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Posted: 16 years ago

Sandhya closed the door and turned around very seriously and said…

Sandhya: Tch… Koi message nahi diya!

Saying she gave a look around and immediately everyone burst out laughing….🤣

The girls fell down clutching their stomach, as Sandhya breathless said…

Sandhya: Aww… Bechare… Unka chehera dekhne layak tha!

Sangs: (Trying to get out her words in between laughing) I…. Sandy… (Catching her breath) Aryan ji is tarah? Kitna dare hue lag rahe the!😆

Cynthia: Haan… Aur… (Imitating Aryan) Di… Di… Dipika ka naam jab unke zuban se nikali… To… God… Worth a photograph yaar!😃

Purvi: Sheh…. Haan yaar… Photo leni chahiye thi… Di… Di… Dipika ko dikhane! 😛

Haseena's Bhabhi: (From back of the room smiling) Bechara kuch keh bhi nahi saka! Tum sab bhi naa!

Haseena: (Looking up at her Bhabhi) Bhabhi…. Aryan hai, isliye kuch keh nahi sake…. Lekin agar Vishal hote… Tab in ladkiyon ko pata chalta… Khud inki is tarah khaatir daari karte naa!

Sandy: (Standing up instantly said determined😳) Kuch nahi kar sakega… Aryan ne to phir bhi beech beech me kuch bolne ki koshish ki… (Sarcastically) Hmpf… Vishal to muh ko jaise gum se chipka ho, waise khada hota! He's only brave outside!

Aadhya: (Helping Neha pin her duppatta) Lekin socha hai agar Dipika Di ko such me pata chala ki tum logon ne kya kiya, to vo kya karengi?

Purvi: Kya hoga? Vo bhi… Ar... Ar… Aryan karegi!

The girls laughed louder at this trying their best to come back to normancy!😆

Neha: (Turning around in the stool) Khushi mil gayi tum sabko? Tasalli ho gayi? Bechare mere bhai ko tang kar di! Such me koi important baat ho sakti thi naa? Pehle unse pooch to lete kya baat thi?

The girls who were laughing hard stopped laughing stunned and looked at her shocked… "Bhai!?!?!?!?!?!?!"😲

Mithra: Bhai?!?!❓

Neha: (Smiling a little) Haan… Aaj meri shaadi Aryan karva raha hai… As a brother… Mom requested!

Sandhya: (Surprised) That's really noble!

Neha: (Nodding) Haan… Aryan hamesha sabki bahut khayal rakhta hai… Aur hum sab to ab ek family jaise ho hi gaye hain!

Haseena walking up slowly to Neha caught her hands and said…

Haseena: Family jaise nahi Neha… We are a family… Special Squad me sab ke sab!

Neha looked up at her understanding and nodded in response… How well they both understood… Both of them knew how much intimate buddies Ajay and Boxer were… And how Special Squad had played an important role in their personal lives!

Just then Haseena's face contracted a little in pain… Seeing this Neha stood up concerned asking…

Neha: Kya hua? Is it paining? (Looked over at Sandhya who was already coming towards them) Sandhya! (Making Haseena sit on a chair nearby)

Haseena: (Smiling said) Kuch nahi hai…😳

As Neha looked on puzzled Sandhya seeing Haseena's face knew and understood…

Sandhya: Such me… Kuch nahi Neha… Happens…

Neha: Kya?!?!😕

Haseena: (Smoothing her belly) They kicked!

Hearing this Neha looked surprised at her… The other girls also looked at her happily…. Crowding around her they asked excited…

Mithra: Such me?? You could feel it? (Confused) They?!?!

Sandhya: (Giving a glass of water to Haseena) Haan…. Unko twins hone waali hai!

Sangs: Hey! That's awesome news! Lagta dono ke dono andar khel rahe hain!

The girls laughed a little and asked Haseena excitedly…

"You can feel it right? Oh… I mean…. Them… Feel them!??!"

(Keeping a hand on Haseena's belly) "Can we feel them?"

"Aww… Hey… Listen!"

"Do they roll inside?!?"

"Yeah yeah… Roll hi nahi… Rock n roll bhi kar rahe honge!"

