Life After Death (full story from pg 58) - Page 2

🤗 🤗 🤗 and those r for u smriti....thanks sooooooooooooo much!!!! u guys are total sweethearts!!!! im not a great writer or somethig yaa...just tryin out my imagination on paper.....haha 😆 ...thanks again.... keep postin ur remarks.... 😉

Originally posted by: rockingrebel

it lterally made me cry toimagine Aryan as a corpse

well and abha....writin the word corpse for aryan was the most difficult...i really cudnt bring myself to write about his dead body.....😭

shaina had been the most inconsolable of all...she had grown hysterical on learning the truth..... it was 2 in the night...the next day was the funeral..... "arrey neha....shai kahan hai?" ajay asked... "i donno...lets look"...and before she could finish...she saw shaina sitting in aryan's cabin thru the glass.... she had his gold chain in her hand and was studying it carefully...as if it was a piece of evidence...only...her mind was somewhere else.......it was in a world she did not recognise.....she did not recognse herself anymore.... she made a mega blooper with love once...and this time she was sooo sure it had been right.... yes it wtill was...it was the perfect love story....how could everything have gone so wrong.....so wrong......

her thoughts were interrupted by a tap on her shoulder..... it was neha.... she had gotten her a cup of coffee..... "no thanks neha" shaina said softly..... neha kept the coffe mug on the table and looked at shai...this was the first she had spoken...she wished shaina would talk more.....relive herself of the pain....but shaina was dumbfounded....she finally found the courage to ask a simple question ...and asked in a hoarse voice... "when did this happen?? aur kaise???"

neha slowly began recounting th anna kartoos case before shaina...she skipped details...and just told her in short how they were workin on the case..... how they had managed to kill the culprit...and also bring ganesh mogre safely back to mumbai..... but had lost aryan in the battle....and how he was shot on the field by one of the bullets from anna's rifle....
deepika ahd come into the cabin and sat at her desk....she was listenin to neha recount the episode....savin the unfortunate details..... ajay, and boxer had also joined them.....
shaina listened with grief and....a bit puzzled...mumbled to herself...."aryan ne to aise case ke baare mein kuchh bataya nahi"...she asked neha....... "so aryan .... kya aryan ne tum logon ko is mission par aaj subah join kiya??"
neha- "shai...what are u sayin? woh hume aaj subah kyun join karega?...aryan pichhle teen dino se is mission par humaare saath kaam kar raha tha..."
shaina gasped.... she was shocked and confused....
shai- "teen dino se??? no neha...thats impossible!!!!"
deepika- "what do u mean??"
shai- "what i mean to say is...aryan pichhle teen dino tak mere saath tha...he was in pone.....how could he have been working on the case with u guys???"

Nice twist.Don't leave us hangin ...pls continue

right
i want more.or else i am going to cry 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: Darwin

Nice twist.Don't leave us hangin ...pls continue

haha...dont worry i wont yaar.... will post the continuation by tonight.....

and thanks.....😊

Originally posted by: smritisonkar

right
i want more.or else i am going to cry 😭 😭 😭

dont cry sweetie....... do u think im gonna let aryan die?????😉

stay tuned.....😊

awesome story...continue soon....plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. dont keep us in suspense