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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

😆 ha ha it was zubinnnn!!!!
i was getting ideas
hope purvi bhari nahi ho gi
per madam hain koun 😊

great scene 👏 👏 👏 and amazinly done with the songs..you lovee music na 😊 you have a lovely choice

vishal was great but bechare ko ye kahan pata ke us ke bhi buree din ayne wale hain 😉

Thank you so much there Amna... Pata tha ki you would have imagined Vishal and Sandy to be the ones😉 Lekin unki meeting bhi thoda hatke hoga har baar😃

As for songs thanks... Yes I love music... Kaheen na kaheen unke bina zindagi pheekha lagne lagta hai naa😛

Haan, Vishal ko kya pata ki uski bechari aaj hi aane waali hai😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rockswizard

cool. finally zubin found purvi. hopefully he wnt lose her again warna pagal ho jayega bechara

Thank Shruti.... Haan bechara Zubin... Nai is baar no missing😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kanan_26

excellent fantabulous amazing!
wowowowowowowowowowowowowo
i havent seen a more perfect and gud holi part as this before!
aap mein talent bhara para hai!
just keep up the gud work mt wonderful writer!
u have left me curious and speechless again!
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Vove appreciation kuch zyada hi hai Kanan... But thanks anyways😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey krithika!! U did a fantabulous job. I haven't seen such an excellent holi not even in Movies!!!!!!!
Mind Blowing!!!!
Finally u fulfill my wish!!!!!
Enjoyed each an every part of this colorful holi.......
I am in real impressed by ur way of thinking and imagination!!!!!!!!

I am now gradually becoming a fan of yours!!!!!! ;)
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Thank you thank you thank you... Aaj se mujhse kabhi garmi ki mehsoos nahi hogi😉 On a serious note.... That was awesome appreciation, thanks😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hearing the loud sound everybody turned towards to it… 😲

Aryan and Dipika came out of their trance and looked at each other surprised…. 😳 Aryan let go of her and Dipika turned to go towards the source of the noise, just once looking back at Aryan…. 😉

This time too both didn't have regrets of coming closer… Something told they were right, maybe their hearts! But something yet again stopped them from coming more closer… Maybe their mind!

Neha, Boxer, Ajay, Francis ran to the source of noise and found a group already gathered there… Parting it they peeped in to see a shocked Zubin on the ground and with Purvi on top of him… 🤪 Both didn't even seem realize that a crowd had formed and were intense looking at each other…. 😉

Ajay and Boxer knelt beside them and raised their eyebrows at each other… 😉 Ajay shrugged and indicated them both… Boxer nodded and both went on their elbows looking at Zubin and Purvi in turns, who had forgotten themselves…. Ajay inserted his hand in between their faces and shook it hard… No response…. 😳

Slowly Boxer whispered….

Boxer: Mr. Driver!

No response..... Zubin was busily looking at her still stunned by the fall and her presence.... 😃

Boxer: (Again)Zubin! Zubinnnn!!!!!

From between the space, Ajay and Boxer looked at each other questioningly…. 🤔 Then thinking Ajay shouted in Zubin's ear……

Ajay: ZUBIN!!!! 😲

Startled Zubin jerked up and Purvi rolled off him… Zubin looked here and there stunned while Boxer and Ajay giggled…. 😆

From the crowd Neha exclaimed….

Neha: Purvi! Tum? ❓

Saying Neha extended her hand to her... Purvi took her hand and got up smiling a little at Zubin… Zubin looked at her blinking all blank, still sitting on the ground…

Standing up Ajay banged on his back and said….

Ajay: Aise hi neeche hi baithe rehene ka irada hai kya? Uth! Lagta hai teri kismat chamak gayi! (Grinning 😃 )

Boxer helped Zubin up who was still looking at Purvi as if he had seen something out of the sky! 😔

Francis, Dipika, Aryan, Shotgun, Haseena, Shotgun's mother and Ajay's mother reached the group and looked on puzzled at what was happening! 🤔

Neha: (To Ajay) Tchch… Ajay! (To Purvi) Purvi ho naa tum? Kitne maheene hue milke! (Glancing towards Zubin) Tum Zubin se milne aayi ho? ❓

Purvi glanced at Zubin answering nothing while Zubin looked at her puzzled not knowing what to do….

