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It had been a month since suhani had found out the truth and left him. He had tried numerous times to talk to her bt all he met was coldness, indifference and always her turning away or shutting the door on his face. He hated that he knew she had every right to be that way bt every time she did that he wanted to grab her and shake her and bring her close to him and tell her to stop he couldn't take it. Bt he always tried to be calm with her coz he knew that all he needed to do was to be patient with her and to get her alone for a little while and he would be able to make her see his pt of view he wasn't a bad guy, he had honestly tried to do what was best in the situation and mostly importantly they where married and he didn't believe that they needed to get divorced they just needed to start afresh with no lies. Bt every time he had tried to tell her this she wnt listen if she wasn't angry and mean there was always her family btw them who was acting like a shield btw them. Her dad was a worse asking to be forgiven for his sins and worse telling him to forget whatever had happened and to move on in life. That really pushed him who the hell did he think he was forcing his opinion on him telling him to forget his wife the same girl who he had forced on him b4 he was now telling him to forget. He had finally lost it they told him to make her his when he hadn't wanted and now they told him to just let go. It hadn't been easy for him to accept her in his life but he had. He hadn't fought before to get out of marrying suhani after knowing that she was innocent bt he would definitely fight for his marriage now. He was tired of being controlled like a puppet told how to feel and what to do he was gona take what was his and he didn't give a darn about the consequence anymore. And so here he was at 4 in the morning outside her house. He knew her routine like clock work now she would wake up at around 5 and come outside and just sit alone sadly. Many a times in this month he had wanted to come to her at those moments when she was alone bt somehow seeing her loneliness had scared him. She looked so out of his reach he knew how to deal with the happy suhani bt hw did he deal with this 1 who didn't see the rainbow at the end of the tunnel, who didn't see the goodness anymore in anything. Bt this time he knew if he didn't try to talk to her and make her see sense she was gona move further and further away from him and so he got out of his car and went to her. As she looked up from her seat and saw him towering over her shewiped the tears of her face and got up and walked past him. Bt unlike be4 this time he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him and than effortlessly carried her. Suhani was so shocked that she didn't say a thing for a few minutes as she looked at him. And than as they got to his car and he put her down she finally realised what was going on and was about to run for it when grabbed her again and slammed her against the car. She felt the wind taken out of her bt he was on her and he was so close and told her not to even think about running away from him. He had enough of her attitude and either she would come with him the easy way or the hard way bt still she would be coming with him. She was abit scared at that moment bt than she got angry and pushed at him hard and said never and he lost his balance bt as he did he grabbed onto her and they both fell to the ground. To protect her he managed to somehow make them fall where she was on top of him. They stared at each another for a few minutes both breathing heavily. He couldn't help it as he her hair away from her face he hadn't realised how much he missed her scent and when closer to her. Suhani was also very affected by him it had been so long since they had been this close bt and as they looked at each another she felt a connection so strong that all she wanted to do was touch him bt he touched her 1st. And as he did she closed her eyes thinking how long she had waited for him to be close to her how she had waited for the moment when he would show her his affection and love for her. Bt than she remembered everything else and started to move away. Yuvraj was hurt that she was so unaffected by him bt he had seen a small flash of his suhani and he wasn't gona let it go and so when she started to move of him. He tighten his arms around her body and shook his head and told her u not going anyway. And before she knew it he had gotten up and gotten her in his arms again and than opened the car door and placed her in the front seat and closed it. Suhani tried to open it but couldn't and worse she couldn't even find the handle to open it. And b4 she knew it he was in the car and he told her that the car didn't open from the inside.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suhani was so mad she didn't want to be anyway near him just looking at him she remembered how she was with him and she felt her skin crawl as she remembered touching him, adoring him and the more she thought the more she felt suffocated in his presence and starting looked for a way out. She was so out of it that she took her hand and smashed the car window in order to open the door she didn't care for her safety and she wanted to be away from him. Yuvraj immediately stopped the car as he grabbed her hand be4 she could jump out he was in total shock at what she had done and as he saw the blood on their hand he then put both his hands at the side of her head and asked her what was she doing to them didn't she know she could have gotten hurt? She looked at him with a craze in her eyes and said that she didn't care all she wanted to do was be away from him. her words hurt him and they looked at each another and then he saw the blood again and said he had his 1stAid kit in the back seat and moved to get and she jumped out. He grabbed the kit quickly and got out as well as he followed her he grabbed the uninjured hand and tried to take her back to the car as he said that he would sort her hand out. But this time she pulled him back and when he was closer to him she took the 1staid kit from his hand and throw it on the ground and told him to hell with his 1staid kit she could take care of herself. And whilst looking at him she took her dupatta off and tore it and wrapped a piece of it onto her hand and said stay away from me I dnt need u or your sympathy in my life and just get lost and turned away from him. before she could walk away he grabbed her