An elegy on Yuvi's presumption.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Across the oceans and beyond the galaxies there shown a light of empowerment,humble and pure authenticity,
It verdicts that I am a prey of pestilence dropped in land of aliens,
It conquered my charisma and landed me in dilemma,
It overpowered my emotions fought with my hatred and even confessed that I am lifeless,
It derived my potentials and abrupted my initials,
It assisted me in my chaos but left me devalued while I am hero

I was prudent but it dominated my prudence,
I could deeply sense the commotion when it is the revalation,
Heart beats takes over when it is mixed over,
Overwhelming my mind while it is always in my hind,
I will take a dagger and stab to prove it is my urge,
Powerful arrows hit me at the back when it felt me to the lack
Lonely is not my birth right but it haunted my night,
But light o light u made my lonely bright,
Hard to consider it still as a subtle that would debate my glottal,
No, not ur enthusiasm flirted me ur cheeks absorbed me,
Your eyes stoled me ur power locked me,
Ur mourning made me weep,ur fun made me peep,
My tyranny was ur harmony,
My ubiquitous was ur cherish,
But why not my hesitation ur destiny,
I couldn't be but why have u left me,
My light,my love my wife,
My sobber exceeds even infinities mourning for ur proximities,
Oh! Even reach the highest mountain peeks but make sure u ever show me ur cheeks,
If I had a chance to visit the almighty, I would ask for an infinity,
I can't bear the pain of guilt which she had lit,
I would bell if u come back to my will,
Oh my love, my lady, my girl, my baby doll
Come back oh! come back that I would feed u with hundreds of kisses and bag u with my licks
Shapen u with my looks, brighten u with my oops,
Oh!! Come back, come back my loveee.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG this is absolutely beautiful!! Brilliant piece of writing rerose!! I loved each n every word in it.. YuvAni ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This rivals Milton's Lycidas ...lol, you really went for it. Splendid imagery...great work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have attempted my very first elegy in my life hence people pls do open up and post ur comments so that I would help me in my long run.This legy is dedicated to all yuvanians hope all yuvanians will like it.
Edited by rerose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys pls do comment I need ur opinions about it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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if you render me speechless with your elegy, what could i say?
wow...

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