SS2(Fanfic I) - Page 3

are nahi re.

actually jab bhi main kuch intresting padti hoon tho mere pet main kuch kuch hota hai aur mujhe bhook lagne lagti hai.matlab jitni zada bhook utni intresting story.jab maine tumhari story padhi tho main kuch zada he kha gaye aur mere mera weight badh gaya .

aab tum batao ki mera weight badne main kiski galti hai

Aw.. thanks. Maana meri galti hai!Tho uska prayaschit bhi mujhe karna padega na. Isiliye vaada karti hun ki aaj se tumhare weight kabhi bhi kum nahi hoga aur zaroor ise me poora karungi.

mera vaada raha..

Vove.... If people with such sucked memory can give so correct answers... i wonder how you will answer when you have perfect memory Guruji... I know I'll ask a question about Shai's epi and i'll know the answer😉

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isse jyaada shaayad aur kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi......gr8 work krithika 😃

Originally posted by: snow white

vvvvvvvvvvv good maha
keep it up
i am with u

Thank you!Thank you! Thank you .😊

Originally posted by: rockyshanky

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isse jyaada shaayad aur kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi......gr8 work krithika 😃

Thanks a lot. I really love this forum and its members.

krithika,it's really gr8! seriously,well done yaar! 😊 sorry,main late respond kar rahi hoon,but i really liked ur story,go ahead !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Boxer:(worried) Kaya hua mamu?
He slowed down the car.
Dipika:(gasping) Boxer gaadi chalathe raho.Aur jaldi karo.

Ajay:Boxer, Aryan ko saans lene me dikhat ho rahi hai. 😭 He is struggling. (sadly to himself) Aryan, man thoda tho sabar karo.

Shotgun and Ganesh look from the back.
Dipika:Aryan, Aryan..

She keeps her left palm on Aryan's chest and right hand on top of it. She gives pressure with the hands. She does this several times.

Dipika : Aryan, please.. Come on. Breathe.. Aryan
Ganesh : Dipika ji..Aap PMR kyun nahi try karti?
Dipika :(continuing to give pressure on Aryan's chest) Lekin is halat me kya ye kaam aayega?

She wasn't sure if mouth to mouth respiration would come handy in such a situation like a bullet hit.

Neha : Haan Dipika, try karne me harz nahi he?
Dipika : Fine.Kaali maa. Aryan ko shakthi dena.

Boxer is in frustration that he is not able to know what was happening.
Boxer :(seeing at the road and glancing timely at Ajay)Kya hua? Aryan theek tho hai?
Ajay : Dipika PMR try karne waali hai.
Boxer : PMR! Kya PMR?
Ajay : PMR matlab pulminary resuscitation. Jisse ek muh se dosre wale ke muh par rakhkar breathe kiya jaatha hai. Isse uski saans lene ki takleef kum hota hai.

Dipika was started trying PMR. She was giving pressure on Aryan's chest and also trying PMR.

Dipika :Aryan, come on breathe.(feverishly trying) You can do it. Aryan please.

Behind Neha was praying.
Neha :Aryan, please breathe in.Please 😭 Aryan...Please

Just then Aryan let out a big gasp and coughed several times. 😊 His breathing had become normal.

Dipika leaned on back on the seat and closed her eyes for a second.
Dipika:Thank god.

She immediately checked his pulse rate and heart beat.

Everyone sighed a big sigh of relief. Everyone smiled having tears of happiness now on their faces.
But the happiness was short lived as they knew Aryan was still not out of danger.

Ajay : Boxer Aryan ab theek hai. Lekin gaadi jaldi chalana, please.

Dipika : Boxer, aur kitna door hai?
Boxer : Thodi he door hai. Kuch pandrah minute. Aryan tab tak theek sambhaal sakega naa.. 😕 ?
Dipika : Uska pulse rate feeble hai. Lekin he can manage. But please jaldi karo.
Boxer : Haan I'll do it.

This fifteen minutes was like hell to SS people. They felt it really took too long to reach the hospital. But finally it did and thanks to Boxer's excellent driving they had reached within 10 minutes.

Boxer stopped the jeep in front of the hospital and immediately went inside.

Ajay, Shotgun and Ganesh carried Aryan out of the jeep. Boxer had managed to ask a compounder for wheeling stretcher and bought it. They placed Aryan on that and wheeled him inside.

Boxer:(to the receptionist) Please jaldi se doctor ko bulaiye. Its an emergency.

Receptionist: Sorry sir lekin, doctor abhi tak nahin aaye hain.

Everyone: 😲 (shouting) Kya?

Everyone looks shocked at the receptionist worrying more about Aryan.

wah wah..abb mera wajan badne se koi nahi rok sakta 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sonal.jawa

krithika,it's really gr8! seriously,well done yaar! 😊 sorry,main late respond kar rahi hoon,but i really liked ur story,go ahead !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

You liked! I am happy always to entertain SS members.

hey...its relly nice...and even nicer to see hw dedicated u r....u update ur fanfic everyday...unlike a lazybone like me!!! 😊
p.s. i have a request...i know its outrageous....and deepika fans will fume at me...but cud u plzzz plzz try and get shaina bak...only if u wish...and if it fits in ur story...im not forcin u......thanks 😊

Originally posted by: widluv2aryan

hey...its relly nice...and even nicer to see hw dedicated u r....u update ur fanfic everyday...unlike a lazybone like me!!! 😊
p.s. i have a request...i know its outrageous....and deepika fans will fume at me...but cud u plzzz plzz try and get shaina bak...only if u wish...and if it fits in ur story...im not forcin u......thanks 😊

Thank you very much.😊Getting Shaina back- I didn't think of it yet. But maybe yes! I'll try, not promising anything though. I had thoght of a totally different track. Anyway let's see.

And Resh you are not lazy bones. It happens, people become busy at times. You do visit the forum and encourage everyone daily. It is not a sign of laziness. Update when you can.Your fanfic is going great too.😊