Laughter sounded in the room as Haseena kept nodding to all their questions, answering them… She felt so elated to discuss about her kids… They made her proud even before they saw the world's light… It was such a great feeling… Motherhood! Mom!!!!!! She was lucky!⭐️⭐️

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago

Aryan had reached the hall having just finished mumbling about the girls and finally taking a deep breath calmed down his nerves…. He took a casual look around to see if anything was pending and remembered that he had to get someone to fix the door hanging when he saw….

A lady in pink was hanging up the garland on the door's entrance standing on a stool… He didn't see her face as she was standing high on the stool trying to hang the garland… He shrugged off and seeing everything was fine was just about to go to Ajay's room when he glanced at the entrance and saw the stool the lady was standing on, teeter…

Aryan: (Shouting) Hey!😲

Stunned he rushed to help her…. Just as the stool slid off her feet the lady lost her balance and fell… Right into his arms…. He held her in his arms sighing relieved that nothing had happened….

Worried Aryan looked down at the person in his arms to check if she was okay…. But the lady shocked by the fall had her face covered expecting a bad blow….

Aryan: Excuse me…. Aap theek to hain?❓

Hearing his voice she immediately opened her hands and looked up surprised at him…

Seeing her Aryan received a pleasant shock, not expecting her at all….

They kept looking at each other surprised and stunned a little…. Embarrassed??!? No… But surprised and actually loving…. 😍

Having no support to catch Dipika was feeling uncomfortable and her neck had started aching… Sensing it Aryan shifted his hands a little so that she felt a little more comfortable and said softly..….

Aryan: Pakado!😳

Dipika looked on at him as he nodded his reassurance… She lowered her eyes and slowly, hesitantly wrapped her hands around his neck as he pulled her higher, closer to him… Something happened to her breath due to that closeness…. She looked up at him looking at her… Only at her… Her only! She averted her eyes!😳

Aryan smiled a little seeing her blush in his arms… Then becoming stern again he asked…

Aryan: Kya kar rahi thi?

Dipika: (Looking up at him indicated the garland up at the door) Vo… Toran… It was hanging… Socho ki use…

Aryan: (Angry😡) Pata hai… Lekin tum kyun kar rahi thi? Kisi aur se karva sakti thi….

Dipika: (Indignantly) Sab busy the Aryan… Waise ek toran hi to tha…

She became upset seeing him scold that way…. Seeing her becoming dull he said…😔

Aryan: Gir jaati to? (Softly) Chot lag jaati to?

At this Dipika kept looking on at him seeing the concern in his eyes, hearing the concern in his voice…. She then realized…. Even if she had hurt herself it wouldn't have hurt her so much as it would have for him…. It had been so like that ever…. Even before when she had fractured her hand, he was the one very worried…. Most!❤️

Aryan looked at her looking up at him and breathed a relief that nothing serious had happened… If she had gotten hurt he knew he wouldn't have been able to bear it…. He himself didn't have any rights to hurt her…. So how can anybody else have…? Living or non-living…. No… No one had it… Not even Dipika herself!❤️

Just then…

Mrs. Malhotra: DIPIKA!!!!😲

Both of them broke their eye contacts and looked about and saw Mrs. Malhotra hurrying towards them from the gate….

Mrs. Malhotra: (Concerned) Theek to ho? Dara diya tha… Agar Aryan nahi hota to kya hota?

Aryan: Maasi maa… Its fine… Kuch nahi hua use…. (A little softer but heard) Main use kuch hone nahi doonga!

Hearing this Dipika looked on at him smiling a little… Even though Mrs. Malhotra heard it she suppressed her smile and said…

Mrs. Malhotra: Tum… Ise andar leke chalo…

As Aryan nodded and took Dipika inside, Mrs. Malhotra called out towards the kitchen…

Mrs.Malhotra: Are andar se koi peene ke liye paani lao!

Hearing her shout was more than enough to get the whole world together…. So it was obvious that she was heard inside Ajay's room…. Boxer peeped out having heard Mrs. Malhotra's voice… Because she must have been in the temple now, wondering whether the others had come…. He saw Aryan carrying Dipika to the couch… Puzzled he went back in and that was enough for the whole crowd to come out…. Vishal was the first amongst them all… 😉

Just as Aryan placed Dipika on the couch Vishal reached her….

