First OS for u Yuvani... Love u guys... ❤️

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Hey Thanks friends for ur commets... So here's the story of Yuvani... <3

Chapter 1

Scene 1 Suhaani's Room

Suhaani is worried about Sowmya's Confession in the party😭😭.. She thinks that "Sowmo thought Yuvaraj as Krishna"
She recieve a call from Krishna and he informs her about the divorce papers..
Suhaani is shocked to know it... She thinks to talk abt this to Sowmya...

Scene 2 Hall

Suhaani meets Sowmya in Hall... Sowmya feels embrassed to see Suhaani... Suhaaani notices this..

Suhaani ask Sowmya about the divorce matter and starts to ask plenty of questions...
Unable to answer her questions she starts to shout at Suhaaniii...

Suhaani calms her and says that "Sowmo!!!Dont get angry... Im saying this for ur welfare... U love Krishna.."

Sowmya becomes hyper and shouts saying "NOOO NOOO... I DONT LOVE KRISHNA... I LOVE OLY YUVARAJ..."

Hearing this all family members gather in hall...

Suhaani says "What do you mean Sowmo???Yuvarai is my husband??"😲

Sowmya says "Sooo!!!He is ur husband oly but he doesn't love you... He always loved me..."

Suhaani cant believe her ears.. Her best friend said that she loves her husband... OH GOD!!!!!

We can notice Evil smile in the faces of the Evils in Birla house (Dadi,Rags,Menaka)😉

Pratima and Shrad gets worried and tries to distract Suhaani... But Evil Dadi wont allow it... She starts. "Hey Ladki...(says all the truth to suhaani)"

Suhaani is dumbstruck... She stands idle... Sowmya's Confession runs in her mind...

Yuvaraj enters the house and says "Suhaani i got samosas for you"

He notices that Suhaani doesnt respond to him... He ask wats the matter... Sharad says that "Guru... Sowmya said all the truth to Suhaani bhabbi"

Yuvaraj is shocked to know abt it and he gives a cold look to Sowmya...😡😡

Yuvaraj calls.. "Suhaani...Suhaani" but no response...

Suhaani walks towards Pratima and ask "Ma..Is this true??? No rite!!!! Say ma!!!!" But Pratima doesnt answer her and cries..😭

Suhaani moves to Sharad and ask "Sharad Bhaiyya!!!! Do u also know the truth!!!!! Say Bhaiyya" and finds Sharad silence...

Slightly she moves towards Yuvaraj and doesnt know wat to ask him.. She notices Yuvaraj cant face her... She understands the situation and leaves to her room..

Everyone leave the place leaving Pratima,Sharad and Yuvaraj...

Scene 3 Suhaani Room

Suhaani enters the room... She remembers all the moments with Yuvaraj and Somya's Confession and the truth... She sits idle in bed...

Pratima and Sharad comes to her but she says "Sorry!!!Pls let me be alone for sometym" So they leave...

Yuvaraj comes to the room and doesn't know whether he needs to talk r not... But seeing her condition he left the room...


Scene 4 At Dining Table (Dinner)

Everyone are gathered for dinner... Yuvaraj searches for Suhaani... Sowmya serves food to Yuvaraj and acts sweet.. He gives a cold look to her... So she goes..

Yuvaraj ask Ramesh to call Suhaani...
After sometime Ramesh comes running and says Suhaani bhabhi is not in her roomm..

Everyone is shocked to know abt it except the Evills of Birla house...

Scenes 4 In road

Suhaani is walking in the roadd lonely in heavy rain... Still she cant believe her hears wat Sowmya said... Yuvaraj loved Sowmya but married me...
And Papa made him to do it... Everyone knows it but... Y!!! Y!!! Y!!!

On the other hand Yuvaraj and Sharad are in car searching for Suhaani...

The Evils in Birla home celebrate their victory...(hate them)

Suhaani remembers all the sweet moments with Yuvaraj and so do Yuvaraj...

Suhaani sees her engagement ring... She holds her mangalsutra tight and remembers Sowmya's confession and shouts "NNNOOO!!!!!"

She cries hard sitting in the middle of the road... She shouts.. "Y!!!Y!!!Y this happened to me... All betrayed me.. My parents,Maa,Sharad Bhaiyya,My best friend Sowmya and My love Yuvaraj"...
"How can they do this to me... How can they hurt my feelings... Im not a toy for them... None cares for me... Y this is happening to me... I didnt hurt anyone but y everyone are hurting me.."
On the other hand Yuvaraj is seeing everywhere for Suhaani... He tries her number... But she is not picking it up...

Sharad notices Yuvaraj eyes is full of tears and fear... and says to Yuvaraj "Guru.. Dont worry.. Nothng will happen to Bhabhi..We will find her..."

Yuvaraj says.. "Sharad!!!!Im so afraid...Nothing should happen to Suhaani...I Wont let anything happen to MY WIFE..."

