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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it, beautifully written!
Can't wait for more, do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Awesome start

Loved it
Update soon

thanks will try to
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice story wow Suhani is married to Krishna and they have a daughter I like how Suhani have him the cold shoulder snd left him she deserves happiness she doesn't need Yuvraj to ruin her life, can't wait to read more

I really cnt wait for a role reversal in this show and suhani being all mean and cold to yuvraj. Its gona be awesome to see him try and win her over
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parm.

I loved it! Suhani and Krishna together. Two broken hearts mended together. I love it. I hope you'll have more flashback as to how the two got together. I feel somewhat sorry for Yuvraj but he should have spoken up sooner and told her he loved her...And he feels cheated????What the heck??? Isn't he the one that kept Suhani in the dark about how he felt about Souyma?? How could he feel cheated???Looking forward to the next update!👏

lol love and being in denial makes ppl think stupid things lol. And I have an idea of how they get together not sure which chapter I would put that in but it definitely will be in there
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Suhani and her family where at the temple for the janmasti(totally dnt know hw to spell it) prayers it had been a month since she had moved back home and Ada was adapting great to being with her parents plus seeing Krishna's parents all the time as well. She had gotten a job at an ad agency that didn't take her away too much from Ada and so she worked 2/3 days at their offices for half the day and the other days she worked from home. Just then she heard Ada asking her dad for ice cream and she told them no, that they would do their prayers 1st and then get her ice cream. She saw that Ada was about to argue and do her puppy dog face and told her to be a good girl and be patient and not stubborn. Just than the priest started the prayers and Suhani motioned for Ada to fold her hands and pray. Whilst the prayer was going on Ada was getting more and more agitated she just wanted her ice cream and when she saw that no 1 was looking at her she slowly went out of the temple to buy it.

Yuvraj had just parked the car whilst they were coming from the airport ma had said she wanted to come to the temple before going home the place was so full so he dropped sharad and ma as close as he could get to the temple and told then he would get parking and then come. He was near the temple when some1 bumped into him and he looked down into a big pair of eyes with full tears in her eyes that he immediately recognized as she was muttering about her ice cream. He bent down and wiped her tears and told her sorry that he would get another ice cream for her and she said he couldn't coz she had to go before her mummy noticed that she was gone and got angry. He told her not to worry and that he would take the blame and said her name. She asked him how he knew her name and he touched the chain on her neck and she smiled and asked why he would take the blame and he said coz he wanted to be her friend and she smiled and put her hand out and said dost. He shook her hand and she surprised him by kissing him on the cheek and he couldn't help but remember when her mother had kissed him the same way and smiled at her and kissed her back.

He carried her then and said lets go for your ice cream when he heard Suhani scream Ada Suhani ran and took her out of his arms and as she showered kisses on her asking her where she went. When Ada got a word in she said ice cream, Suhani angrily put her down and said but I told u I would get it for u in a little while and she unknowingly tighten her hand on her hand and said do u know what I had been through when I saw u wnt by me. And what where u doing going with a stranger and she then saw Ada's hand being taken away from hers and looked up and was shocked to see Yuvraj. They both looked at each another for a while and then she heard Pratima ma say that don't scold the baby and that kids do these sort of things and said they should go back inside and pray. Suhani then took Ada's hand away from Yuvraj's and walked away. He watched as she walked away from him and once she was inside he heard sharad say Guru lets go inside as well and he told Sharad to go that he just needed to get something and would be back.

Suhani was holding Ada's hand as she listened half heartedly to the prayer she had been so happy when she had seen ma and had looked down to introduce Ada to her when she realised that she wasn't around. In those few seconds of her missing she felt as if she had aged a hundred years and thought to herself when Krishna was alive he should spoil her rotten but now with her grandparents being around her all the time it was worse and then she would have to be a little stricter with her. Just then she heard Ada say ice cream and she was gona freak out at her when she saw that it was Yuvraj that had given it to her Ada told him thanks dost and he said it's ok dost. She watched them for a few seconds and then looked away. Ada held his hand along with her ice cream and as he straightened up he looked at Suhani he stared at her the entire time and didn't hear a thing that was said at the prayer and then he felt a tug on his hand. Suhani was going forward with Ada to pray when she felt Ada not moving and looked down and saw that her hands was with Yuvraj and then looked at him and was shocked to see that he had been staring at her. She heard Ada say come with me dost and lets go and pray and Yuvraj finally took his eyes of Suhani and they all went together to pray. When Pratima and Sharad saw the 3 of them together they smiled and they both said at the same time perfect and then looked at each another sadly as they realized that nothing was perfect. The whole time they were at the temple Pratima watched as Yuvraj was besotted with Ada it had been soo long that she had seen him really smile and laugh and she couldn't help but fall for Ada as well she was so adorable. So when Lata suggested that before they go home that they come and have tea by them she readily agreed.

