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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nirmola

😛😛 Another FF.😃 😃 i'm sooo happy

Starting was really nice, happy to see a new character onurag.

Now, tell me one thing, ye commy kya kaha Dipika se???❓
What new decision is going to taken???

seems like this decision is a great suspence

Waiting to read more..........

Take care


😛


Thank u,thank u,nirmola😛
Commy ne kya kaha deepika se coming update main😃
About suspence ?ya somewhat or not dekte hai😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sam78

it was great.

new character hope she is dipika's bhabhi.
thanks for the update.


thank u Sam😛
Dipika's bhabhi;nah😃
lets see in following update😉 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Pooj@

Ye lady kaun hai?????
hoping 4 an update soon....


lady dekte hai
update coming up
extra long this time😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: veena01

gud one yar but aryan is dead its so sad😭


Welcome Veena to SS forum😃
Thanks for reading FF😛
About Aryan?????????


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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Deepika(strangely):Mumma aap yah


Mrs.Deepti Gosh: yes beta,OOnurag ka call aya tha,that u all are in clinic toh tum sab ke liye khana leke aa gayi


Here whole group was watching this strangely


Deepika(seeing there strange faces):Guys ,she is my Mom,Mrs.Deepti Gosh and mumma this are my friends


Pointing to Ajay:ajay

Towards Neha:neha

Pointingto Boxer:Abas Ali Baig

Pointing to shotgun:shubroto


All of them greeted her and she gave blessings to all


Mrs.Gosh:How is Aryan?


Deepika(sadly):Maa usse abhi tak hosh nahi aya hai


Mrs. Gosh:Don't worry beta,Kaali maa sab theek karegi


Chalo sab chalke dinner karo


Boxer:Auntiji aapne takleef kyun ki?


Mrs.Gosh:Isme takleef kaise beta?


Deepika:Mumma aap log chalo main aur Neha aate hai.


Mrs. Gosh: Ab kaha Gudiya?


Deepika:Kuch nahi mumma OOnurag Bhaiya ko leke aate hai


Mrs. Gosh:Bhalo


They all left for the Rest room of Doctor OOnurag


Deepika:Neha mujhe tumse kuch Baat karni hai.


Neha:Bolo Deepika kya baat hai?


Deepika:Yaha nahi Bhaiya ke cabin main chalo


Neha:theek hai


Deepika saw from the glass door of the cabin that the patient was sitting inside,so she waited outside


When the patient came outside then


Deepika (opening the Door): May I come in?


OOnurag(who has just started watching some reports looking upwards):Please


Deepika and Neha Came inside and sat on the chair just opposite to OOnurag


OOnurag (Closing the reports):Guddo ab mujse bhi formality

Deepika:Bhaiya you are at work,were u may be busy,that's why only


OOnurag:Na guddo,I am always free for my two little sisters.


Deepika:Bhaiya I have to discuss something with both of you


And she started to tell each and every thing to both of them.


After sometime all three of them moved to the rest room for doctor OOnurag


After watching all three of them


Mrs. gosh:Arey kaha rah gaye thae tum log


OOnurag:kuch nahi mumma ,I was little busy with patients


Deepika,Neha and Mrs. Gosh started serving all of them

While eating,


Ajay:Aunty you have made a delicious food


Deepti:Chal hat tu buttering karna bhut acche se janta hai


At this everybody started laughing


Ajay(making pity face):kya Anuty aapko main aisa dikta hoon?


Mrs. Gosh:Nahi beta,tum toh bhaut sweet ho


Shotgun:Deepika tumne kabhi apni family ke bare main nahi bataya?


Deepika:mouka hi nahi mila shotgun,jab maine Special Squad join kiya tha that time Mom and Brother was in Delhi,Mom ki job thi waha aur Bhaiya Lilavati Hospital main surgeon,lekin after the bomber case when they knewed about my kidnap, both of them leaved their jobs and settled here with me, as he was emerged as one of the top leading surgeon those days and he had some of his friends here so it was not difficult for him to set up this clinic


Ajay(looking towards OOnurag): humaari Bhaabi kaha hai???


OOnurag:Kya yaar Acche kasshe bachelor ko shaadi ke zhemaleo me kyun fasate ho?


Mrs. Gosh: haan tujhe toh Saadhi zhemala hi nazar aayegi naa


OOnurag:Maa


OOnurag:Ajay abhi tak koi maan ko bhaane waali nahi milli


Deepika:kitni baar yeh baat sun chuki hu ,lekin who melegi kab bhaiya?