Boxer nudged him and said softly….

Boxer: Oie… Kya? Tumhari deewani hai, hum interrogation karenge kya? Jaa pooch koun hai vo, tumhe kaise jaanti hai, kyun aayi hai? Jaa naa!

But Zubin looked at him wide eyed then at Purvi as if Boxer had told him to do something frightening! 😆

Ajay hit his head and indicated to Neha, who told him to wait…

Neha: Purvi, tum chalo… Pehle dekhein kaheen chot to nahi lagi hai!

Saying Neha led off Purvi away... Haseena and Dipika nodded to each other and followed them…

Zubin tilted his head to look at Purvi go, who looked back at him and blushed a little… Zubin lost balance and again fell down!

Boxer: (Shocked) Are Zubin! 😲

Seeing this everyone burst out laughing while Boxer helped him up again and Zubin grinned sheepishly…. 😆

Ajay's Mother: Ab ye kya nayi kahani hai? 😉

Shotgun: Kahani puraani hai aunty! Hero ka pata hai, lekin pata nahi heroine kaise aayi!

Shotgun's Mother: Kya?!?!? ❓

Shotgun: Vo maa…

Shotgun told them all that had happened since last year's dandiya function, diwali function and Boxer's marriage function…. And how they had been searching for Purvi these many months!

The rest of the apartment members had dispersed to take a little rest before the next game….

Ajay's Mother: (Smiling) Oh… To ye hai kahani… Lekin hai bahut achchi… (To Shotgun's mother) Chaliye, usi ladki se hi pooch lete hain ki vo koun hai?

Saying both the mothers went off in the direction Neha and the others had gone…

Seeing them go Ajay said to Zubin….

Ajay: Oie Zubin… Tujhe dekhne aayi hai, aur tere alawa sab dekh rahe hain… Chal naa! Hum dekhein ki ye pyaar ki diwani aakhir hai koun? 😉

Zubin just looked at him and nodded automatically, blinking blank…

Ajay and Boxer hit their heads and dragged him off… Shotgun followed giggling… Aryan and Francis looked at all the happenings amused by the turn of events…

Then both of them looked at each other… Their smile vanished and each daggers with their glance…. 😡

Both of them stared at each other for a while and went off in opposite directions!
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Posted: 17 years ago

On a stone bench a little farther from the ground….

Purvi was seated… Neha and Haseena were seated on her both sides and were looking at her as if sizing her up…. 😳

Dipika had pulled up a plastic chair and was sitting with them to listen to Purvi's side of the story!

Neha: Ab bolo! Tum Purvi hi ho… Mujhe yaad hai tum aakhri baar Boxer Haseena ke funtcion me milte the... To itne maheene kahan thi? ❓

Before Purvi could answer anything, Haseena interrupted and said....

Haseena: Offo Neha… Pehle ye to poocho ki ye koun hai aur Zubin ko kaise jaanti hai? (To Purvi) Bolo koun ho tum?

Catching Purvi's shoulder and making her face her....

Neha: Haan…. Kahan se aayi ho? ❓

Purvi opened her mouth to answer her question when Haseena caught her and made Purvi face her....

Haseena: Kahan jaogi? ❓

Neha: (Surprised) Kya Haseena? 😔

Haseena: Oh! Mera matlab kahan gayi thi itne din? 😃

Neha: (Nodding) Haan… Zubin ko kaise jaanti ho? ❓

Haseena: Kyun aayi phir gayi? ❓

Purvi kept looking at each other and tried to answer their question…. But both of them just continues their tirade of questions without letting her answer any question... Purvi looked at each of them feeling very scared…. 😒

Dipika felt pity with her state and said sternly…

Dipika: Tum dono…. Ab bas bhi karo! Use kuch bolne ka mouka bhi doge? (Softly) Purvi?! Relax… Kuch peena chahogi? 😊

Purvi just mildly shook her head and bent her head looking back…

Dipika, Neha and Haseena looked back and found the rest of the gang coming there… 😉

Haseena and Neha looked at each and winked…. 😉

As the group reached them, Dipika looked back at Purvi and said…

Dipika: Purvi… Ye sab dost hi hain! Agar tum kuch batana chaho, to keh sakti ho… Agar nahi batana hai to theek….