Vishal: (Looking at her casually thinking the other way, smiling a little) Kya hua? Girrrr gayi? (Glancing at Aryan) Ya janaab ke haathon me….😃

Dipika: (Interrupting hastily knowing what he might say) Kuch nahi hua Vishal… Girne waali thi… Lekin…

At this Vishal became worried instantly and asked….

Vishal: Kya?!!? Such me giri? Chot to nahi aayi?

Dipika: (Smiling at his concern) Tch… Maine kaha naa kuch nahi hua… Vo… Ar….

She looked up at Aryan who was looking at her stunned…. Lost…😲 😍

Only after Aryan had placed her on the couch did he look at her fully from top to bottom…. Mindblowing… Stunningly beautiful…. He kept on looking at her bound by her beauty gaze… She looked a perfect fit in such costumes!👍🏼

She was looking damn beautiful in the pink ghagara with minimal make up and jewels… her hair left lose completed her serene look… But somehow he knew he had expected something else… He had actually expected to see her in a saree….. After all it was marriage and mostly that was selected for attire by women… But he had to agree she looked gorgeous in this outfit too… He wondered how she must look in a saree?\😉

Little did he know he was soon to find it out! 😃

Seeing him look at her like that Dipika felt self conscious and slowly put down her gaze blushing… She could still feel his soft gaze on her and she felt like running off from there…. But couldn't as everyone were surrounded!☺️

Mrs. Malhotra had just paid the taxi and turned around when she had seen Dipika fall and Aryan coming to her rescue…. Dipika didn't hear Mrs. Malhotra telling Vishal and the others what had happened…. Nor did she hear Vishal scolding her left, right and center for been so careless….

After scolding breathless for few minutes he asked again repeating his question…

Vishal: Kuch bolti kyun nahi? Ye to bolo ki phir se….

Vishal stopped speaking as he saw the look on Dipika's face… Seeing her blushing face he looked up at Aryan and sighed….

Vishal: (Hand on his head) Please don't tell me my scolding has gone waste! Into deaf ears!😵

Hearing this comment Mrs. Malhotra and the others puzzled looked at him… They saw him look at Dipika and Aryan in turns and they themselves saw and understood…. His scolding definitely had gone waste… Into deaf ears!

Boxer: (Clearing his throat) Definitely Vishal…Your scoldings have gone into deaf ears!😆

They all smiled to themselves as Mrs. Malhotra smiling a little shook Dipika out of her trance and gave the glass of water which one of the maids had bought…

Mrs. Malhotra: Dipika! Pehle ye paani piyo!😊

Dipika nodded a little and slowly taking the glass drank the water….

Giving it back she asked surprised….

Dipika: Aunty!! Aap yahan?!!? Mandir nahi gayeen?🤔

Mrs. Malhotra: (Smiling) Gayi thi aur wapas aa gayi… (Hitting her head) Lo… Main to bhool hi gayi… (Looking at her watch) Are vo sab abhi dus minute me nikaalne waale hain…. Ussse pehle Ajay ko wahan jaana hai naa… Tabhi to baaraat leke aa sakte hain ladke waale….

As if on cue outside the shehanai started to play and Vishal standing up looked at his watch….

Vishal: Exactly on time… Maine jis samay bajane ko kaha usi samay start kiya hai unhone!😛

Mrs. Malhotra: (Grinning😃) To chalo… Shaadi hai…. (To Dipika) Tum jaake jaldi se Neha ko ready kar do!

Dipika: (Getting up smiling😊) Aunty… Neha to kab se taiyaar hai… Aap bas kahiye kab neeche aana hai tab aa jayenge….

Mrs. Malhotra: Tab to theek hai… (Looking at Aryan) Aryan tu to pehle se taiyaar hai… Phir tum yaheen ruko…. (To the others) To chalo… Sab baaraat ki taiyaari karo ladke waalon… Vishal tum kuch logon ke saath Ajay ko mandir le jao… Tabhi to baaraat leke aa sakte ho…. Tab tak ladki waale baaraat ke swagat ki taiyaari karte hain!

Saying Mrs. Malhotra dispersed everyone… Before going she looked at Ajay impressed and said…

Mrs. Malhotra: Dulha to bahut achcha lag raha!

Everyone looked at Ajay who smiled in response and took her blessings…. Then she and Dipika went upstairs to check on the girls…

Aryan walking towards Ajay's room glanced once to the top and saw Dipika looking at him….

