon's hand.
"why you have to be so adventurist Basu bhaiya?" Shon nagged.
"why you have to be so scared my brother?" Basu sighs, he doesn't know why his brother can be so frightened and so different from him?"i have promised you to buy a new kanduk (ball) to you didn't i? now come with me"Basu dragged shon , he everytime had to bribe his scared brother to keep his secret
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗Thanks for bringing this beautiful story here
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a beauriful beginning, RoseFairy. Please continue. The two boys are really cute. 😳
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This is a very nice story... 👏 waiting for the next part... 😳
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Hi Aru

Nice to see you here

Please continue this story here
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Aru my darling🤗Thanks for bringing Garmagaram BaJi here I love it sooo much
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After reaching the large rock Basu aimed at the farthest Banyan tree that is seen from there and released his arrow, the arrow hit the target at once, Basu's face got brightened with smile of satisfaction , Shon smiled proudly , although he is scared of his brother's activities but he is at a time quite proud of his elder brother. No one can have a brother as Basu bhaiya he believes.
Suddenly a cry in child's voice wiped away their smile, from quite a distance the cry was coming , both the boys got tensed

"did i hurt someone?" Basu was frightened, "but how is that possible, i saw my arrow had hit the target" he was confused

"bhaiya, from where did a child come in this forest? Basu bhaiya i heard in forests ghosts do live those who got killed by wild animals. bhaiya let's go back" Shon was scared as ever

"stop it Shon , all time getting scared of nothing, let's go i have to check the matter" Basu proceeded so Shon had to follow , he didn't dare to go back alone

Following the cry they went some deeper and found a boy sitting on earth , wearing a saffron cloth which generally a forest dweller uses to wear, Basu advanced to watch the child carefully
The boy was not more than 5 years of age, he has a dusky complexion , his hairs are wavy and almost curly , having two big brown eyes the child looks extremely cute , unlike other forest dweller children this boy doesn't look skinny rather a healthy one , it seemed the boy is not suitable to be in midst of forest , they can easily imagine the boy in king jarasandha's palace as this would be more suitable place for him, the adorable child drew both of Basu and Shon's attention but for Shon it seemed that there is a certain similarity in Basu bhaiya and the child
Basu leaned forward and found the boy's knees are bleeding , there were some stones nearby so Basu understood the boy must have stumbled on those stones and got hurt , it was bleeding quite a lot that made Basu tensed, no wonder why the child is crying so much.

But he had to wonder when he figured out what the child was saying in between his sob
"my bow...uhunhun...my bow"

now Basu noticed a little broken bow in hand of the child, the bow was made of branch of tree and it must be broken due to child's falling

Basu wondered , the child's saffron cloth is turning into red due to bleeding but he has no attention in that , neither he is being scared of the blood color, in the age of child if Shon would accidentally had cut his finger and sees only a drop of blood , he used to scream in fear
but all this boy's concentration was towards the toy bow only, the cry was not out of pain from injury but out of sadness of losing the bow

"he must be a kshatriya child" thought Basu

"who are you?" asked Shon to the child

child looked at two boys standing near him, he didn't get frightened seeing them , but didn't answer to Shon too again he concentrated to his bow , trying to repair it. Basu got amused to see the boy's love for his bow , something similar to him

"Basu bhaiya, why isn't he answering , he doesmn't know his name or what?" Shon was still not convinced it was actually a kid and not any ghost

"Shon you can ask all these later ,we need to stop his bleeding first , uproot some grass right now , till then i try to converse with him"
Shon left to obey bhaiya's order although he was not happy the child didn't answer him.

Basu knelled down near the child and pulled his legs to see how grave the injury was, as soon as the child notices the bow on Basu's shoulder , he stopped sobbing and his white pearl like teeth shined with an innocent smile , that made the child looking heavenly

"bow , big bow" the child held his hand out to touch the bow making Basu stunned again, as soon as the kid saw the bow he forgot his pain? what a strange child he is

the child tried to pull the bow , Basu tried to stop him, the bow was double of his size.

"no Balak , this is very big, you can't lift it" Basu was sure the child will be suppressed under weight of the bow

but the child started crying again "give me the bow Basu bhaiya " that startled Basu , the boy listened to Shon calling him and he at once adopted that? the child is quite intelligent Basu understood,
he tried to stop him again

"balak see this bow is soo huge, you can't hold it"

but the child continued sobbing and Basu couldn't watch it anymore, he doesn't know he was desperately wanting to see the innocent smile again, he gently handed the bow to the boy, thinking if that could make him stop crying for sometime he will be able to treat the wound
Basu was sure the child can't lift it alone so he was holding the bow himself too but to his surprise the child managed to wield the bow

"Basu bhaiya , arrow" , the boy had pointed out to the quiver of Basu before Basu's surprising state could end
but this time he didn't try to stop the child, he couldn't let the sob begin again, he gave the boy one of his shining arrow and child aimed at a nearby stone

"you broke my bow, so now i will break you" child released the arrow and arrow hit the stone, althoough the stone didn't broke but that was enough to make Basu sure about the boy's archery talent,
"the child is gifted for sure" thinks Basu, the way he too is gifted with his armor and earrings

the child started giggling as if nothing can give more pleasure to him, Basu was mesmerized to see the angel like child's giggling , Shon's voice made him conscious

"Basu bhaiya when i went only his legs were bleeding, how come now his hands are bleeding too?" Shon was confused like anything

horrified Basu found his bow's strings had cut the soft skin of child's palm and now his upper garment too is becoming red with blood, although the child was not caring that too

"hey Suryanarayan, why did i give the bow to him" Basu blamed himself and snatched the bow away from the child and quickly picked him up

"Shon we can't treat him here, we have to take him home, now only Radhama can take his care"
Basu gave long strides towards his home and Shon followed him.

"give me the bow" child moaned

"if you listen to us then only you can hold it, tell me your name first" says Basu while walking carrying him.

"i have many names, my chhotima calls me Jishnu, my father calls me..."

"ok me too will call you Jishnu" Basu cuts Jishnu in middle.
he liked the name Jishnu , it resemblances the name of Lord Vishnu

"I am shon " Shon started introducing himself and "he is"

"Basu bhaiya" Jishnu giggled wrapping his arms around Basu's neck making Basu bhaiya smile
Edited by RoseFairy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really good. The boys together and their bonding. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...how cute..little kaju together...

Why destiny was so cruel???? ..i just wish that Veda vayas atleast can write one single incident where unknowingly karn would care for Arjun and Arjun admired and acknowledge his care.. ...why all his affection goes to only duryadhan..that was right of pandavas... 😭 ...i think I am becoming over emotional 😆

Loved this part very much... 😳 👏 ...epic Mein na sahi but ff Mein tho Ho hi sakte gain.. 😉 ...waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandita_Siddian

Awww...how cute..little kaju together...

Why destiny was so cruel???? ..i just wish that Veda vayas atleast can write one single incident where unknowingly karn would care for Arjun and Arjun admired and acknowledge his care.. ...why all his affection goes to only duryadhan..that was right of pandavas... 😭 ...i think I am becoming over emotional 😆

Loved this part very much... 😳 👏 ...epic Mein na sahi but ff Mein tho Ho hi sakte gain.. 😉 ...waiting for the next part.

the same thought used to make me emotional in starb days. But btw I had found some of his affectionate side during war. He was playing around with Nakul,
he quite affectionately captured Yudi and then had let him go which mistakenly yudi thought an insult and more imp he was very much concerned that arjun was going against dharma while killing him. He knew he gonna die why don't do adharm ka lecture

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