Phir Millenge--Shy-Aryan FF(update pg40) - Page 33

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Posted: 18 years ago
nic part ana............main phir se late comment kar rahi hu.......atlast ajay proposed to neha..........thats really nice.........do continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: emrald

hey very bad idhar kyun ruki not fare never mind
now about the update it was AMAZING too good
Ajay was so adorable i loved him and so happy that at last he proposed neha and i wish ke woh humesha aise hi rahen 😳
well sunny was also cute too waise itni ice-cream achhi nahin hoti sardi ho sakti hai not good haan
well last but not least loved our dear couple so romantic yaar wow really they were so good when they danced together but now what was in that letter i hope ke us idiot ne kuchh naa kara ho other wise 😡 i will kill him
all over AWOME update
do post the next part soon will b waiting
well i hope today's comment was large and good to i hope u will like it 😛



Riya
i m soo happy to see ur comments dear😃
yaar abh banchay tau ice-cream khaian gay hi na.................warna banchay kaise lagain gay😳😃😛

yaar kahoo tau main app ko enter kardoon..........😉

luv u superb long comments

luv ya

lolz
ana😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahnoorkhan

Hi Ana,

I got the chance to read it as you sent it. I must say it a nice part. I will be wating for next part you can cont whever you want.



hi mahnoor
thanx dear 4 ur appreciation😳😳.................i luv too see u comments after a long time😛😛😃

lolz
ana😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Oie maa... I am going all bonkers seeing that couple like that.... How sweet...... Cuty couple cuty team.... Hmm.... Nice way Ajay prposed Neha... Cho chweet.... And that scream, that was funny.... Jab sab jagah khushiyaan hi khusiyaan ho to yes aisa hi humor paida hota hai..... That song was perfect Ana..... Sigh... Ye Oh no not again kis baat ka hai.... Ha.... Shai ke ex-husband ki notice hai na? That guy bina pite sudharne waala hai nahi... Please continue soon ana... Am waiting eagerly 😛



Krithika
ur comments r fab too yaar, yaar apna couple jidher, romance udher😉😛😆.
Ajay and Neha do make a sweet couple..................and ajay is getting crazy about her day by day😉😉😉
yaar pite gay sab milke ta k dobara na aa sakee😆😆😉

wait and watch

lolz
ana😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rockswizard

wow u seriously managaed an extra long part. ur driving me crazy with those scenes of the world's best couple. neway aapki purani aadat...suspense. now wht is tht post about? u bettr continue fast yaar! plz!!!!!



Shruti dear
that's the longest comment i get from u and i luv it😳😳
jii abh suspence luver hoon, tau suspence tau banaoon gi na😃😃
i better cont fast..................app sab ko naraz thori karna hai mujhe😊

luv ya

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ana😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: juberia

nic part ana............main phir se late comment kar rahi hu.......atlast ajay proposed to neha..........thats really nice.........do continue soon.



thank u ayesha
koi baat nahin, app comment karte hoo..............thats biggest thing😃😃😃
yup they are united now..............i m gonna cont

lolz
ana😃😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Guys
u all appreciate me, that i luv.............but plz do criticize.........tell me where i can improve or which thing go wrong

i will luv to hear from u all

as never of u complained that i make many spelling mistakes........do tell me yaar

luv ya

lolz
ana 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
"Phirse wohi case, can't he understand k sunny pe iss ka kia affect ho ga" Shaina said while sitting on the sofa in anger

aryan understand her completely and sit beside her and hold her.................shaina just gave in and put her head on his shoulder

"don't worry shy, sunny will be fine..................he is his father shy.............sameer chahay ga k us ka beta us k saath hoo"

"i can't afford loosing him aryan" She hold him tightly

"neither do i" aryan got feared on this thought.................sunny, in a small time.............became his life.............he forget all his worries while just getting one glimpse oh him.............he can't think of his comming life without sunny

Comming back from his thoughts, aryan rub shaina hand and make her calm down

"shy, don't u worry.................hum aj hi lawyer se millan gay or iss case ko hamesha k liye khatam kar dain gay"Shaina just got calm on this thought

right then they hear voice of sunny who was standing on the stairs, rubbing his eyes...............aryan look up at him and said slowly under his breathe

"shy, sunny aa raha hai................compose urself" Shaina on hearing wipe a tear which was just about to fall from her eye..............aryan smiled looking at sunny

"mama" sunny come down from the staris and come forward and sit in shaina's lap

shaina make him to lay his head on her shoulder and kiss his cheek

"Good morning" aryan snitch his nose and he made an irritating face, on seeing that, aryan and shy just smile

"Good morning" sunny reply while moving forward and kissing his cheek too, Aryan too kissed him back

"so sunny, aj ka kia plan hai" Aryan asked as sunny again put his head on shaina's shoulder and shaina just make her grip strong around him

"mama, main aj rahul se milne jaoon"

"ok bitu, likin app promise karoo gay na k............."