Seeing from this far she looked at him appreciatively… He looked damn handsome in that suit…. The one she had selected for him while they had marriage shopping.... She was right.... Gold and black suited him a lot…. Her eyes filled with his image she went inside the room smiling!😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Upstairs room….

Just as Dipika entered the room a hush fell around the room… Not noticing it Dipika went straight to tell Neha, that they had to be ready any minute now… All along the girls whispered to each other, grinning indicating Dipika… Mrs. Malhotra also went over and seeing Neha nodded impressed and blessed her…. Just then she looked up and saw the girls whispering….😉 😃

Mrs. Malhotra: Kya ho raha hai yahan? Aise khusur phusur kya ho raha hai?

Only then did Dipika notice the girls and looked at them puzzled… Seeing her, the girls couldn't control anymore and giggled aloud, some laughing too…. Surprised Dipika looked at Neha who was also smiling…. Even Haseena, Purvi and Cynthia… She glanced around the room and saw Sandhya near the shelf where her hand bag was kept and saw her shaking her hand…. Dipika noticed a cell in her hand… Her cell!?!!??

Sandhya smiling strangely walked over to Mrs. Malhotra and looking at Dipika said….

Sandhya: Mummy ji… Aapke bete dost hain naa…. (At this Dipika looked at her flustered) Aapke bete samaan beta…. Vo naa yahan aaye the…

Dipika: (Instantly) Aryan yahan aaya tha?🤔

Mrs. Malhotra looked at Dipika sensing the enthusiasm in her voice and smiled a little….

Sandhya: Haan… Aapse hi milne!

Dipika: (Surprised) Mu… Mujhse!!?!?

Purvi: (Giggling😆) Ab Sandhya bas bhi karo naa… Jo kehena chahathe ho vo kaho… Aryan ke aane se pehle, unke phone aaya tha!

Cynthia: (As if it was a big crime) Haan…. Aur hum tumhare ring tone pehchaan hi nahi sake…. Neha bhi!😃

Sandhya: (Going over to Dipika and giving her the cell) Humne kuch nahi dekha… Na General Profile settings ko… Naa…. Unke naam ke settings ko! (Smiling a little) Out of curiosity you see!😉

Taking the mobile Dipika blushed a little understanding what the girls were getting at…. Seems they knew she had set a separate tone for Aryan… Shhh… She knew she should have taken the mobile with her!

Haseena's Bhabhi: Haiii…. Ladkiyon ke chehere me sharam kitni achchi lag rahi hai!

The other girls laughed a little at this enjoying seeing Dipika embarrassed…. She tried hard to control herself, fiddling with the mobile in her hand…. Mrs. Malhotra taking pity on her situation said….

Mrs. Malhotra: Ab bas bhi karo tum log… Koi naa mil jaaye…. Unki kya halat bana dete ho!

Aadhya: Jaise Aryan ji ki banayi thi!

At this Dipika and Mrs. Malhotra looked at her taken aback and instantly Dipika asked….

Dipika: Kya hua? (Looking around at the girls, a little sternly) Kya kiya Aryan ke saath tum logon ne?😔

Mithra: (Surprised😛) Oie! Hoie! Itna gussa… Apne unko kya hua, iski itniiiiiiii fikar!

Rina: Hota hai Mithra... Chot kaheen aur lagti hai to dard kaheen aur hota hai...

Seeing no one was responding to her question Dipika walked over to Aadhya and asked....

Dipika: Tum batao Aadhya… Yahan kya hua tha?😳

Sandhya: Dekh Aadhya… Chup rehena… Are shaadi ka mahoul hai to chedkhaani hoti hai… Bada chada ke kuch mat bol!

Dipika turned around and looked at Sandhya who shut her mouth and glared at Aadhya…. She silently took Aadhya to a corner and asked her what had happened… As Aadhya told her what had happened Dipika looked at all the girls who were wrapping up their stuffs and glancing occasionally at Dipika…. After Aadhya had told her what had happened…. She felt upset at how Aryan must have felt… But she couldn't get angry with these girls too… She knew they had done it only for fun…. All was in the game!😊

Dipika: (To Sandhya) Tum sab bhi naa… Aisa kyun kiya?😕

Sandhya: (Indignantly) LO! Jaise hum khud gaye aur unhe kheenchke yahan laaye… Wahi aaye the…. Kya hai jab ek bakra milta hai, hum use chodte nahi hain… Vo koi bhi ho!

