Writing script while travelling in Mumbai Local train!

Originally posted by: drummedup

Our dear creative reaches railway station. And proceeds to write script for the day thus:

While waiting on station to board the train:

Dadi-Rags-Men tracks, convos, comedy.

Example: Today's unnecessarily put 2 minute footage to baby-in-dadi's-godhi scene.

When the train starts coming towards the platform:

Outlines the important track for the day.

Example: Amit's death news being broken to bhavna to mourning set up. Blink of an eye, whoosh! scene change.

When he is boarding train and almost hanging on the foot-board:

Yuvraj-Suhani scenes.

While in train:

When all the passengers are falling over each other, pushing, pulling... creative gets agitated and decides to take it out on fans by abruptly ending or entirely chopping Yu-Su scenes... all this frustration is shown through Dadi-Rag-Men who are never happy!

If the train halts somewhere and he gets 2 mins to breathe:

Thinks hard and writes the bestest scene for Dadi and gang.

As soon as he gets down he runs to SP office to handover the script.

Since he was in such a rush, he can't seem to remember what exactly he wrote.

Specially Yu-Su scenes he wrote in such tension of trying to board the train... so he forgets where he left so forgets to continue further too.

Blame the local trains which keep rushing him... if the train comes on time it means he'll have to rush a track that day, if it is late then he has time to stretch scenes.

So please, STOP blaming this hardworker who writes his script on a run. He hardly has time to accommodate his favourite characters.

du, wow...what a thought...

Originally posted by: sreelovesindia

du, wow...what a thought...

but i want a blast in station so that the scenes are cut out

and SP must ask them to give on sunday...bcoz it would be a holiday,

our cvs may time to write scenes for yuvani for i feel trains would be free...

and i feel bad...poor cvs...i wish they get autos ...

Hahaha, too possible.

But I quite liked the episode. I liked Yuvraj persuading dadi for Su, I even liked dadi recoiling from the baby, it was the first time I found her human, funny. I liked Yuvraj supporting Bhavna and threatening Rishi, and only wish he'd been as supportive when Su got molested. Rishi is such a slimeball.

I thought the accident and Suhani finding out over the phone were well done. And what a relief to see Mr touch me not actually holding her and comforting her without reservations.

I liked that they fast-tracked from news of accident and breaking it to Bhavna straight to mourning. At least no pulling it too long with pointless scenes about going to hospital, releasing body, cremation. I guess that's because the actor wasn't available. Now tomorrow Yuvraj and Sharad will get Golu? What about kidnappings?

Just move it along.

Edited to undo words Google thinks I should use.

Oh yes! I REAAALLLY liked Yuvraj-Bhavna scene. Rishi's shock at discovering Yuvraj there was funny! And what an idiot Yuvraj is to tell Rishi about the message? Wouldn't that slimeball delete it somehow?

I too wondered, was looking to see if Rishi was sitting there or not. Oh I do hope it's not some planned thing. Far as I remember, the car stopped. Or was it a hit and run? We know what happens to drivers who cause accidents. Maybe it was just badly edited. Not a surprise.

BTW, srinithi, you usually make me smile at your comments. 😆

Even i felt d focus was too much on d car so mayb sumone close to d family could have done it or maybe it was bad editing..the car stopped but they did nt show anyone cumin out of it so all the more mysterious.. pratima said sourabh has gone out for sum wrk so felt mayb it was him...or mayb i am just overthinking😆

Originally posted by: pam789

Even i felt d focus was too much on d car so mayb sumone close to d family could have done it or maybe it was bad editing..the car stopped but they did nt show anyone cumin out of it so all the more mysterious.. pratima said sourabh has gone out for sum wrk so felt mayb it was him...or mayb i am just overthinking😆

Actually, possible. It may be an exit strategy for new Saurabh if he doesn't work out! 😆