OOnurag:melegi toh sabse pehle tujhe bataoonga guddo


everyone finished with dinner and Ajay washed his hands and was coming to sit in sofa when he felt like everything is rotating ,suddenly his eyes filled with darkness and he was not able to stabilized himself and he was falling unconsciously when boxer gives him support and made him to sit on sofa


At this everyone was shocked,


Boxer(literally slapping him on his face):Ajay,Ajay kya hua


OOnurag sprinkled some water on his face and asked Deepika to give his bag from the cupboard


Ajay opened his eyes slowly


After checking his Blood pressure;


OOnurag:B.P. ek dam se down ho gaya tha isliye chakkar aye ,weakness bhaut hai


OOnurag(Then injecting him injection):he needs a complete rest


Then to Ajay:ajay kam se kam 2 days complete rest lo,aur mujhe tum clinic main dikhe to main tumhe yaahi admit kar doonga


Deepika:Neha tum aur Mumma Ajay ke saath uske ghar pe uske saath raho


Ajay:no Deepika its ok ,feeling much better now


Deepika:Ajay maine tumse pehle hi kaha na aab tum logo ki manmaani nahi chalegi


Neha:haan Ajay,we are coming with u


Mrs.Gosh: haan beta,we can't leave you alone in such condition.


Deepika:Boxer kal tum aur shotgun jaoge ganesh ko lane


Boxer:ok


Then Ajay,Neha and Mrs.Deepti gosh leaved for Ajay's home


Boxer (to oonurag): ghabrane ki baat toh nahi naa


OOnurag:nahi boxer,bas is baat ka dhyan rakhna hoga ki usse koi stress naa diya jaye.


After seeing Aryan, they also left for there homes


Deepika:thank you bhaiya


OOnurag:for??????


Deepika smiled little


OOnurag:guddo I am in my cabin,call me whenever u need


Deepika:theek hai


And OOnurag left to for his cabin


Deepika slightly taking Aryan's hand in her hand, Aryan tum mere saath ho naa, tum samjhoge na main ye sab kyun kar rahi hoon


Morning

Date:18 April

Time:Around 8:30 A.M.

Boxer:Good morning Deepika


Deepika:good morning Boxer; Shotgun naahi aaya


Shotgun:I am here Deepika


Both of them went inside the I.C.U to watch Aryan one by one


After wards outside the I.C.U


Deepika:Boxer Ganesh ko Mumbi lane ke baad Special security provide karni hai taki hum usse court me safely pesh kar sake


Boxer:theek hai deepika ,ab hume nilkalna chahiye ,jaate jaate Ajay se bhi milna hai

Thodi der main zubin aa jayega tumahare saath yaha


Deepika:theek hai


Around 11:00 a.m.


OOnurag (to Deepika):Guddo ,I am sorry , He is No more


Zubin (who had just come was opening the door of I.C.U):no ,no this can't be happened


Deepika(catching Onnurag):Bhaiya how is this possible, this can't be happened,no this can't be happened


Dated:19 April

She suddenly applied a break, and she revived out.


She saw outside, and saw that her car was standing infornt of Special Squad office


She parked her car in parking lot.


She slightly touched the photo of Aryan which was on the newspaper and She started remembering how the group reacted, She remembered that how it was difficult to handle them, although she was not there the first time when they knew the news


Dated:18 April

In Ajay's home when he switched ON his T.V.


Breaking news

Special squad chief Aryan Khanna Dead.

(T.V. remote just slipped out of ajay's hand)

He was given funeral along with commissioner,some police officers and some of his friends

(He was unable to believe this)

We are showing the clips of his Funeral


Ajay(With a very low Voice):Neha


Neha(M rs. Gosh ko door tak leave dene gayi thi):AAti hu ;kya hua Ajay?


When she saw the news flashing on T.V. and Ajay who was standing still


Neha(catching Ajay's hand and making him to sit):Ajay tumne T.V. kyun ON kari


Ajay(leaving Neha's hand in great disbelief ):tumhe pata tha


Neha (trying to catch his hand again): Ajay woh


Ajay(trowing her hand away from him):Don't touch,Don't you ever touch me again;tumhe pata tha phir bhi and he started crying Badly


Neha:Ajay tumhari tabiyaat kharrab thi


Ajay: Meri tabiyaat Aryan se baad ke nahi thi


It was really difficult for Neha to handle Ajay


When Boxer and Shotgun returned from Mangeshwadi, they handled Ganesh to respective officer where that officer told them of Aryan's death,


Aisa laga unhe jaise unke paaro tale Zameen kisak gayi ho


Boxer made phone call to Deepika


Boxer:Deepika Aryan


Deepika(in very low voice): is no more


Boxer:nahi Deepika


Deepika:yeh sach hai boxer,I am in Special Squad,tum log jald se jald yaha aa jao


When they came to Special squad they saw all of there group in Special squad,Ajay,Neha,Zubin,Deepika except Aryan.