Purvi: (Hastily said in a mild, soft tone) Ji nahi… Aisa kuch nahi! 😳

Purvi looked up at Zubin and smiled a little… Zubin's eyes widened in shock and his mouth hung open… Blushing Purvi bent her head… Ajay looked at Zubin and rolling his eyes upwards said…. 😔

Ajay: Dyaan se! Kaheen makhi andar naa ghus jaye! 😆

Saying he shut his mouth but Zubin seemed not to realize it and kept staring at her….☺️

Purvi: (Head still down) Ji main… Unke gaoun se hi hoon!

Neha: (Puzzled) Ye unke, kinke? 🤔

Silently Purvi raised her hand and showed Zubin.... Everyone looked at each other understandingly, while Zubin looked on stupidly… 🤪

Haseena: Oh ho... Abhi se Zubin unkeeee hue... Hai hai... Ye sab chodo.... Phir? ❓

Purvi: Ji main naa… Vo inke ek uncle jo abhi abhi guzare the, unhe achchi tarah se jaanti hoon… Foreign jaane se pehle vo meri mother se aake meri marriage inse fix ki thi… Main humare gaon ke school me teacher hoon… Inke uncle ne kaha tha ki videsh se aane ke baad vo inhe surprise dena chahate the…

Zubin looked on surprised as the reason of Purvi's presence in his life unfolded… He had always thought his uncle to be an irresponsible person, who had died in the Bahamas, leaving him a debt…. Now seeing what he had done for him Zubin felt very sad at his loss… 😒

Neha: Are wah! 😛 To… Tum kabhi Zubin se mile ho?

Purvi: (Looking up at her) Ji nahi… Unki sirf photo dekhi hai… Humne kuch din intezaar kiya, to pata chala ki uncle ka dehaant ho gaya…. Main bahut dukhi hui… Mother ne meri marriage ksi aur se karna chaha, lekin mujhe ye hi pasand the!

At this every body smiled looking at Zubin who now even blushed a little…. 😳

Ajay: Hoie oie! (Grinning 😃 )Pyaar ho to aisi! Phir?

Purvi: Phir hum inhe dekhne yahan aaye… Inke baare me inke uncle ne hume sab kuch bataya hai!

Haseena: To tum, Zubin se pehli baar hi kyun nahi mili!

Purvi: Ji maine inhe pehli baar dandiya function me dekha tha… Tab inse seedhe baat karna mujhe bahut shy hua… Uske baad bhi har function me inhe dekhne aati, baat karne…. Lekin….☺️

As Purvi stopped Neha looked up at everyone smiling, while the others were also happy for Zubin! 😛

Haseena: Phir humari shaadi function ke baad, kyun nahi aayi?

Purvi: (Sadly) Ji vo kya hai… Meri mother mere liye alliance dekh rahi hai…. Main hamesha unse jhooth keh ke yahan aa jaati thi, ki meri saheliyaan mujhe festival ke liye Mumbai bula rahe hain…. Isliye mother allow karti… Ab teen maheenon me koi festival nahi tha, to nahi aa saki! 😕

Dipika: Purvi, ye achchi baat hai…. Lekin tum baat karne hi aayi thi naa, to aaj bhi kyun bhaagne lagi?

Purvi silently looked up at Zubin and then at the others and said…

Purvi: I feel shy…. Aaj to inse baat karne hi aayi thi, lekin inhe dekhte hi main himmat nahi juta paayi aur…. 😕

Haseena: (Sighing) Wow… Kya love story hai! Ek taraf se photo dekhke pehla pyaar aur doosri taraf ek hi nazar me pehla pyaar! 😉

The others nodded smiling… Silence prevailed for a while, not knowing what to do now…

Dipika: (Grasping Purvi's hand) Purvi shukar hai tum aaj giri… Giri bhi sahi jagah! (Smiling 😊 ) Mujhe lagta hai ki tum dono ko(Looking up at Zubin) ab baat karni chahiye… Aise hi to nahi chalega naa?

