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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have been tempted to write a OS after a long time. Unfortunately I am not a true romantic and talented like most of u here, but I hope suhani fans will pardon me coz she doesn't make an appearance here😳


Dadi was in a dilemma. She wanted to stay back and help her ladli woo her ladla but she had to go away to New York. It has been two months since she had her last Botox treatment. Wasn't it the other day when menaka exclaimed that

"dadi! Aapki wrinkles dekhke na mujhe geography ka contour line map yaad aarahi hain!" silly girl.

But before she go, she had to make sure soumya and rags followed her instructions.

"dadi, u r here and I was searching for u all over the house' she turned around to see a smiling soumya.

Aww such a beautiful girl. She suddenly felt a crush on the girl. Thank god Mr.Birla was not alive. He would have definitely fallen for this girl. She put away her frivolous thoughts and smiled at her.

"Yes, baby, tell me how much u have progressed in ur scheme woo dadi's ladla' .

"Ooh dadi, am sooo happy today!" giggled soumya. " Last night we went for a movie together."

"wow, that so amazing!" said rags who had just entered the room along with menaka.

"So which movie did u watch ? was it alone' or khamoshiyaan' I will ask anuj ji to take me for a movie tonight." Said menaka

Soumya's face dropped. " oh no menaka. I told yuvraj I feel like watching a movie to get rid of my sadness and he readily agreed. He wanted to take suhani too along with us but I told him suhani will be really upset if she knows how upset I am. And the dumbo he is, agreed to keep it a secret. He told me there was a movie playing that will lift my spirits . "

"Hmm good to know our plan is working. I always wanted him to be this bhola, that's y I never send him to work." said dadi proudly.

"But dadi I thought he would take me to a romantic movie and do u know which movie he took me to? "The boxtrolls" He said I will be really happy watching kids stuff" she pouted.

Menaka couldn't control her laughter. "soumya I think he will soon adopt u as his daughter"

Soumya twitched her lips. "No menaka Bhabhi. He has feelings for me. After we returned from the cinema hall, I again cried on his shoulders saying I am scared to sleep alone. He comforted me and said he will take me to my room."

Dadi smiled triumphantly. So her plan has been working.

"U mean to say, he ACTUALLY entered ur bedroom at half past 2 at midnight? Amazing news this is soumya. I would have loved to watch suhani's face had she known this" rags gave an evil smile.

"Haan rags babhi. He did. He made me lie on the bed and looked at me with expressions which I cannot fathom."

Dadi, rags and menaka looked at her eagerly like those teens waiting to watch the po*n movie.

"Then he said "soumya good night. " I held his hand and said 'please mat jao. I don't feel sleepy at all."

He slowly sat beside me on my bed. He told me he knew how to make me sleep in peace. Do u want to know what happened then?

She turned around to watch dadi rags and menaka look excited like Indian fans in the last over of world cup match.

"He sang so ja rajkumari soja' in that sexy voice of his. Completely out of tune I must say. I feared he would sing the whole song and I would lose my beauty sleep. So I closed my eyes and pretended to sleep. And he went away."

"Rags jiji do u think our yuvraj is umm u know err.. I mean "

"chup hoja menaka!" dadi thundered. " who hamara birla kahandaan ka chiraag hain. He cant be umm what u meant"

To be continued... (depends on whether anyone really wants me to do so😭😆

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sandiab thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣 🤣 that was sooo hot hahahahhahahahha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u pkaps, one-of-a-kind and sandi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it! Strange, na, considering we'd hate seeing it on screen? Please carry on. That end was too funny--have thought that myself. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice.
Plz continue.
Dadi botox & menaka comment was hilarious.
Saumya watched kids cinema😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear...u made my day..such a howlarious OS dedicated to dadi and co. If CVs could take at least your route they will garner more TRPs for best comedy show.Anyways... I too have the doubt if dumraj is ummm...u know what right🤣
Edited by RoshiniManeet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting os would loved to read wat happen next,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Loved it! Strange, na, considering we'd hate seeing it on screen? Please carry on. That end was too funny--have thought that myself. 😃

I know, but as the title suggests it's a twisted tale. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Dear...u made my day..such a howlarious OS dedicated to dadi and co. If CVs could take at least your route they will garner more TRPs for best comedy show.Anyways... I too have the doubt if dumraj is ummm...u know what right🤣

Ur suggestion reminds me of jaspal bhatti's show ulta Pulta where he made a serious teleshow but won the award for comedy show🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u guys
Weekend here and so will update on Sunday most probably . U r gonna see an unexpected twist again, I promise 😛

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