Dipika looked at her shaking her head knowing it was no use arguing with these crazies…. She decided to first track down Aryan and tell him sorry… She decided against using her mobile seeing the girls! 😉

After five minutes…..

Mrs. Malhotra: Tum log ab taiyaariyaan shuru karo baaraat ke swaagat ke liye…. Abhi dus minute me sab aa jayenge!

The girls all nodded feverishly and started to get to work! ⭐️👏😛

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Posted: 16 years ago

oh, wow, that was long! It was lovely, Di, really, really entertaining and nice. Poor Aryan, though...first the guys, then the girls teasing him...i was laughing so much reading about the girls teasing him like that😆 Bechara.....all the things he has to get through just to see Deepika!

AD scene was really cute 😳...too bad they were interrupted.
can't wait for the shaadi! I know it'll be just as awesome.
love,
Anju
Edited by AJ_ss - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Mingblowing👏,fantastic⭐️,lovely😳,I am Still laughing😆

Thank u thank u di for such a lovely updates😛

Great to see All enjoying ⭐️

Song selection zabardast tha⭐️

Bechara Aryan'''''...........................................................................😉

Kya halat ho gayi thi😆

SS ke chief se jaha sab criminal's derte hai kaise ladkiyon se dar raha tha😆

That was Cho chweet😳

Dipika separate ringtone for Arrrryan😉

Kya baat hai😳

Deepika in Aryan's arm😉

Cho cho Cuuutieeeeeee😳

Gaze between both''''.😳 😳 😳

Vishal scolding went in Deaf ears'.ha ha ha ha😆

Mother's day part was great⭐️

So so nice of you🤗

Ajay-Neha ki shaadi,surely bhaut dhammal hone wala hai aaje😉

Waiting''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''......................................................................

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Edited by ruha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey krithika

You know from past 3 days, i am readig thi FF from 1st part....& i finished 2 parts... krithu krithu krithu..

Mindablowing, excellent, awesome, brilliant, toooooooo good...
I don't have word , i don't have sentece to praise you..sach mein hamein toh .whenever i thought about SS2, i thought if ss2 start than Aryan-deepika's story should be start this way,😍,,all love-hate, fight--apology relationship...😛
but i could never imagine plot & scenes in my mind, after reading ur FF it seems you just wrote my hearts unfill feelings in ur ff....
Most imoprtant thing which i want to mention is:---you wrote whole plots & scene with focused on chractarization of Bhanu & Gauri from SS...i mean when bhanu got angry, when he gives smile,when he jokes, when AD fight..,when deepika scold arayan....i can imagine bhanu-gauri in this all scenes...& also all other charecters too..👏
From FF 2ndpart from valentine day to end of part is my most fav.....oh god oh lord,...what a scenes yaar..I can feel deepika's pain.😭.i can feel Aryan's jealeosy,🥺 his care for deepika....😆i read that part almost 10 times but still i couldn't get over from it....still there is so much left to read...oh oh my bad i missed to discuss those all scenes with all of you in detail..😭😭
Thanks so so much you all of you guyz for forceing me to read whole FF..otherwise i would miss such beautiful story...
Krithika,,,,i want to know, what are you doing?? what is ur profession?? you just go to mumbai & become story writer ..😊this story is so fresh & natural....& billion times better than those all crap seials coming on tv ....😉yaar i must say you have god gifted imagination & talent of writing...i enjoy each & evry scene...i smiled lot & lot yersterday while reading ur FF...😍
thanks thanks, thanks so so so much for this....i wanted to write so much...but i forgot everything....😭anyway "jab yaad aayega toh likhduungi.."..& plzzzz keep writing this FF for another 2-3-4-5 yrs...i don't mind..i will be here to read ur FF.🤪..plz be in touch with me always..
Hum toh sach aapke fan ho gaye...ab kya kahe..
Aavo jappi paloo..🤗
P.S:--- sorry i didn't read ur last extra long update..will read soon...comment on that later..,,i hope i didn;t bore you with this long later..😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kya update hai....................................😍 😍 😍 😍

Meri Khushi to double ho gayi. test finish nahi hui but 14 days gap 😎 aur is gap me upka update...
aur kya chahiye..............👍🏼
truly i'm saying i can't find any words to express, its really enjoying.