Suhaani is cryinh hard and due to cold weather and rain she feels dizziness... and falls on the ground...

This chapter ends with three parts... First Suhaani in Ground..Second Yuvaraj searching for Suhaani.. Third Sowmya's Evil smile...

To be continued soonnn...

FRIENDS!!!!HOPE SO U ALL ENJOYED MY FIRST OS... COMMENT UR VIEWS ABT THIS..SEE U SOON...BYE... TAKE CARE...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start!! Let us see who save suhani!!
I got tired of this sowmya.. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An interesting start...looking forward to the next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start poor Suhani God Soumya is unbelievable
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OMG, wow. Nice, we will see Yuvraj's love for Suhani, now. Thanks for this. If not in the show, we can eat least see our dreams turning into reality here..
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Nice 1.. Its a speedy story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Hi everyone... Thanks for the response friends...😃😃

Soo here comes the next chapter...😊

CHAPTER 2

Scene 1 In Road

Yuvaraj and Sharad finds that some people are gathered together in a place...

Sharad gets down from car to see wats happening there😕... After some seconds he shouts "Guru...!!! Suhaani Bhabhi!!!"

Hearing Suhaani's name Yuvaraj runs to that place... There he finds Suhaani in the ground he was shocked...😲😲😲

He was heartbroken to see Suhaani like this...😭😭

He ran to her and shouted "Suhaani!!!!!Suhaani!!!! Wake up..!!!!!". Sharad was calling "Suhaani Bhabhiii!!!!".

But she didnt open her eyes... This frightened yuvaraj a lot...😲

And so... YUVARAJ LIFTED SUHAANI IN HIS ARMS😉... and ran to the car...

He asked Sharad to drive the car and he sat with Suhaani at the back of the car...


Scene 2 Birla Home

Pratima is worried😭 about Suhaani and prays to god to help Suhaani...

The Evils of Birla house celebrates the victory in sending Suhaani out of home... Sowmya is worried as yuvaraj is angry with her...
Rags and Menaka console her saying that Yuvaraj will forget Suhaani forever...
Dadi says that Yuvaraj will be happy as Suhaani left... So Sowmya try to attract him...
Sowmya feels happy...

At that time the door bell rings... Sowmya thinks Yuvaraj came back.. So runs to open the door...
She opens the door and is shocked seeing Yuvaraj lifting Suhaani in his arms...
She says "Yuvaraj!!!! Suhaaniii..."

But Yuvaraj didnt see her face... He just left to his room followed Sharad and Pratima...

The faces of Evils of Birla's house turned red... :P


Scene 3 Yuvani's Room

Doctor is checking Suhaani... He says that she is having Severe Fever... She needs to take complete rest...

Doctor injects injection to Suhaani but the pain is seen in Yuvaraj's face😭

Doctor leaves the place giving tablets to Yuvaraj... he says that take care of Suhaani.. She needs to take complete bed rest...

Yuvaraj sits beside Suhaani... He ask everyone to leave as he will take care of HIS WIFE...👏 Pratima and Sharad feels happy and left the place..

Sowmya face turned to red seeing Yuvaraj caring for Suhaani... She too leaves the place..

Now its Yuvani there alone... Suhaani sleeping and Yuvaraj sitting near her...

He remember the moments he enjoyed with Suhaani... Her smile... The Bhachan's dialogues... The way she teases him... Their eyelocks... Suhaani's kiss..😃😃..
He smiles thinking about these...
Then he remember Sowmya's confession... He gets angry.😡.
Then Suhaani state he remembers... The moment he saw in the road...
His eyes become wet...😭😭

Slowly he lifts his hand and tries to touch her hair... But stops in midway...

He says "Sorry Suhaani...!!! i know how much ur hurt... But the truth is that I don't love Sowmya... She was my past..."
"Y did u bring back her in our life... She is not fit to be her friend... Im Sorry!!! I Miss You Suhaani!!!" Saying this he started to cry.. 😭😭

Scene 4 In Yuvani room

Next Morning...

Suhaani wakes up... She finds difficult to get up...

She finds that Yuvaraj is holding her hand and sleeping near her in Chair...

She doesn't understand anything... she is thinking hard "What happened last night???"

She tries to take her hand from Yuvaraj... Yuvaraj opens his eyes... He wakes up and ask "How r u feeling now Suhaani???"

She jus say "Hmmm Im Okay!!! Let me go..."

Yuvaraj holds Suhaani's hand and say "Where??? You should not go anywhere!!!! You need to take complete rest!!!!"

Suhaani says "Im fyn... Take your hand... I need to go..."


To be continued sooonnn...


THANKS FOR YOUR RESPONSE FRIENDS... HOPE SO YOU ALL LIKE THIS...PLEASE COMMENT... BYE...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both Chapters were great! 👍🏼 I'm looking forward to seeing your next update! 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story
Very interesting
Plz could u pm me wn u update

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