hurt hand and roughly brought her towards him and then pushed her against the car and said angrily get lost, not on your life Suhani and u can take care of yourself please, u nothing but reckless and u need me. He tighten his grip on her and said I am not a patient man neither do I liked me talked to like this but I will forgive u coz I was wrong but dnt test my patience and dnt u ever, ever walk away from me again. Suhani wanted to cry but she would never break down or admit that he was hurting her and was just riding on the anger his words where stirring in her and she laugh and said I dnt need u, stop bull shitting yourself u not that important to me anymore. U where important but now u dnt exist and u need to realize and what nonsense are u speaking about yourself being patient dnt glorify yourself we both know that u not. She pushed against him again and he took his hands away from her arms and put it on her face and kissed her. It wasn't a gentle kiss, it was harsh and meant to punish. Suhani was shocked and felt the tears well up in her eyes as he kissed her she felt powerless but her anger was still her and so she bite his lip and he moved his mouth of hers but just for a second and then kissed her again and he bit her lip as well. He moved off her and saw that her lip was bleeding abit and he rubbed his lips gently on hers and as she slowly opened her mouth he kissed her again softly and after a while she couldn't help herself and responded and their kiss deepen and he felt her hands on his back and than in his hair and he ran his hands over her body.
Edited by sandiab - 10 years ago
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disclaimer: if u a hard core yuvani fan then dnt read the last paragraph lol. Yuvraj had a smile on his lips as he felt her kiss him he soften their kiss and held her the way he always had wanted to gently and his hands roam around her body. Suhani had felt as they continued kissing their anger draining away from them and they were becoming one and when that happened she forgot what she had been angry about all she could feel was his lips on hers. What had started off in anger had turned into something soft, gently and tender with a thousand emotions in it. Yuvraj finally broke the kiss and held her face and ran kisses all over her face he started at her forehead, eyelids, her cute nose, her adorable cheeks and then he kissed her lips and said I knew it no matter how much u tried u would give in to me. U love me and always have and u are mine and he kissed her again but this time his words finally got through the haze that he had put her in and she slowly remembered why she wanted him out of her life. She hated the way he said she loved him as if it was a given, as if just coz she was hurt her feelings would be exactly the same for him coz she supposedly loved him unconditionally. As if whatever had happened and her finding out the truth had not changed the way she saw him. The thing that rattled her the most though was the confidence he said those words in she could almost taste the smirk on his lips as he kissed her again. But he was dead wrong if he thought that she would give in so easily to him and so she lifted her leg and kicked him hard. Yuvraj screamed in pain and then said are u freaking mad and Suhani looked at him and said yes I am, I was mad to even think I would want to be with a person like u we nothing alike. And whatever happened here does not change a thing for me I still want u out of my life and u better stay away from me I want to have nothing to do with u and walked away. Yuvraj tried to grab her again but she shrugged him off and walked away. He was really in pain she had really kicked him hard he wanted to go after her but needed to stop and he rubbed the spot that she had kicked on and when he looked up again he was shocked to see that she was gone. He started screaming for her and running wildly trying to find her. Suhani had tried to walk off with as much dignity as she could but as soon as she took the corner she couldn't take it anymore and just ran blindly. She ran away from the way that she had just kissed him, she ran away from his lies, she ran away from the truth and she ran away from herself and she ran away from the thought that she wanted to ran back to him. She didn't know how long or far she had ran but she felt exhausted and drained as she felt the rain hit against her face she stopped finally and leant back against a tree. She had never welcomed the darkness more than she did now and as she did she closed her eyes and remembered the way he had kissed she felt the passion, the love in every part in her body and she touched her lips and smiled. But then she heard the thunder and it became mixed with all the things she had remembered of the looks between him and souyma. Her tears mixed on her face with the rain as she wanted desperately to remember the 1 true moment she had with him and then she felt a hand on her shoulder and she said Yuvraj and turned and hugged him. Just like always he didn't hug her back and she just wanted to bury herself in him and she ran her hands along his back and then put her hand in his hair as she laid her head on his chest and felt his heartbeat. She felt his arms come around her finally and she smiled and kissed his neck and ran kisses on him the way he had done to her and then finally got to his lips and kissed him. At first she felt him hesitating but then she felt him respond and bring her closer to him as he deepened the kiss he moved her against the tree and then they both slowly together went down the tree. She felt herself smile as she felt him cup her head and hold her shoulders as he placed her on the ground they kissed more and then he moved a little away from her and started to take of his shirt. When he did she touched him and ran her finders up and down him and then sat up and then started kissing his body she smiled as she did so and when she reached his neck she bite him and smiled as she kissed the place she bitten and was about to move to his lips. But just then the thunder was so loud that she hugged him tightly instant she felt as he gently touched her hair to smooth her and soon she was less scared and she looked up to thank him and was shocked as she looked into Aman's face.
Edited by sandiab - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sandi, just read first part and have to tell you how much I love it. Just oooh.
Now going to gobble up next part. You star! Send this to the bonehead writers.

