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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kanan_26

hey u have got me even more curious now cant wait to read the update!!!!
fantabulous!!!!! 👏

😆Sure kanan, keep getting curious and you'll get more interesting details😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks a lot Shani😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti



She came sliding down the plank and landed plonk on him... The plank's end which supported a plate of red color flew into the air and sprayed everyone around with red color.

Call it fortune, call it coincidence... The color landed straight on to the her forehead who looked into his shocked face.

i am really happy for 'someone'😳 😳 whenever i imagine..........

lagta hai aryan ke baad kisi aur ka bura time ayne wal hai 😉 😆

dont worry abhi bhi thora aur bardash kerne ka maada hai hum main
but update soon😃 bahut dinoon se khli khali lag raha hai!

bechare aryan ki khabar jo nahi suni..........
waiting when he will find out ke francis is apna vishal😳
heartfail ho jaye ga ya nervous breakdown😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

i am really happy for 'someone'😳 😳 whenever i imagine..........

lagta hai aryan ke baad kisi aur ka bura time ayne wal hai 😉 😆

dont worry abhi bhi thora aur bardash kerne ka maada hai hum main
but update soon😃 bahut dinoon se khli khali lag raha hai!

bechare aryan ki khabar jo nahi suni..........
waiting when he will find out ke francis is apna vishal😳
heartfail ho jaye ga ya nervous breakdown😆

Tum bhi naa Amna.... Lekin guessing right hai kisi ka heart fail hone waala hai, lekin uska nahi jiska tum soch rahi ho... Kisi aur ka😉

As for Aryan... There's gonna bhi a hyper disappointment for you guys today

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Posted: 17 years ago
It was a good day or a great day for two friends who had seen each other after a long while…. 😛

In the evening close to leaving home….

Dipika was leaning back on her chair checking a file… Francis was seated beside her table on a chair, legs on the desk and munching a chocolate….. 😆

Dipika looked at him disapprovingly and said…. 😔

Dipika: Tum bhi naa Vishal…. Office hai ye… And what is this, legs on the desk… Kitni baar kaha… Neeche rakho!

Coming out from his munching session Vishal looked at her reproachfully and said…..

Vishal: Deeps…. Main Francis hoon…. Vishal nahi… Kitni baar kaha hai maine bhi… Tum ho ki maanti hi nahi… Koi sun lega to? ❓

Dipika: (Apologetically) Oh sorry baba... Bhool gayi… Lekin tumhe Francis bulana achcha nahi lagta…. (Smiling) Anyways Francis ji, aap zaraa apne pair ko neeche rakhne ki kasht karenge…. Vo kya hai ise Special Squad Office kaha jaata hai… Aur yahan thoda to discipline hone chahiye naa…. Aur vo bhi hours hai naa isliye! 😛

Grinning at her Vishal said….. 😃

Vishal: Deeps…. Mujhe pata hai… Lekin Expedite….

Dipika: (Finishing it for him) Kisi ki baat nahi manta… Aur khud jo chahatha hai wahi karta hai…. Ek hi din me mujhe dialog yaad aa gaya Vi…. Ooops… (Smiling) Francis! 😉

Vishal: Right! Isliye bekaar me kuch mat kehenaa Expedite se…. Kyunki Vishal tumhara har baat manega… No questions…. Lekin Francis Ashokraj Expedite is a haughty snotty type! 🤪

Dipika: Vi... I mean Francis….Ek baat batao… Main bhi dekh rahi hoon jab se aaye ho tab se kuch na kuch khaa rahe ho… Race film ke RD jaise! 🤔

Francis: (Laughing 😆 ) Hey… How did you guess? Pukka unhi ka style follow kar raha hoon… Nice investigator yaar…. Mujhe bahut pasand hai…. Unique!

Dipika: (Shaking her head 😔 ) Jiska sir khud deep fry hua ho, vo doosron ke antics ko suberb hi kahega…. Weirdoes… You and that RD too….

