Per Angusta Ad Augusta FF - Updated Oct. 14 - FINALE! Pg.37 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
first of all... me firsty in replying... again..😃
poor emery and the boys... search the sewers for clues... 🤢
i am amazed how u suddenly made the shapeshifter make an appearance.. and made emery stab it👏 and her answer as to if it wud have been the real dean... was simply 😎

very heart breaking smiley photo: love heart-breaking-smiley.gifto hear emery's story... first an alcoholic father.. a mother who died from childbirth and a younger brother who died while trying to save her.. heart breaking smiley photo: love heart-breaking-smiley.gif

Dean didn't realize his own eyes were moist until he felt a tear on his cheek.
the above is interesting... 👍🏼 dean is usually oblivious to other people's pain... coz he himself has suffered so much... so i was pleasantly surprised to see him shed a tear.. looking forward to more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

@sayanti...sorry...sorry...for snapping at you...
i din't really mean to be "😡" at you...😒.
it's just that all these con tweets...😡
SPN's absence...🤔
mahi's prolonged unavailability...
and my love and tadap for J2M...made me very edgy and sad...



it is ok di...it reminded me of dean scolding sammy for his betterment😳 love you🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -Mystery-

Aww Sayanti and L - I love you both 🤗


Don't worry, everything's fine at my end.. I just got a job and then taking a class and looking for another job and apartment hunting because I'll be moving to another city in the fall so lots going on.

Will update in a bit for sure, especially for you two :)



awww...ok..we were getting a bit worried thinking about your prolonged absense love you too🤗❤️ and best of luck for all of your endeavors..hope you find another job and apartment really soon😳

and now coming to your ff..well, what can i say?? you are a skilled writer👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i wish i could write like you😊sometimes i wonder that you probably could become the script writer for SPN and trust me you are not less deserving than the actual script writers of the show..you are truly an amazing writer😊 loved the way you revealed about emery's past and i so agree with flutter you exposed a really unexposed side of our dean, who most of the time remains ignorant of others suffering, not because he does not have a heart, but because he is caught in his own pain to realize what others go through..😳 but as i have mentioned earlier that the apparently jerk lad does have a soft heart..love the way you portray the brothers and ofcourse the other characters..eagerly waiting for your next update😊 take care😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: flutterby

first of all... me firsty in replying... again..😃
poor emery and the boys... search the sewers for clues... 🤢
i am amazed how u suddenly made the shapeshifter make an appearance.. and made emery stab it👏 and her answer as to if it wud have been the real dean... was simply 😎

very heart breaking smiley photo: love heart-breaking-smiley.gifto hear emery's story... first an alcoholic father.. a mother who died from childbirth and a younger brother who died while trying to save her.. heart breaking smiley photo: love heart-breaking-smiley.gif

Dean didn't realize his own eyes were moist until he felt a tear on his cheek.
the above is interesting... 👍🏼 dean is usually oblivious to other people's pain... coz he himself has suffered so much... so i was pleasantly surprised to see him shed a tear.. looking forward to more...

eating smiley photo: eating smiley bf-mesvorksmiley.gif



well i think Dean saw himself somewhere in the story emery told...as he too saw his brother die...suffer more than death...so may be that's made him shed a lone tear...just like in HEART he shed a lone tear seeing sammy's plight
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
g8 update

u hav awesome writing and creative skills 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Flutter - Emery has had an awful past.. in a way, she's still living in it or at least under the weight of it. But that's made her who she is... even hone her skills. As for Dean being oblivious to other people's pain, I kinda have to disagree here. I think he does feel others' pain, he just doesn't show that he does often. Just like he never shows his pain either. Remember the whole wounded soldier conversation with Bobby? He knew that Bobby was hurting. And as L mentioned about him crying when Sam goes to kill Madison. Yes, he may initially be a little hard on people he meets for the first time (ex. Castiel, Henry) but as he gets to know them, he understands them and feels for them. Another reason behind Dean's tear was that he could empathize with Emery... as I mentioned in the update too. He was remembering the time he spent thinking Sam was dead and that brought a whole lot of pain up front.

As always, thanks so much for your comments!

@Sayanti - Aww thanks so much, love! Don't worry! I tend to be less and less online when things get hectic.. it's just that.. don't worry at all :)

Thanks sooo much for your comments!! I'm gonna try and not let them get to my head 😳hahaha.. but really, I appreciate them! And as for Dean, as I was explaining to Flutter, I don't think he's really oblivious.. yes, sometimes he is so caught up with his own turmoil that he doesn't realize what others are going through but it's not always true.. a lot of time he does empathize, he just doesn't show it. And especially for people he works with, he develops a certain bond with them... like Jo and Ellen, and he certainly feels for them. This is another way of showing that Dean and Emery are beginning to understand each other and getting past the whole hostility thing.

@L - Exactly! Loved the way you explained it!!!

@beyonddarkness - Thank you soo much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mystery-


@Sayanti - Aww thanks so much, love! Don't worry! I tend to be less and less online when things get hectic.. it's just that.. don't worry at all :)

Thanks sooo much for your comments!! I'm gonna try and not let them get to my head 😳hahaha.. but really, I appreciate them! And as for Dean, as I was explaining to Flutter, I don't think he's really oblivious.. yes, sometimes he is so caught up with his own turmoil that he doesn't realize what others are going through but it's not always true.. a lot of time he does empathize, he just doesn't show it. And especially for people he works with, he develops a certain bond with them... like Jo and Ellen, and he certainly feels for them. This is another way of showing that Dean and Emery are beginning to understand each other and getting past the whole hostility thing.



do i see the beginning of a love story???😆😉😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just to let you know Mahi, I have read all the parts and due to time constraints I haven't been able to drop in my comments. I'd like you to know that, you write extremely well. What I like the best about this FF is the way you have kept Winchesters and Supernatural's essence intact. Its almost close to what and how the show is. :)

Shall drop in detailed comments later. For now, great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Sayanti - Hee hee... that's for me to know and you to find out ;)

@Husna - Thanks a lot! I understand time restraints, don't worry about it. Comment whenever you have the time. I personally don't like FFs that don't stay true to the characters so that's one thing I closely watch out for when I write one of mine. Glad to know you noticed that :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^^ Yes, that's one thing I don't like about FF's too. Because if they are not taken care of properly and overlook details, they tend to lose the feel. Yours however, doesn't. I know how hard writing can be, it takes a lot of you to make sure the setting is perfect. It can get more difficult when you are writing something that deals with unreal. So I really like the way you handle the whole 'Supernatural' theme. To come up with cases, make it seem real and logical, the process of describing them, you have done everything well.

What I love the most about this FF is, Emery. I have since forever wished for a female hunter in Supernatural. That partly came true with Jo's entry but the writers had to kill her off too. I don't understand why women hunters, basically female characters aren't given a chance in Supernatural when are capable of adding a lot of substance to the show. I am glad you did what they don't. :)

I can already see dynamics change between Dean and Emery and I like how they able to connect at a level. I see you are planning to pair up Dean and Emery and I'd be in for pair. <3 I don't usually go for fan fictions for some of my favourite books/shows but I decided yours may be just worth it. And so far, I can say you haven't let me down. Keep up the great job! 😳

P.S : Isn't it take you perhaps name your FF now? 😆

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