Well, Shaadi ka Mohal hain. . . . . . . aur agar Ms Tufan Mail is there......jhatka to acchi tara lagega.

ready ho to Dance ke saath. Saach main Di, i was thinking if i'm watching ( reading ) a movie.

And about BAAZI definately as i'm a girl so i wish girls ye Baazi mare, but sometimes equel bhi hona chahiye😉

Aryan: Dipika ❤️ko aur kisko? Hmpf!

Di....Di....Dipika ki naam juban tak....... pata nahi aru kitne di tak Dipika ki naam thik se nahi liya😍

Aryan Khanna, ACP, Special Squad! Was nervous! To talk to girls!

Well' It is the truth'. If girls were girls there wouldn't be anything to worry about'. But the ones behind that door were more than that'. As Vishal called' "Balayein"' He smiled a little to himself thinking'. Except one!

EXCEPT ONE !!! 😲😲😲 Aru ko har jagah pe bolna hai " Exect one "🤪

Aryan: Di' No.. I' Er... Di'


Bechara Aru.....😳 ACP of Special Squad cant pronounce or to say cant clearly take the name of Special Squad's Forensic Head.....😲😲 Thats seems to be interesting😆
Oh ho.....ab samjhi....agar saamne itnaaaaa bada girls group ho aur wo bhi dengerous to
ye sedha-sadhe 🤓 ladka ......to............

The girls giggling started whispering to each other pointing at Aryan and he stood there rooted just inside the door unable to think of a way out of this situation'. He and his tongue! He was oh so much let slipping everything'. He now knew'. He shouldn't have come here at all' What did he think? Just ask and leave!!!!!! Vishal was right' They were "balayein"!

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Aryan also admit that Sandhya is " balayein " !!!!!!!😕😕

And then.......... nazre se nazre mili........

Seeing her Aryan received a pleasant shock, not expecting her at all'.


Di. . . . . . . . aap is bechara ko din me kitna shoch deti hain ?❓ 1st....girls to itnaaaa shock bana dia ab Dipika.....well ....its a sweet shock...so no probs.😆😃


Vishal: (Hand on his head) Please don't tell me my scolding has gone waste! Into deaf ears!

Boxer: (Clearing his throat) Definitely Vishal'Your scoldings have gone into deaf ears!



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i enjoyed the line totally. whenever i remember this line, i just burst out🤣

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Edited by nirmola - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

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BRILLIANT GR8 FANTABOLOUS WORK KRITHIKA...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

u have done a gr8 job.....i really enjoy reading this...dil hi nahi kar raha tha k khatam ho😛

and aryan scene in girls room was 2 good he was so cofused there😳 and he sentence "di di dipika" by him oh my GOD tht was brilliant and its repition by other girls made us laugh🤣

totally speechless work u have done....or hans hans k bura hal tha while reading this especially aryan condition..🤣🤣

and aryan deepika scene in the hall when she fell in aryan's arms tht was sooooooooooooooooooo lovely and danm cuttee😍😍

really u r a very gud writer parte hoye aisa lagta hai jaise picturization bhi sath dekh rahe hun...😃

its really lovely reading this and enjoyed a lot...thnx for updating...

👍🏼👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

oh, wow, that was long! It was lovely, Di, really, really entertaining and nice. Poor Aryan, though...first the guys, then the girls teasing him...i was laughing so much reading about the girls teasing him like that😆 Bechara.....all the things he has to get through just to see Deepika!

AD scene was really cute 😳...too bad they were interrupted.
can't wait for the shaadi! I know it'll be just as awesome.
love,
Anju

Thank you so much Anjum dear.... They were interrupted yes... But not again 😉

Originally posted by: ruha

Mingblowing👏,fantastic⭐️,lovely😳,I am Still laughing😆

Thank u thank u di for such a lovely updates😛

Great to see All enjoying ⭐️

Song selection zabardast tha⭐️

Bechara Aryan'''''...........................................................................😉

Kya halat ho gayi thi😆

SS ke chief se jaha sab criminal's derte hai kaise ladkiyon se dar raha tha😆

That was Cho chweet😳

Dipika separate ringtone for Arrrryan😉

Kya baat hai😳

Deepika in Aryan's arm😉

Cho cho Cuuutieeeeeee😳

Gaze between both''''.😳 😳 😳

Vishal scolding went in Deaf ears'.ha ha ha ha😆

Mother's day part was great⭐️

So so nice of you🤗

Ajay-Neha ki shaadi,surely bhaut dhammal hone wala hai aaje😉

Waiting''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''......................................................................