Francis: Hey Deeps… That's not fair hunh! Kya kami hai usme? Dikhne me vo aisa nahi hai, lekin uski investigative style ki dat deni padegi naa…. Aur…

Francis stopped as Dipika's cell buzzed… Dipika saw the number which was new…. Attending the call…

Dipika: Hello!

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Dipika: Ji main Dipika Gosh hi bol rahi hoon…

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Dipika: (Shocked straightening) Kya?!?!? 😲

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Dipika: Ji main dekhoongi….

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Dipika: Please! Main keh rahi hoon naa…. I'll take care! 😕

Saying Dipika kept the phone…. Seeing her shocked Francis had also straightened and looked at her worried….

Francis: Dipika… Kya hua? Kiska phone tha? ❓

Francis could guess that Dipika was very angry at the moment because of the news she had heard at the other end….

Seeing that she was not answering Francis stood up and placing a hand on her shoulder asked…. 😡

Francis: Dipika… Kya baat hai? ❓

Dipika looked at him fuming and before she could answer the cabin door opened…. 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aryan followed by Ajay and Dipika entered the cabin… He was about to his place when he stopped short seeing Francis and Dipika… His expression turned from surprise to shock to astonishment to anger seeing Francis's hand on Dipika's shoulder… 😡

Aryan: Kya ho raha hai yahan? ❓

Dipika looked at him hardly getting his meaning, but Francis straightened not understanding what Aryan was asking about…. 😳

Dipika stood up and asked in turn….

Dipika: Ye mujhe poochna chahiye ki, kya ho raha hai? Kahan gaye the tum log? 😡

Aryan looked back at her hard and fast and replied in a casual way….

Aryan: Tumhara matlab? Main kehke to gaya tha ki ek lead ko follow karne jaa raha hoon….

Dipika came out from her table and stood in front of Aryan…. Looking at him straight into his eyes she asked….

Dipika: Jhooth! Jhooth mat bolo Aryan…. Mujhe pata hai tum koi lead follow karne nahi gaye the…. (Glaring once at Ajay and Boxer who stood with heads hung down) 😡

Aryan: (Understanding, sarcastically) Pata hai to poocha kyun? 😈

Dipika: Aryan baat ko taalo mat.... Saaf saaf batao kahan gaye the? 😕

Aryan: (Angrily 😡 )Fine! Gaya tha... Waheen… Jahan se tumhe information mili thi… Mumbai Times newspaper office!

Dipika fought her fury and asked him…..

Dipika: Aryan is baar tum had par kar gaye…. Pehle se hi hum itni pareshaani me hain… Case ke silsile me, mission ke silsile me… And you had to go and bash up that reporter!

Francis who was standing near Dipika's table came behind her shocked about the fact that Aryan had beat a reporter up…. 😲

Aryan: (Getting angry 😡 )Media waale hain to iska matlab ye nahi ki jo chahe kuch bhi kar sakte hain…. Ek baar bhi nahi socha ki news publish karte hain to uska case ke investigation me kya asar padega….

Dipika: (Getting angry herself 😡 ) Media waale hain Aryan… All they want is a news…. That's it! Unke consequences vo kyun sochein? We are the ones who have to be careful not to leak details…..

Boxer: (In a little voice 😒 ) Isi wajah se hi police aur media waalon ki banti hi nahi… Unse darke to hum kaam nahi kar sakte! In fact unhe hum se….

Boxer stopped saying anything further seeing that Dipika was glaring at him….

Dipika: Boxer…. That's not done! This is not the way a responsible officer behaves…. (Looking at Aryan) Aryan tum samajh nahi rahe ho… Abhi promote hue ho… Ab iska kya asar ho sakta hai pata bhi hai tumhe? And again that media person is not going to stay quiet… Isko bhi chaapne waale hain…. How aggressive… 😔

Ajay: (Sarcastically intervening Dipika) Chaapke to dekhe… Use usike chaap machine me rakhke main chaap doonga use…. 😡

Dipika: (Raising her voice) Ajay… Tum log situation ko samajhne ki koshish kyun nahi karte? This is not an ordinary matter anymore….

