Suhani and Yuvraj: Level Playing Field--a Story - Page 2

Originally posted by: SM.Lopa

Just Brilliant Ani...Frankly when I started reading and they were doubting his sexuality I didn't like it initially but when I completed it oh god its a master piece. Specially his confession was just wow... You've introduced and used this character Ashutosh brilliantly. If a new guy can add this much spice and salt then please send this to rajabeta...honestly mehwish and you should start writing for television. Tv needs you lol.

Thank you, Lopa. Yes, yaar, we need a new guy, we need jealous Yuvi, we need progress.

Originally posted by: prachi153

Nice story would have loved to watch this on show😛

Thank you. I also want to watch stuff like this!😃

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow amazing story really liked it, your writing is beautiful I like how you had serious moments in the story but there were funny parts as well

OMG them thinking yuvraj is gay was funny and him going along to get dadi to keep suhani was nice of him

Sharad is brillant as well I like how you his language like they do in the show awesome

Jealous Yuvraj is something hope we to see him jealous in the show

Ending was fab liked how confessed and them making up was good

Please post more stories you are a brillant writer so keep writing

Thank you so much, Ray. Appreciate your comment.

Originally posted by: sona_28

Wow Anita ..sweet as usual .You should definitely write more 👏.Lol... loved how RagMen and Dadi thought he was gay.Really liked how you ended it and Yuvraj confession was good.Wish to see this on screen soon 😳

Thanks, sona. I spend my time before sleeping in thinking up what I want to see!

Originally posted by: qwerty012

WOW!!👏👏.. If a new guy can bring this beautiful confession and conversation then i am ready to see new guy in the show..

Really loved the ending!! It is a new beginning!!

Yes, some guy, any guy, just shake up this SlowRaj. Sahil would kill it if he had to do angry, jealous Yuvraj, and I'm desperate to see that.

Beautifully written..!! Anita, Yaar this story is just awesome!! You are a blessed writer!! And yes,a new guy is really needed for the show... Keep writing sweetie!

Originally posted by: princessmanu

Beautifully written..!! Anita, Yaar this story is just awesome!! You are a blessed writer!! And yes,a new guy is really needed for the show... Keep writing sweetie!

Thank you, Manu.

New guy, cvs, new guy! For me, endgame is YuvAni, but this needs a push. Need more passion from Yuvraj, need Suhani to resist him and drive him mad.

this was brilliant!! got into your writings today and damn I am late for work already😆 loved this one!!

anita...you are the brilliant writer i have ever seen...

just read ...speechless for chand lamhe try to figure out is this the same character on to SSEL ...its B.R.I.L.LA.N.T