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Thank you... Thank you... Thank you so much Pooja.... Jab pyaar ho to choti choti cheezon me unko dekhne ki wish hoti hai... Like this cell phone... So no wonder there 😉
Will update soon enough! 😊

Originally posted by: saifeena143

Hey krithika

You know from past 3 days, i am readig thi FF from 1st part....& i finished 2 parts... krithu krithu krithu..

Mindablowing, excellent, awesome, brilliant, toooooooo good...
I don't have word , i don't have sentece to praise you..sach mein hamein toh .whenever i thought about SS2, i thought if ss2 start than Aryan-deepika's story should be start this way,😍,,all love-hate, fight--apology relationship...😛
but i could never imagine plot & scenes in my mind, after reading ur FF it seems you just wrote my hearts unfill feelings in ur ff....
Most imoprtant thing which i want to mention is:---you wrote whole plots & scene with focused on chractarization of Bhanu & Gauri from SS...i mean when bhanu got angry, when he gives smile,when he jokes, when AD fight..,when deepika scold arayan....i can imagine bhanu-gauri in this all scenes...& also all other charecters too..👏
From FF 2ndpart from valentine day to end of part is my most fav.....oh god oh lord,...what a scenes yaar..I can feel deepika's pain.😭.i can feel Aryan's jealeosy,🥺 his care for deepika....😆i read that part almost 10 times but still i couldn't get over from it....still there is so much left to read...oh oh my bad i missed to discuss those all scenes with all of you in detail..😭😭
Thanks so so much you all of you guyz for forceing me to read whole FF..otherwise i would miss such beautiful story...
Krithika,,,,i want to know, what are you doing?? what is ur profession?? you just go to mumbai & become story writer ..😊this story is so fresh & natural....& billion times better than those all crap seials coming on tv ....😉yaar i must say you have god gifted imagination & talent of writing...i enjoy each & evry scene...i smiled lot & lot yersterday while reading ur FF...😍
thanks thanks, thanks so so so much for this....i wanted to write so much...but i forgot everything....😭anyway "jab yaad aayega toh likhduungi.."..& plzzzz keep writing this FF for another 2-3-4-5 yrs...i don't mind..i will be here to read ur FF.🤪..plz be in touch with me always..
Hum toh sach aapke fan ho gaye...ab kya kahe..
Aavo jappi paloo..🤗
P.S:--- sorry i didn't read ur last extra long update..will read soon...comment on that later..,,i hope i didn;t bore you with this long later..😳😳😳

My my my Trupti... Thank you soooooooo much.............. I am flattered! I enjoyed reading all your comments, especially a big thank I should say for making me revive my old parts... had a good time there! 😳
Thanks for been my fan... But I write what I feel... What I like.... Me a software professional... Yew writing to sirf hobby ke taur pe hai.... Story writing is not my cup of tea 😊
Will be waiting for your comments on this extra long update! 👏
As for wanting to discuss scenes, if you want you can discuss them again... i know my officers would like to go back their memory lane to think about this FF... I think so... 😃 And I would also like to know which scenes my officers remember so well in this FF.... it is a writer's compliment! 😛
Aur paanch saal 😆 Too much! But I can this FF is not going to get over any time soon in the future! 😉
thank you specially for the comment about Bhanu and Gauri!
Haan jappi le li maine! 😃

Originally posted by: nirmola

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Kya update hai....................................😍 😍 😍 😍

Meri Khushi to double ho gayi. test finish nahi hui but 14 days gap 😎 aur is gap me upka update...
aur kya chahiye..............👍🏼
truly i'm saying i can't find any words to express, its really enjoying.

Well, Shaadi ka Mohal hain. . . . . . . aur agar Ms Tufan Mail is there......jhatka to acchi tara lagega.

ready ho to Dance ke saath. Saach main Di, i was thinking if i'm watching ( reading ) a movie.