Francis who was listening to everything standing behind Dipika said…

Francis: Haan Aryan… Ek reporter pe haath uthana, this may become serious… Aur….

Aryan: (Interrupting him) Excuse me…. Ye humara maamla hai… We are talking, so we'll manage about it!

Francis: (Trying to control his voice) Ab jab tak main yahan hoon whatever happens here is not your matter anymore Aryan Khanna… Bhulo mat Aryan… Tum logon ke activities se humare mission par bhi asar ho sakta hai… And that (Stressing) I will not allow…. 😳

Boxer: Dipika… Humari galti nahi thi… Vo bata hi nahi raha tha ki use information kaise mili… Isliye hume….

Dipika: Tumhari galti nahi thi??? Tumhari hi galti thi…. Ab use itnaa peeta hai to pata chala ki use information kaise mili?

At this Aryan, Ajay and Boxer looked at each other guiltily… Yes they did get to know how the information went out… And when they knew it they couldn't believe their ears and chided themselves for been so careless….. 😔

Ajay: Vo… Hume nahi…

Dipika: Pata chala naa…. That (Looking at each of the three pointedly) you were the reasons for that! 😲

Frowning confused Francis asked….

Francis: Dipika… What is this? Inki wajah se case details press ko kaise mili?

Dipika: (Staring at the trio again in turns) Bolo… Pooch raha hai naa… Tell him… We discussed the case details in a hotel day before yesterday night, which happens to be a public place…. And our very very good luck (Sarcastically 😈 ) just then the reporter happened to be around…. And voila we have got ourselves into trouble!

Francis: (Shocked 😲 ) What the heck? Aryan this is not done… Ye to itna simple hai ki we don't discuss cases in public Aryan, unless needed… Itne careless….

Aryan: (Getting hyper at Francis's interruption 😡 ) Excuse me… Francis mujhe rules samjhane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai… Its better you know how to behave in a office!

Hearing Aryan talk like this Dipika looked at Francis shocked and stopped him….

Dipika: Aryan! Tum keh kya rahe ho pata hai? ❓

Already in the top with anger Aryan took hold of her left arm and said….

Aryan: I don't care…. Maine jo kiya sahi kiya and I care a damn about what anyone thinks!

Dipika looked at Aryan shocked at his reaction….. At this even Ajay, Boxer and Francis started….

Dipika winced a little at Aryan's hold, but Aryan looking at Francis didn't notice this…

Even before Ajay and Boxer could control Aryan, Francis came forward and angrily pried of Aryan's hand from her arm and said….

Francis: Aryan get a hold on yourself….. Ab tumhare behaviour se kya pata chalta hai? You are becoming jungle day by day Aryan! 😡

Aryan looked at Dipika shocked himself at how he had reacted…. 😔

Dipika's anger was replaced by upsetness and Aryan noticed that her eyes glistened…. 😕

Aryan: (In a little voice 😕 ) Dipi…

Listening to nothing Dipika by passed him, Ajay and Boxer and went off from the cabin…. 😒
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aryan shook his head thinking of how he had reacted.... He chided himself for getting hyper for no reason.... Shaking his head he immediately left the cabin… 😔

He saw Neha outside but instead looked around the office and didn't find Dipika… Before Neha could ask anything Aryan went off towards the pantry…… 😒

On the way he looked into Shotgun's lab…. She wasn't there....

He went to the pantry and looked in… She wasn't there either…. He came back and hastened his pace towards the autopsy room…. 😒

Ajay and Boxer came outside and saw a very agitated Aryan go towards the autopsy room…

Aryan just passed Neha and went off.... Seeing him go Neha asked Ajay and Boxer….

Neha: Kya hua? Aryan aisa kyun behave kar raha hai? Aur Dipika... Vo bhi kuch upset si nikal gayi!

Boxer: (Looking at the autopsy room door) Aaj kuch zyada hi ho gaya Neha…. Humari galti ki wajah se Aryan aur Dipika ke beech… 😒

And he explained all that had happened inside the cabin….