Tears was falling from all of there eyes


Shotgun:Deepika why don't you called us?


Deepika:Shotgun tum log Mangeshwadi main thae and


Boxer:No explainations Deepika,maine tume yeh accept nahi kiya tha


For the first time Deepika saw Ajay,Boxer and Shotgun,in such a anger,which was uncontrollable


It was a big deal for Deepika to make them understand.


Special squad office

Time 9:30 A.M.

Neha(pushing the door of Deepika's cabin):Deepika every body is waiting for u in Discussion room


When she came inside she saw tears was rolling down on her cheeks


Neha:Deepika ???????


Deepika:kuch nahi neha tum chalo main aati hoon.


Neha looking towards her:Deepika


Deepika:Neha I am alright tum chalo main aati hoon


In discussion room all the members were sitting on there usual place except two of them,one Aryan whose chair was empty and the other chair of deepika since she was standing near Aryan chair


Deepika:guys maine tum logo ko discussion room main isliye bulaya hai kyuki maine tum logo se kuch discuss karna chahti hoon


Ajay(mumbling):Ab bhi discuss karne ke liye kuch baccha hai


Neha(slowly):Ajay


Deepika ignoring this:

Commissioner saab ko news mili hai

Ana kadtus jise Aryan ne shoot kiya tha She was not alone


Boxer:Deepika speak clearly what you want to say?


Deepika:Boxer abhi tak jo bhi hua usme Ana kadtus akeli main nahi ,tum sab ko yaad hai Hemant Desai


Shotgun:jise humne mumbai-pune Travelling bus ke Do passengers ke murder case aur Heronie smuggling ke liye Arrest kiya tha woh


Deepika:haan,uska bhai Baablu Desai Akka Bablya jo bhaut bada Drugs Smuggler hai usne aur Ana kadtus ne mil kar special squad se badla lene ke liyeGanesh ko use kiya.Ana kadtus was Girlfriend of Bablya


Boxer:what????????


Deepika:haan boxer,yeh ek bhaut bada trap tha jisme hume wohi dikhaya gaya jo who dikhana cahte thae, usne hume hi nahi Ganesh ko bhi fasaya tha


Deepika:Hume waha bula ke hum sab ko marne ka plan tha but Aryan (Deepika Stopping herself)


Boxer:Aryan ne aapni jaan de kar hum sabki jan baccha li


At this whole group was silent


Deepika(Breaking the silence):hum Uss Bablya ko pakadenge ,aur usse Sazza bhi dilvayenge,kya tum log mere saath ho


All the group gave there approval


Deepika:Ek aur baadi baat hai,woh drug to summgle karta hi hai saath main College students ko Drugs ka aadi bana deta hai,taaki usse paise bhi milte rahe aur drugs ki need ke karan students uska koi bhi kam kar de

Deepika: but Main problem yaha aati hai ki kisi ne usse dekha nahi hai,aur hamare pass meager information hai


DEEpika:hume chidiya ko phasane ke liye dana phekna hoga


Ajay:matlab


Deepika:matlab yeh ki ,hume aapne aap ko thode dinno ke liye inactive dikhana hoga,jisse who aapni activities bada de taaki we can find some clue about them

Edited by ruha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Friends maine ss ka Ana kadtus ka episode nahi dekha hai
incase tumhe story main koi bhi contrasting baat lagti hai jo nahi ho sakti please let me know.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
it was awesome.
so lady was dipika's mom.
what did dipika, neha and Oonurag had talk about?
the FF is developing very well.👏
thanks for the long update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
aryan died pooja!!!!!!aisa kaise ho sekta hai
what is dipika secret???!!!

you storying is going great yaar suspense!!!
and i always wanted to here about dipika s family😃
great work keep it up👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Lady Deepika ki Mom hai? Good.
Thanks for the update.... it was really intresting. .... M really enjoying ur fanfic and hope for an equally long update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
gr8 work yar keep it up but depika ka secret kab reveal ho ga???
hmmmm its suspense😒

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