"main Rewa aunty ko tang nahin karoon ga, i m a big boy" Aryan got a smile on hearing that and sunny just look up at shaina 4 approval

"ok then, app ready ho k breakfast kar loo....................phir hum app ko wahan drop kar dain gain" They all keep talking 4 next 15 min and then shaina get up to make breakfast 4 sunny, sunny and aryan left to get ready

Then while going to SS, aryan and shaina drop sunny at rewa house and left 4 SS

There was a case going on, Shaina and aryan was more frustrated on sameer's act and everyone can see that

"Shy, be cool..............sab theek ho jaye ga.............don't take much tension" Neha and Shaina were sitting side by side on nehas place

"i know neha, but that stupid man....................usay yeh khayal nahin aata k sunny pe isska kia affect hoga" Shaina was hell worried about sunny

"Lawyer se baat ki"

"nahin, abhi lunch break main meeting fix ki hai"

Inside cabin

Dipika too know about this case so she ask aryan

"aryan, mujhe lagta hai k this time, shaina ka ex-husband, tumhari or Shaina ki shadi ki baat ko bhi samnay rakhay ga"

"i understand dipika...............likin humain iss baat ki tension nahin hai...............tension hai tau iss baat ki k shaina k liye stress lena theek nahin, or sunny..........sunny abhi chota sa baccha hai.................inh cases main us k mind ko kina stress milta hai...............yeh sab samjh sakte hain" Aryan said while sitting on his chair

"i know aryan" Dipika stand up from her chair an move towards her

"aryan i think tum shaina ko iss case se door hi rakhoo............"

"u r right dipika, main khud hi sab handle kar loon ga" Aryan said with a determination

It was lunch time, Shaina came to aryan and they both left to meet lawyer...............

after meeting each other, Aryan and Shaina take place

"this time, ur case is a bit weak" Shaina nad aryan listen carefully to the lawyer and were feared to listen this

"dekhiye, iss baar there can be many points, ur ex-husband can raise 4 sunny's custody case"

"kaise ponits?"Shaina ask

"1stly k app ne doosri shadi kar li, 2ndly u r pregnant....................now woh yeh keh sakta hai k he don't think is son will get that rights which he had to get...........and only he can give............but other point will be k as thee gonna be another child in ur life, will u be able to give same amount of luv to sunny as u both will give to ur 2nd child................or yeh k abh sunny hostel main hai"

"we r ready to answer these question" aryan said confidently and shaina too believe him

"then ok, but still the case is based on sunny's decision"

Shaina and aryan just give a last glimpse to the lawyer and left

Days pass by................and the hearing day came

After the whole hearing session, judge ask the lawyer that he want to meet sunny personally in his cabin.......................aryan was there............aryan didn't let shaina come to hearing as it might be stressful 4 her or can harm her.....................boxer sit outside the room with sunny..............both sameer and aryan come out from the hearing room...................sunny got confused to which he should go.................but b4 he can decide, lawyer came and take him to the judge room

On the Q of 2nd marriage...............aryan said that he know what a child mean as he already lost his own daughter and he will never want to loose sunny................and on 2nd question of the comming child, aryan politely said that it didn't matter how many kids u have, a mother or father luv equally to all there childrens and judge approve that thought as she was too a mother

Judge was really polite with him................and he started

"beta, app ko mama k saath rehna accha lagta hai k papa k saath"

"Mama papa k saath" sunny said sweetly

"aryan papa k saath k sameer papa k"

"sameer papa k saath accha lagta hai likin zyada accha aryan papa k saath lagta hai"

"accha app k aryan papa aap k saath kaise hain"

"bohut acche, app ko patah hai papa mere saath shopping pe jatay hain, mujhe homework main help karte hain, mama jab ghar pe nahin hotin tab mere liye khud khana banatay hain or mere saath sotay hain"

"ok, tau kia app ko hostel unhoon ne khud bheja tha"

"nahin, maine kaha tha.........mere saray friends hostel main thay, mama papa nahin chahte thay k main jaoon, likin phir mere liye papa ne mama ko manaya or main gaya"

"or sameer papa"

"sameer papa aunty k saath hote hain"

"kaun si aunty"

"nisha aunty...............woh hi papa se baat karti rehtin hain............tau main thora time k baad ghar aa jata hoon"

"ok........hostel main mama papa phone karte hain"

"4 times a day, mere breakfast k baad, lunch k time, dinner k time or sonay se pehle, har rooz mama papa phone karte hain"

"or sameer papa call karte hain"

"hmmm, aik bar month main"

Judge understand the whole matter and make him go

again after comming out, sunny got confused on seeing aryan and sameer.................but with a thought he went straight to aryan and hug him...................aryan pick him up with a smile

later judge announce sunny's custody case and give hi custody to aryan and shaina and ordered not to re-open this case after on aryan's request

Aryan was so happy and hug sunny with full of love...............All congradulate him and Sameer to with a losener look on his face

Shaina was praying in home 4 the best................she was quiet worried...........

aryan stopped the car infront of the house...............he get out while holding sunny in his hands and went to open the door..............open it quitely with the key and look up at shaina, who was sitting on the sofa, hiding her face behind her hands and were sitting in tensed position when sunny called him

"mama"

Shaina look up at him while aryan put sunny down.................sunny run to shaina and shaina hug him immediately................she had tears in her eyes as if she will loose him but he was there with her...............she break the hug and kiss sunny all over his face and again hug him

Aryan look at them with smile.................his family was complete today....................now they not need to get feared of anything................sunny is of them, but now for forever..................he move towards them and sit beside shaina and hug them both...............shaina look at him and mumbled "thankyou" under her lips and aryan just give a smile and shaina hug him too.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hmmmmmmmmm............. How sweeettttttttttttt........... Sunny is very intelligent.... Aakhir beta kiska ka hai 😉

Served that Sameer good.... Kaash kaash ke baad me ek sirf ek thapad use milta..... But that would have gone against Aryan-Shai's case 😕

Acchha lagta hai.... Aryan's personal life is filled and professional too 👏

Hats off ana.... Continue kar rahi ho naa? 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
kya kahoon............mind blowing........i knew that sunny's custody will go to aryan-shaina........thats really nice......continue soon

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