YuvAni FF- [romance]'Letting Go' S&Y POVs- Part 4, p8 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovelyLopa

Heaven...😳

Please make her wear his clothes naaa😳 Wow it was so cute. Where is that idiot writer?? Aww I'm waiting to read the next part 😳 😳 😳


I wonder what we would do if we got this on the show. Probably perish from joy 😆 thanks for reading Lopa😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Brilliant start wish it was longer OMG I can't believe you stopped there I hope you post the next part ASAP



thank u ray ill post the next part today 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

how ive missed u writing babe🤗



cant wait for u to continue


yuvi boy n his humour is always a treat to read!



u missed it awww rly sweet of u. going to post more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laugh.Out.Loud

This thing is so freaking awesome Meh! God I am already craving for more of this.

What's this yours and mines nonsense? What's mines is yours. Please, don't say anything like that again...

Aww this was so sweet I can just imagine Yuvi saying that and Su's expression! Why don't SP has writers as nice as you?😭 Jo tera hein wo mera

You already know you write so well, do I need to tel that again?😳 please continue soon! Wil be waiting! And even the thought of yuvani locked in their room makes my heart beat faster😆

Linz🤗



Linz I didn't know u read FFs too. I'm so happy now! 😃 Thanks for telling me which line you liked, I rly appreciate that...so much and the writing on this show has gone thoroughly haywire ...awww but we're just a bunch of fangirls waiting for their romance. 😉😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: unicornlover

Aww that was so cute . Wish this happened 😳 please update soon 😊



thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28



thank u ray ill post the next part today 😃

yay can't wait to read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vahhh, what a story !!!!!
This was very much worth the wait.
Loved every word of it.
Yuvraj making exuces so Suhani can sleep in the same bed as him is just priceless. 😆

Suhani trying her best NOT to sleep in the same room as him is 🤣

"Um, you could wear my clothes..." He said.

OMG Suhani in Yuvraj's clothes ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Just imagine her in his t - shirt He would have kittens seeing her like that 😆😆

What's the need for me to sleep on this king sized bed alone, and have you sleeping on the floor?"

Yuvraj aur uske bahane are just the best. He is desperate for her... I love this Yuvraj ❤️

"Because that's your king sized bed, not mines and you shouldn't have to share it with anyone

HAWWW, Suhani's getting fiesty !! One hand there is YUvraj who wants her right by his side and on the other hand there is Suhani, who would rather jump off a cliff than be next to him🤣

He grabbed me by my elbow and pulled me onto the bed.

UPDATE IT NOW !!!! You are so mean !!! How can you finish the first part with this ?? THe thought of Yuvraj pulling Suhani on the bed is just WOWWW.

This FF is just AMAZING !! The writers really need to learn romance from you 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

"Stop. You have annoyed me enough for one day, I think." I pushed him away. He sat and watched me as I placed pillows as a barrier between us. His expression changed. He looked completely annoyed.

He grabbed my hand and stopped me. "Stop it. What you are you doing?" He asked. He got rid of all the pillows. He was pretty much huffing and puffing. I took my own pillow and placed that in between and lay down, and faced the opposite direction and tried to sleep.

"Su-HA-NI." He said. Then I heard the sound of a vase crashing so I got up and saw that he'd thrown my pillow across the room and it caused a vase to fall and break.

"What do you think will happen if we just slept without a pillow between us?" He asked.

"I dunno. I should have asked you that back when we slept with them in between us, for months and months..." I said. It was a dry reply and it agitated him further. He got up and returned my pillow to me. He sat down at the edge of the bed and sighed.

"I didn't mean to hurt you all those months." He said.

"You didn't, not much...I thought I understood why you did it. But I was wrong..." I said.

He moved closer to me and held my hand. At first it was just one hand, and then he grabbed the other one and then he let go of both and held my arms. I couldn't understand what he was doing. I watched him.

"Suhani...I don't know how to explain...but sometimes..." He frowned. He looked like he was having trouble putting his thoughts into words. "It's not that I don't want..." I stopped him.

