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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update Krits...
Just loved it
Awesome 👏
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Aww dat was a beautiful update
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Lovely update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your comments . This is the last chapter and all I want to say is I love all of you for taking the time out of your lives to read my story . It was an attempt at a fanfic - that's all I can say 😉 . Enjoy .

Prologue

7 years passed on and Suhani was more strong than ever . With her love life , well , she and Yuvraaj got back together once Suhani was financially settled . Once she returned , Suhani had learned what had happened in her absence . Saumya married a rich businessman , after running away from the Birla House . Dadi had an accident in the kitchen which resulted in her always staying in her room , since she believed her face wasn't worthy of showing to anyone. Anuj still treated Menka horribly .The only romantic thing they shared was that they had a kid and Anuj took her out every week . To the psychiatrist. Saurabh divorced Rags - it was brought out to light that Saurabh had feelings for and married Ananya , a girl that crushed on him and was good friends with him . Suhani had negative feelings about Ananya as she felt that whatever the situation was , no one should come in between a husband and wife . She had her taste of what it felt like and felt sorry for Rags . However she learned that Ananya was a good person with good values. Suhani and Ananya became really good friends and both of them shared a sister like relationship . This time , it wasn't fake .

Anyway . Now it's not about Ananya or Saurabh or Anuj or Menka or Rags or Dadi . And to some extent , not even Yuvraaj or Suhani .

It's about Yuvraani . After becoming a mother of two , Suhani realised that she's going to guide her children the hard , brutal , cold way through life . One of her kids was a boy , named Yuvan , and the other, a girl called Yuvraani. Yuvan was fairer than Yuvraani and at the times when Dadi gave Yuvan , Nirbhay , Asha (Ananya and Saurabh's children ) and Rashmi (Menka and Anuj) toys and ignored Yuvraani, Suhani taught Yuvraani that people are going to be like this , her goal was to study and do something in her life .

And what did Yuvraani not have ? Her big brother Yuvan was supportive and always sold his bat to give her a similar doll which Asha and Rashmi had , and Asha and Rashmi never treated Yuvraani any different , no one treated their youngest sister any different . Her grandparents treated her like a princess . She and her parents had a special bond especially her and her father . She was Yuvraaj's Yuvraani .

But as we near the end of the story I promise you that Yuvraani never lost her self respect . Despite having a racist great grandma she never spoke rudely to her . When Dadi told Yuvraani to apply fairness cream , she politely said that she was very happy with what she looked like . That's the Suhani we wanted but at least we have Yuvraani . Her daughter. The better version of her .

No one should lose their self respect because of their looks or belief or way of life . No woman or girl should bow down to society's idea of looks .
At least not in this day and age .

The End .
Edited by unicornlover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this was an amazing story like the ending hope we get to read another story from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely, Kritika, thoroughly enjoyed how you wound it up. Thank you. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww a beautiful ending a wonderful story
U've done a great job throughout the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mika17

Aww a beautiful ending a wonderful story

U've done a great job throughout the story



Thanks Mika17 - it made my day 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow this was an amazing story like the ending hope we get to read another story from you



Aww thanks Ray ! Let's see if I can find some inspiration from the show 😆
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Lovely, Kritika, thoroughly enjoyed how you wound it up. Thank you. Loved it.



Just the fact that an amazing writer like you reads my story and compliments it makes me smile till I burst . Thank you , Ani ❤️

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