All three of them watched the autopsy room and saw Aryan come out and go towards the photo lab… Boxer continued telling Neha about the happenings in the cabin…. 😔

Just as Boxer finished the three of them noticed Aryan come out looking dejected…. He leant opposite to the wall and closed his eyes hitting the wall lightly…. 😕

Ajay, Neha and Boxer felt very sad seeing Aryan's state… They hurried up to him….

Softly Neha asked…

Neha: Aryan!!!

Opening his eyes Aryan looked at Neha and asked….

Aryan: She left? ❓

Neha nodded slightly upset and said….

Neha: Tum log careful ho sakte the naa…. Tum to aaj kal bahut controlled the, to us reporter pe haath uthane ki kya zaroorat thi? ❓

Aryan straightened and with a stern face looked at Neha and said….

Aryan: Neha! (Glancing at Ajay and Boxer once too) Kal Dipika ko phir se hospital jaana pada…. And that was because she became hyper seeing that report…. (With a hard voice 😡 ) Aur main mere kisi apne ko takleef me dekhke chup nahi reh sakta….

Saying this Aryan went off from the office….

Neha looked at Ajay and Boxer smiling feebly…. 😳

Neha: Hmm.. At least is bahaane Aryan ne Dipika ko apna to kaha!

Ajay smiled at Neha and said….

Ajay: Haan… Aur ye bhi pukka hai ki kal se pehle uske aur Aryan ke beech sulah ho jayegi!

Neha nodded and said….

Neha: Hope so! (Thinking 🤔 ) Are Boxer… Haseena ne kaha vo tumhara wait karegi uske office pe… Use pick up karne ke liye…. (Looking at her watch) Lagta hai der ho rahi hai!

Boxer: (Looking at his watch in turn) Oush! Such me…. Der ho gayi.... Chalo main chalta hoon! 😊

Neha and Ajay nodded him bye….

Neha: (Smiling a little 😳 ) Tumhari kismat achchi hai!

Looking at her confused Ajay asked….

Ajay: Kya? Meri kismat hamesha phooti hi hai, ab kaise achchi bani? 🤔

Neha: Vo isliye kyunki tumhe aaj mouka mila hai mujhe ghar chodne ka!

Ajay: (Surprised)Kya? Aap hum pe itnaaaaa meherbaan kaise ho gayi aaj? 😳 Dipika ke saath nahi jaa rahi?

Neha's smile faded and she said….

Neha: Nahi… Vo mere paas aake mera purse leke chale gayi!

Ajay: Tab to theek hai… You don't have a choice… And I am glad! 😛

Rolling her eyes Neha said….

Neha: Phooti kismat sirf ek din ke liye hi bani hai achchi and Dipika didn't leave me any choice… Ab chalein? Der ho rahi hai… Mujhe ghar jaake dinner arrange karni hai… Warna Dipika khud khaana bana legi, us haath se…. Ab chalo bhi!

Saying Neha dragged Ajay out of the office….

Seeing them all go, Francis folded his arms and said in a disapproving tone…. 😒

Francis: Aryan samajh nahi raha hai ki vo jis apne ki chot ka revenge leke aaya hai, us apne ko koi aur nahi wahi khud chot pahooncha raha hai… Aur Aryan main tumhe bhi use chot pahoonchane nahi doonga…. 😳 😡

Shaking his head Francis too left the office!
Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was great update.

aryan i am very dispointaed on you today, how could you behave like that with dipika.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sam78

it was great update.

aryan i am very dispointaed on you today, how could you behave like that with dipika.

Thank you sam... but I know this was not one of my best updates.... aaj kal thodi busy thi isliye... But holi sequence and further will be amazing..😃 Aur haan Aryan is going to be more disappointing day by day😕

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Thank you sam... but I know this was not one of my best updates.... aaj kal thodi busy thi isliye... But holi sequence and further will be amazing..😃 Aur haan Aryan is going to be more disappointing day by day😕

it was great update krithika. i would say every one has bad day and aryan's bad day was today.

i really like the update.

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