Swallowed the rest. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. If I were a cheerleader, I would do acrobatic Rah Rahs for you.
And trust Yuvraj to carry a first-aid kit.
Edited by anita_m - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Sandi, just read first part and have to tell you how much I love it. Just oooh.
Now going to gobble up next part. You star! Send this to the bonehead writers.

Swallowed the rest. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. If I were a cheerleader, I would do acrobatic Rah Rahs for you.
And trust Yuvraj to carry a first-aid kit.

aww thanks sweetie glad u liked it and lol ya that 1st aid kit when I was writing it I was hating that thing so included it. Hw I wish that suhani would throw it on the ground as well for real lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 It was heaven... Goshh... such anger... such emotions... such KISS... awww it is the YUMMIEST ☺️ os I've ever read on IF... Too good... I want to jump onto the next part. Can you please pm me when you update Please please... its HOT the way I want to see them 😊
Will Suhani run away after watching Aman?? Yuvi beta You are gone 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fab update dear
N at d end u made total u turn dear
Yuvraj n suhani k beach ye aman kaha se aagya.
Loved it .
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Originally posted by: LovelyLopa

👏It was heaven... Goshh... such anger... such emotions... such KISS... awww it is the YUMMIEST ☺️os I've ever read on IF... Too good... I want to jump onto the next part. Can you please pm me when you update Please please... its HOT the way I want to see them 😊

aww so sweet. Unfortunately the 3rd part is the last part. I had actually done this os a couple of weeks back whilst I was still watching the show and so unfortunately since I dnt watch anymore I wnt be able to commit to another part. Bt dnt worry Apu convinced me to continue the 3 ffs I have written so I will definitely be updating those and I have a suhani OS that I plan on doing. So u have that to look forward to
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Originally posted by: ssna

Fab update dear
N at d end u made total u turn dear Yuvraj n suhani k beach ye aman kaha se aagya. Loved it .

thanks and lol I just could not help myself and had to include that hunk in the end lol. I was very afraid to post that part lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandiab

aww so sweet. Unfortunately the 3rd part is the last part. I had actually done this os a couple of weeks back whilst I was still watching the show and so unfortunately since I dnt watch anymore I wnt be able to commit to another part. Bt dnt worry Apu convinced me to continue the 3 ffs I have written so I will definitely be updating those and I have a suhani OS that I plan on doing. So u have that to look forward to

Its OK...😊 I'll be looking forward to that Suhani os. The ending just shocked me and I'm just too eager to know what'll happen next. Aman-Suhani-yuvraaj...😉 The CVs are too cruel to provide us this kind of content :(

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