Kriyam ff- The one year marriage (Updated FINAL Chapter 13 page 21)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Shiney19
Yay!!! I have been waiting for chapter 2!

As expected it's really good!! You can really sense the attraction between Sayyam and Krishna. When will chapter 3 be updated?

Thanks so much really appreciate it!

I have an exam coming up, but I want to get a chapter out in a few days, not sure.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter
My lord, i couldnt describe how beautiful this chapter was. It was such absolutely perfect. I loved, loved, loved it! Please update soon, you are a brilliant writer. Xx

Thanks! Means a lot coming from such a talented writer like yourself! 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P
yaaay!! Loved KriYam in this chapter! omg you brought back Golu in this! I'm so happy that Saiyyam has someone to share his feelings with!
I can't wait for the next part!! Will there be a kriYam dance

Thanks! Of course there has to be a Kriyam dance! 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

😳 This story is so perfect with all the kids. Wish we could get some scenes from this in the real drama too.
This week was so boring without KriYam.

Yes I really wanted someone Sayyam could share his feelings with. Yuvaan was out, so had to be Golu, I wish he was in the show.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: asyaanu
Yaar read both the parts in a go...

❤️

I love it nd infact love 'U' more for writing such an amazing ff...Their eye locks, cute fights fall ahhh!!! They r so cute
In almost all the write-ups Krish falls for Saiyam baby... I wish u do it the other way round
Like he starts acting weird when she's around him, Krish bugging him nd he getting annoyed, smiling thinking about her nd finally realising he is in luv with her ...

One of my fantasy is Krish snapping him when he is drooling at her...

Exactly this way😳

LOL... quite filmy I know... Cant help it🤣
Waiting for the nxt update...Do continue dear!!

Seriously I really appreciate your comment 😳 thank you! And you've really given me an idea here, I'm gonna have to use this! 😆 Filmy stuff is the best! Wish this happens in Ssel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: madbutmagic.
ohgosshhh. Faeeqa, it's beautifully written x
Just loved the car scene and the very last one too. I've said this before and I'm telling you again that I'm all in awe of your writing skills. can't wait for the next part.

ps - did I tell you how much I'm loving this Saiyyam ;)

Thank you! 😊 You gotta love Sayyam wherever or however he is lol.

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: asyaanu
Yaar read both the parts in a go...

❤️

I love it nd infact love 'U' more for writing such an amazing ff...Their eye locks, cute fights fall ahhh!!! They r so cute
In almost all the write-ups Krish falls for Saiyam baby... I wish u do it the other way round
Like he starts acting weird when she's around him, Krish bugging him nd he getting annoyed, smiling thinking about her nd finally realising he is in luv with her ...

One of my fantasy is Krish snapping him when he is drooling at her...

Exactly this way😳

LOL... quite filmy I know... Cant help it🤣
Waiting for the nxt update...Do continue dear!!

Awww..He looks so cute in dis..I too want dis to happen in SSEL..

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

It was superb..I liked how u showed their bonding..I was waiting for dis chapter..

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Ice Cream

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Thanks⭐️ for d next chapter.Brilliant piece of writting👏

Some keypoints from your FF-

*You brought golu here for sayyam's😳,golu's interaction with sayyam as a best friend is a factor of jealousy for yuvaani ...Ki mere golu bhai pehle sayyam se milte hai...Burning smell from yuvani😉

*Yuvaan has done everything with baby,baby reminded him of that incident

*Yuvani and krishna with their respective partner👏❤️,its kinda long drive with 😎❤️

*Prediction from Precap-Sayyam ayega krishna ko bachane k liye❤️

PS-Whenever u update any FF,please mention d page number on d old topic or make a new topic with appropriate title with page number