YuvAni FF- Falling Apart- Part 4, p.7 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"You're very, very naughty..." I said. I kissed her lips softly. She calmed down. But I felt like I was just getting started. She touched my face. "Why are you always so angry at me?" She asked, groggily.

"Because I care about you..." I replied. I kissed her neck. She sighed, happily.




"You were very um, expressive and demanding." He said.




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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
okay so

i might be the biggest loser who got to read the whole thing in a go and that too this late

the funny part is that i started from the end 😆


guess who can this idiot be??
yours and only yours behna ..


i read the forth part

than third

than second

and

than finally the first ..


and than what happened was

i started from the start

hats off to you

you made me read the

whole story

from end to start



and than

start to end



and now i feel

INTOXICATED !


this one has to be the

fun recipe out of all the dishes you have made till now

i rooted for suhani in this one

she was the star

her innocent was untouched even when she was drunk

she was playful

she was fun

she was horny , cranky , fussy childish and more😃😆

in last two parts (3rd and 4th)

she was motivated and all ready for yuvraj to touch her

basically the crave for his love
and the fact that remain the same in her mind that he dosn't love her back
the way she loves him (now that is obviously changed both in the show and in this ff)
but she wanted him

those parts where she asks him to touch were applaud worthy 👏👏


her being chirpy and bathroom part and yes plus that part where she demands the password and he says after thinking "samosas" LMAO truly cracked me up like anything.. being a samosa lover myself i now wanna eat samosas especially after yuvraj mentioned them.


okay so if i say i rooted for suhani
so ill be really telling a lie if i say i did'nt appreciated yuvraj ..

YES YES YES

i rooted for my dude
i rooted for yuvraj more

i can connect to him
not everyone can be expressing but iska matlab yeh nahi hai kay wo pyar nahi kartay

yuvraj was such a gentleman
he was caring
he was enjoying
he was hurt aswell with all that suhani said to him.

his quality of not taking advantage of suhani at any stage without her being in the proper state of mind is what makes me fall for him more .. (both here and in the show)

pointing the fact where suhani just wanted to rip that shirt whichever color he was wearing and dig her nails in his skin at that moment with so much alcohol she consumed . yuvraj still managed to stay proper and control...


some times i want to rape his CONTROL

but than this factor makes him above all...

i loved him

i loved what you wrote about him and all the emotions he felt..


👏


you are an freaking awesome writer

i feel that i have consumed alcohol because my world is rotating with that kiss of them..


you write in a really refreshing way

will still include this one in romantic GENRE

but my favorite will be still "its a girl"

i love you for everything you are behna

bless you
and bless me
and may ALLAH bless OUR YUVANI/SARAJ ❤️


with love
me 😳😳 (blush mode on)





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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Omg omg omg... i have no words again... had so much fun reading it... pure joy... you write beautifully... i didnt want it to end... ehehee suhanis pov was good, but i liked yuvis pov better :) ;) mehwish... once more once more!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
wow awsum
i loved yuvi's pov so much
he liked suhani snuggling into him
so intoxicating scenes..loved it
continue sooon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
i felt really sad at the end for yuvi bhaiyya...🥺
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
OOOMMMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome !!!!!

I loved this intoxicated Suhani a lottt !!!!! loved her boldness but it was cute...And Yuvi was enjoying 😉😳...

Only kiss 😛😳😳 muje to aurvi kuch chahiye tha 😉😛...

loved shy,,embarrassed Suhani a lot...I was thinking how and what Yuvi will tell her in the morning😆...but he couldn't 😆😃..I really enjoyed his reaction...

loved it very very much...it was fabulous👏
i hope will get more parts of this ff...don't stop here pleaseee !!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I'm waiting for the next part 😃
shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rbb1

I'm waiting for the next part 😃

thats the last part sweety
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
lolz you guys are so cute.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28

lolz you guys are so cute.

toh isse khatam mat karo

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