Purvi and Zubin looked at each understanding that this hide and seek cannot go on for long… 😳

Ajay's Mother: Tab to theek hai… Aaj holi hai! Naye rishte ki shuruaat aaj se ho to bahut shubh hai… (Smiling) Tum dono baat karo!

Ajay: Haan haan baat karo… Hum hain naa… Don't worry…. Any problem hum madad karenge! 😃

Ajay said earnestly while Neha and Haseena too nodded...

Shotgun's Mother: (Sternly) Tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho? Chalo... Inhe akele me baat karne do!

Neha: Nahi aunty… Ye pehli baar baat kar rahe hain naa? Inhe help chahiye to! 😉

Shotgun's mother, Shotgun and Dipika shook their heads smiling and went off to get a drink…. 😆

Ajay's Mother: Kyun? Tumhe aur Ajay ko zaroorat padi kisi ki? 😳

Neha: (Surprised) MAA!☺️

Ajay's Mother: To chalo! 😳

As a good ideal daughter-in-law Neha got up… As Ajay made way to sit on Dipika's chair, Ajay's mother looked at him sternly stretched her hand towards the ground and Ajay scurried off…

Smiling Ajay's mother nodded at Purvi and went off…

Boxer put his arms around Haseena and led her off too….

Purvi sat on the bench stealing glances at Zubin… Zubin stood away from her blinking looking helpless… 🤪



From a little far away Neha and Ajay watched them….

Neha: Ye Zubin ka kya? Aisa hi khada rahega kya?

Ajay: Vo tumhare jaisa hai kya? Seedhe aake keh diya, I love you! Vo Zubin hai, agar Purvi kuch kare to theek… 🤔

Neha looked at him pointedly and started hitting him…. Laughing and shouting Ajay ran all over the ground trying to escape her beatings…..



Here Zubin approached Purvi slowly and stood in front of her…. Purvi got up from the bench and looked at him….

Zubin: Vo… Er… Tum… Main!

Purvi: (Smiling) Nai kuch mat kahiye… Bas ye kahiye ki kya main aapko pasand hoon?

Zubin looked at her surprised at her direct question… Then smiling he just nodded… Purvi became very happy and smiled broadly…

Without waiting another second she hugged him… Zubin looked shocked for a moment, 😲 but reciprocated her hug… He felt thankful to his uncle for giving him a meaningful life ahead… 😳



At the other end the whole group looked at each other happily… 😛 👏

Ajay and Boxer gave a high five and hugged each other…… 🤗

Aryan also watched Zubin and felt happy for Zubin…. He remembered vividly that once Zubin had mentioned that marriage in their community was rare… But now his life had become worthful and he felt happy for his colleague…. 👍🏼

Francis looked at Zubin and Purvi and he too felt happy for the new found relationship…

Instantly he looked at Aryan and Dipika and thought…. "Duniye me sab sabko samajh rahe hain… Sirf ye dono hain ki!!! Kuch aisa karna padega ki at least they start thinking that what they are thinking about each other is wrong… It is all nothing but mis-understanding! Just mis-understanding!" 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great update my friend!!!!
waiting 4 some more spicy, delicious, and tarke daar update!!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
oye hoye zubin ko uski purvi mil gayi 😳. That's great. 👏
Vishal and my thinking is same "Duniye me sab sabko samajh rahe hain… Sirf ye dono hain ki!!! 😉
Well when is the marriage ceremony of zubin? 😉
Loved the dialogues mindblowing,fantastic,great,fantabolous.

waiting egarly ..............
Edited by ruha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was great.

fianlly the mistery of purvi is over and zubin gets his love.

aryan do something, please say l love you dipika.
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Posted: 17 years ago
aree wah wah wah wah!
hum to aapki in writing ki adaaon par mar gaye hai hai!
woowowowowowowowwowowo
fantabulous amazing excellent!
to ss mein ek aur love story kya baat hai woow
i am speechless again and yaa frac plz do something abt aryan and deepika!
keep up the gud no actually excellent work!
u rock and even how much i praise ir writings its not enough!
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