Whilst they where they she couldn't help but notice that if Yuvraj attention wasn't on Ada that it was on Suhani they didn't speak much but there was something about the way he was looking at Suhani that made her wondering. She had been amazed when he had told her and Sharad that it was time that they went back home he had just made them pack a bag and said that the rest of their stuff would be packed and sent to them later. She wondered than if the reason he was coming back was coz he had heard that Suhani was back here. She knew the change that had come over him was coz of her he had never been the same ever since suhani had gotten married again he had become more in control, darker and a loner and then when they had heard that Krishna had died something once again changed about him. Sometimes he was so difficult to understand especially when it came to his feelings for Suhani and for now there was definitely something going in his mind about Suhani and she wondered what it was.

Suhani was in her room Ada was soundly asleep next to her and she was deep in thought and this time her thoughts wouldn't on Krishna surprisingly but on Yuvraj. She couldn't stop thinking about the way he looked at her today if she hadn't noticed him staring at her whilst she was praying when they were at home she definitely felt his stare on her. There was something so intense about his stares that it unnerved her it was almost like he was angry at her and she wondered for what but then told herself to stop thinking about him coz he was a riddle she would never solve and which she didn't want to solve. She hoped to see ma and sharad more though she had missed them but hoped that she didn't have to see too much of him as well and as she remembered how he and Ada were together she didn't know why but she didn't really like their closeness at all.

Yuvraj was in his room he had gotten a punching bag brought to his room earlier and he was furiously punching it as he remembered how unaffected Suhani was by him. He hadn't thought about what their 1st meeting was gona be like and he hadn't expected it to happen so soon but he didn't expect her to be so unaffected by him it. She smiled at him politely, even thanked him for the ice cream him he bought for Ada but he might as well have been a stranger for her and that didn't sit down well with him at all. The only time he knew he had affected her was when she had given him tea and their hands had touched and they had stared into each an others eyes and he knew that he was affecting her. But then he remembered how she had been smiling and laughing with Sharad and ma and he didn't like it at all. He stopped punching the bag and went over to his wardrobe and took out the bottle of alcohol he had kept inside and drunk from it straight and then he noticed the picture of Ada and Suhani that he had got of Suhani's facebook. He took it out and couldn't help but smile as he looked at Ada if he had thought that she was adorable from her pictures meeting her in person she was beyond lovable. When he first decided what he wanted from Suhani he wondered about how he was gona deal with Ada but meeting her now he knew that she and him where gona be completely fine with each another. She was absolutely cute just like how her mother should be as he remembered those big clear eyes with so much masti, love and laughter he couldn't help but smile. And then he remembered another set of eyes that had the same look and should look at him almost worshipping him and he smiled and then he remembered today her stare was so blank, cold, unaffected. Their innocence lost somewhere her eyes were filled with caution now, distrust, her love reserved only for a few ada, his mom, Sharad. Then he took another sip of his drink and knew she probably didn't want to see him again but he didn't care what she wanted coz this time unlike before he was gona take want he wanted. By force and by hook or crook he will get what he wanted. He smiled wickedly as he thought to himself that Suhani would be seeing a lot of him from now onwards, a whole lot more.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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What yuvraj want from suhani?? So he is going to be there where she goes.. Dont tell me he bought her agency..

Hope to see more of yuvraj-Ada.. How krishna-suhani got together????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
fantastic update girl.wicked yuvi at the end holds my interest..wanna c wat he does )
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaad_luvz

Plz continue...
Eagrly waiting

lol where did u dig this out from I had so forgotten about it. Not sure if I can update coz I just wrote this ss in the spur of the moment and hadn't really thought of my ending. I normally when I start an ff/os I know in my mind how I each chapter would be. Bt with this SS I was a bit stuck coz I dnt knw hw to show suhani fell back in love with Yuvraj. Bt if I can think of hw I will try and do something since this topic hasn't been closed yet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hhh...
I read dis bfre mnthz...
Was waitin fr ua updte...
I cmnt juz to remind u...
Its oky..I lve to read ua fictns...
Now readin new ss f suhani and aman..
Lvin it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaad_luvz

Hhh...
I read dis bfre mnthz...
Was waitin fr ua updte...
I cmnt juz to remind u...
Its oky..I lve to read ua fictns...
Now readin new ss f suhani and aman..
Lvin it

awww how sweet u know I will try and see when I can update this 1 and hw it goes maybe whilst writing it I will get inspired and I am glad u liked the new 1

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