okay so
i might be the biggest loser who got to read the whole thing in a go and that too this late
the funny part is that i started from the end 😆
guess who can this idiot be??
yours and only yours behna ..
i read the forth part
than third
than second
and
than finally the first ..
and than what happened was
i started from the start
hats off to you
you made me read the
whole story
from end to start
and than
start to end
and now i feel
INTOXICATED !
this one has to be the
fun recipe out of all the dishes you have made till now
i rooted for suhani in this one
she was the star
her innocent was untouched even when she was drunk
she was playful
she was fun
she was horny , cranky , fussy childish and more😃😆
in last two parts (3rd and 4th)
she was motivated and all ready for yuvraj to touch her
basically the crave for his love
and the fact that remain the same in her mind that he dosn't love her back
the way she loves him (now that is obviously changed both in the show and in this ff)
but she wanted him
those parts where she asks him to touch were applaud worthy 👏👏
her being chirpy and bathroom part and yes plus that part where she demands the password and he says after thinking "samosas" LMAO truly cracked me up like anything.. being a samosa lover myself i now wanna eat samosas especially after yuvraj mentioned them.
okay so if i say i rooted for suhani
so ill be really telling a lie if i say i did'nt appreciated yuvraj ..
YES YES YES
i rooted for my dude
i rooted for yuvraj more
i can connect to him
not everyone can be expressing but iska matlab yeh nahi hai kay wo pyar nahi kartay
yuvraj was such a gentleman
he was caring
he was enjoying
he was hurt aswell with all that suhani said to him.
his quality of not taking advantage of suhani at any stage without her being in the proper state of mind is what makes me fall for him more .. (both here and in the show)
pointing the fact where suhani just wanted to rip that shirt whichever color he was wearing and dig her nails in his skin at that moment with so much alcohol she consumed . yuvraj still managed to stay proper and control...
some times i want to rape his CONTROL
but than this factor makes him above all...
i loved him
i loved what you wrote about him and all the emotions he felt..
👏
you are an freaking awesome writer
i feel that i have consumed alcohol because my world is rotating with that kiss of them..
you write in a really refreshing way
will still include this one in romantic GENRE
but my favorite will be still "its a girl"
i love you for everything you are behna
bless you
and bless me
and may ALLAH bless OUR YUVANI/SARAJ ❤️
with love
me 😳😳 (blush mode on)