"It's ok..." I said. I tried to free myself from his grip. I was thinking of leaving now. Everyone must have been asleep by now. He tightened his hold. I looked him in the eye. He was dressed in all black, and I was wearing a blue suit. He tried pulling me closer to him and I was so astonished by what was happening that I didn't notice that my dupatta slipped from my shoulder and fell onto my lap. He saw it fall. He grabbed it and threw it aside. I wasn't able to react properly because whatever happened felt unbelievable to me.

I couldn't understand that look in his eyes because I had hardly ever seen it before. It looked like he was tortured by some emotion which he couldn't fight. He also looked like he was pleading with me to stop fighting him and give in, but give in to what?

He moved even closer and held my face. I pushed his hands away. He was stunned. He looked like someone had just broken the trance he'd been under. I needed to leave so I got up again and he stopped me right away.

"Why are you stopping me?" He said. He looked hurt.

"What are you doing?" I asked.

"Shouldn't it be obvious?" He asked.

I shook my head. "I don't know what you're trying to say..." I was bewildered.

"Suhani, you're amazing..." He said. He put one hand on my waist and pulled me against him. He swallowed hard. "Don't tell me that you still don't get it..." He said. I pushed him away.

"Stop pitying me. I didn't ask for it. I don't need your pity." I said. I was furious. "Are you making fun of me? Why, because I love you?" I shouted. He grabbed me by the elbow.

"No, I'm not...I would never..." He quieted.

"Do you think this is a joke? I can't believe you would do something like this, Yuvraj..." I was in tears. I was confused.

He wiped away my tears. "It's not a joke. I didn't mean it as a joke. I take you very seriously..." He said. He looked down. For a minute he didn't speak and we stood silently in front of each other and didn't move. Finally, he held my hands and looked into my eyes.

"Suhani, I want you to understand something. I would never take advantage of our relation just to show the world, that everything is fine, or just to make you happy. If I wanted to do that, I would have done it a long time ago." He said.

"Then what are you trying to say?" I asked.

"I'm asking you to let yourself FEEL. Please Suhani, for a moment...stop thinking...let yourself feel...whatever you're feeling..." He said. He cupped my cheek. His lips were parted. He bent slightly and lifted my chin. He kissed me near my lips.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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will back soon with my review 😉


First of all ending at the cliffhanger isn't fair at all Dear...m craving for the next part already...
coming to the story😳😳

So Yuvraj took away those pillows between them😳..he cannot allow anybody come between them not even a pillow😃any more..My heart is aching for Suhani..She was trying to understand what's going on...she was scared to dream or think that what her hubby was up to...perfectly described her emotions👏...

"I dunno. I should have asked you that back when we slept with them in between us, for months and months..."

what a perfect line to give him back to his face👏...and I also loved how Yuvi answered her and was trying to show her that he cares for her...Awesome😃

Loved how Yuvi threw her dupatta 😳 its his full haq on her☺️...Yuvi was trying to get close to her and Su continuously denying him was woowww...

"Stop pitying me. I didn't ask for it. I don't need your pity." I said. I was furious. "Are you making fun of me? Why, because I love you?"

One more superb dialogue ⭐️ stars for that...perfect timing for Su to utter those words...She need to be cleared...and then Yuvi's answer making her understand why these months he didn't even tried to get intimate was Superbbb 👏...loved it...

and then u blast a bomb

"I'm asking you to let yourself FEEL. Please Suhani, for a moment...stop thinking...let yourself feel...whatever you're feeling..."

this mind blasting dialogue made my day 😃😃...I m mesmerized with the beauty of this dialogue..

u know how wonderful writer u are ?i m in ur fan list forever.. I m dying for the next update...please update soon 😃..
Edited by rumu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it was amazing.. yanks28 I love reading your ff's.. I can actually imagine every scene and Yuvraj and Suhani's expressions and dialogues.. Both parts were amazing.. Please update the next part ASAP.. Wish this happened on the show...

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