YuvAni FF: Separated (both POVs) part 7. p17 End+note - Page 2

Originally posted by: SM.Lopa

Wow YuvAni separated 👍🏼

Oh hell...his description...light blue shirt and dark blue pants 😳...I'm yearning to learn his POV...Brilliant start. I know its gonna be mouth watering. I can't wait to see this jealousy. I'm having a feeling that its gonna be Yuvraj who'll burn in jealousy. God in the car romance kya? The way he ordered her to come...desperate hon...😉

Update soon...waiting for the next chapter...❤️

Originally posted by: sunshine33

and...what did he tell her! I can't wait for the next part. Please don't keep us too long in suspense.

So excited to read your FF's...

Originally posted by: sona_28

👏👏...no words.u already know how much I'm waiting for the next part.BEautifully written can't wait to find out what will happen in the car and why yuvraj didn't call . Yuvraj's POV should be interesting because he is a mystery man in the actual show.

Originally posted by: Zainy21

God gifted you with so much Mehwish !! You are so talented !!

I dont know what I just read and trust me I am trying very hard to function right now 🤪

"Let him come home from work today and I'll beat some sense into him." She said

This is so cutee !! This is exactly something Pratima would say and to be really hones, this line did kinda make me 🤣

A couple of days passed. He didn't call me and I didn't call him.

This really did make me imagine how YuvAni would be acting and thinking, how they would be thinking of eachother, how they would be missing each other, hats off for making me have a crystal clear image of their feelings👏👏

The silence was deafening and painful

This one line is so strong !!😭😭

He tried hard to cover up his anger but I'd known him for the past 8 months, and I could tell that he was livid.

I smiled so much reading this line. The way she can tell when he is angry and when he is not Tum hamesha mera bura haal karte ho jab FF lik te ho, not fair.😆

Yuvraj was staring daggers at me and his eyes were growing darker with anger

Haiyeee, this made me go 🤪I can just imagine Sahil's angry eyes. I feel so sorry for Suhani 😆😆 Why are you so goooddd !!! Please transfer some talent to meee⭐️⭐️

Yuvraj was wearing a light blue shirt with a dark blue die, and dark blue pants

I am really loosing my mind imagining Sahil like this 🤪❤️

I went out into the parking lot and found Yuvraj's car immediately. I opened the door and sat down.

HURRY THE F**K UP AND POST THE NEXT PART !!! If I was Suhani then I would be sooo scared right now 😆

Mehwish brilliant work, I cant wait for the next part !

Love youu

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

been ages u wrote n im so so so so so so so so happy u did🤗


felt really sad at maa n suhani's convo


i bet yuvi is ponnna be so so so angry n hot together😆☺️




im sure the next part n further will kill us😳


thanks a ton for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow AMAZING BRILLANT FAB AWESOME BEAUTIFUL

Ok what can I say love it, as always it was brillant and beautifully written

Aww she left in the middle of the night because she didn't want anyone to try and stop her wonder if Yuvraj would have stopped her if he saw her leave

I think she was correct in leaving without telling any body anything or saying bye I mean why should she sta back there was no reason so she made the right choice

Aww I'm sure her parents her to be happy that's why they didn't say anything when she went back to stay with them


her phone conversation with Pratima was sweet but painful for her poor girl
Pratima needs to beat some sense into her son he is arrogant and his ego gets in the way silly guy needs to wake up and be a man

Love the description of his clothes and anger, hope we find out what she is wearing in the next part

I'm glad she started working and her colleague finds Yuvraj hot lol poor girl doesn't know he is married to the woman she is talking to lol

Yuvani is angry ok but hope she gets angry with him too she should stay quiet and let's me say whatever he wants


I like how she can read him so well
Yes she left but she had a reason and it's not like he called her to ask why she left or anything

Next part will be great can't wait to read it

Thank you posting a lovely story Hun love you xoxo

Originally posted by: qwerty012

Amazing start!! But u stopped at wrong place😭.. I was scrolling down the page to see if u continued that in the next page.. Waiting eagerly for the next update..

Pls update soon...

Originally posted by: anita_m

Loved it. Ticked so many items of my wish list--separation, angry Yuvraj, and I'm guessing jealous Yuvraj is on the way, and I bet those intense scenes you do so well.
Update soon, please yanks.