Current Track in a Nutshell (edited and updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Inspired by sree's How to become Gauri post.
I was not happy with the metre, so am editing and adding a bit.

As a child, Psychbaby's scar, her shrieks and screams
Caused her viyu ( said daayan dadi) to have bad-bad dreams.
So dadi took the creature and sent her off afar,
Said she'd kicked the bucket, and everyone believed her.

Scarface wore a mask back then, shut up in a house.
Until our sidey actors--Yuvraj and his spouse--
Went to that location to get some alone time,
But ended up finding baby and solving tantric crime.

When they came back (without romancing) to their home base,
The fools brought along a passenger, our present nutcase.
We had a month of Suhani acting like she'd found love sublime,
And psycho in turn thought her didi was divine.

The dadi who had sent the psych into exile
Got shafted by Suhani, who, in a little while,
Proved the baby was actually the Birlas' female heir
And everyone went gaga lavishing love and care.

Enter Loots the creep, who instantly fell in ''love''
With Psychs, who reciprocated, and gave Suhani the shove.
Psychs got her new plaything and a new game is afoot.
I don't want to go into the saga of Psychbaby and her Loot.

But our patience 'tis waning, we're fed up to the gills.
All these effing villains are too much overkill.
We suffer with no end in sight, we've pleaded high and low,
Please, cvs, bump off Loots and Psych and give us back our show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2

Hear, hear!👏👏👏

One of your best yet!!! Super awesome, Anito!
You amaze me with your play of words and how you manage to describe our emotions so perfectly well!!! 👏

Very, very impressed!⭐️ Loved it!

I hope those morons read this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: anita_m

Inspired by sree's How to become Gauri post.

Psychbaby bugged as a child too, because her scar, her shrieks and screams
Caused her viyu (or so said dayan dadi) to have such bad-bad dreams.
So dadi took the creature and sent her off afar,
Said she'd kicked the bucket, and everyone believed her.

Scarface wore a mask back then, shut up in a house.
Until our sidey actors--Yuvraj and his spouse--
Went to that location to get some alone time,
But ended up finding baby and solving tantric crime.

When they returned (without romancing) to their home base,
They brought along a passenger, our present nutcase.
We had a month of Suhani acting like she'd found love sublime,
And psycho in turn thought her didi was divine.

Enter Loots the creep, who instantly fell in love
With psycho, who reciprocated, and gave Suhani the shove.
Psych got her new plaything and a new game is afoot.
I don't want to go into the saga of psychbaby and Loot.

But our patience 'tis waning, we're fed up to the gills.
All these effing villains are too much overkill.
We suffer with no end in sight, we've pleaded high and low,
Please, cvs, bump off Loots and psycho and give us back our show.


@bold, lol ani..
V.nys post..well said each n evrythng
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Perfect anita... Plz send it to the CVs... Shayad kuch akal aa jae..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Ani... B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T ... 👏👏👏
You know the one good thing about this track is the super sarcastic posts by all the forum members... That is the only reason I (almost) don't mind such ridiculous tracks 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
The queen of Words in ince again back...
Ani, all i could say is WOW,WOW...

c'mon write one on dadi too, pls..
yanks28 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
I think Tripathi need to read this in fact even Sahil should read it...this is amazing. Outstanding
kavitha_r thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
CV's please end Gauri track & show Yuvani moments.
anita_m thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

The cvs aren't going to listen to us, people. They will go their merry way, causing us endless trauma.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Oho Anitams .U are just a best ever player when it comes to words👏Awesome..

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