And about BAAZI definately as i'm a girl so i wish girls ye Baazi mare, but sometimes equel bhi hona chahiye😉

Aryan: Dipika ❤️ko aur kisko? Hmpf!

Di....Di....Dipika ki naam juban tak....... pata nahi aru kitne di tak Dipika ki naam thik se nahi liya😍

Aryan Khanna, ACP, Special Squad! Was nervous! To talk to girls!

Well' It is the truth'. If girls were girls there wouldn't be anything to worry about'. But the ones behind that door were more than that'. As Vishal called' "Balayein"' He smiled a little to himself thinking'. Except one!

EXCEPT ONE !!! 😲😲😲 Aru ko har jagah pe bolna hai " Exect one "🤪

Aryan: Di' No.. I' Er... Di'


Bechara Aru.....😳 ACP of Special Squad cant pronounce or to say cant clearly take the name of Special Squad's Forensic Head.....😲😲 Thats seems to be interesting😆
Oh ho.....ab samjhi....agar saamne itnaaaaa bada girls group ho aur wo bhi dengerous to
ye sedha-sadhe 🤓 ladka ......to............

The girls giggling started whispering to each other pointing at Aryan and he stood there rooted just inside the door unable to think of a way out of this situation'. He and his tongue! He was oh so much let slipping everything'. He now knew'. He shouldn't have come here at all' What did he think? Just ask and leave!!!!!! Vishal was right' They were "balayein"!

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Aryan also admit that Sandhya is " balayein " !!!!!!!😕😕

And then.......... nazre se nazre mili........

Seeing her Aryan received a pleasant shock, not expecting her at all'.


Di. . . . . . . . aap is bechara ko din me kitna shoch deti hain ?❓ 1st....girls to itnaaaa shock bana dia ab Dipika.....well ....its a sweet shock...so no probs.😆😃


Vishal: (Hand on his head) Please don't tell me my scolding has gone waste! Into deaf ears!

Boxer: (Clearing his throat) Definitely Vishal'Your scoldings have gone into deaf ears!



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i enjoyed the line totally. whenever i remember this line, i just burst out🤣

wonderful.........
awsome.............
Brilliant..........
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Wondeful comments nirmola... Thanks a lot!
Aru ko of course har jagah bolna hai "Except one"... Vo unhe kaise kuch keh sakta hai! 😳 Aur Ayrna ne explicitly Sandhya ko bala nahi kahi baba... Ek flow me aa gaya... And he never means things like these serious naa!
Aur Di.. Di... Dipika ke baare me tumne such kaha... When you are surronded by unexpected crowd, you forget everything 😆
To tumhe lagta hai bechare ki shock khatam ho gayi 😉😉 Is din ko zindagiyaad rakhne ke liye use zor ka jhatka dena hai naa yaar... Abhi vo baaki hai 😃
As for Baazi... Me too confused.... Ki kise jitayein... have kept the decision for last minute... Mood ke hisaab se uski outcome likh doongi! 😊

Originally posted by: veena01

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BRILLIANT GR8 FANTABOLOUS WORK KRITHIKA...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

u have done a gr8 job.....i really enjoy reading this...dil hi nahi kar raha tha k khatam ho😛

and aryan scene in girls room was 2 good he was so cofused there😳 and he sentence "di di dipika" by him oh my GOD tht was brilliant and its repition by other girls made us laugh🤣

totally speechless work u have done....or hans hans k bura hal tha while reading this especially aryan condition..🤣🤣

and aryan deepika scene in the hall when she fell in aryan's arms tht was sooooooooooooooooooo lovely and danm cuttee😍😍

really u r a very gud writer parte hoye aisa lagta hai jaise picturization bhi sath dekh rahe hun...😃

its really lovely reading this and enjoyed a lot...thnx for updating...

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Glad to read your comments Veena... Thanks 😳 Main hamesha details me believe karti hoon.. Like to write how I like to read... Just have penned down, or rather keyed in my thoughts... that's all 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Aryan had reached the hall having just finished mumbling about the girls and finally taking a deep breath calmed down his nerves'. He took a casual look around to see if anything was pending and remembered that he had to get someone to fix the door hanging when he saw'.

A lady in pink was hanging up the garland on the door's entrance standing on a stool' He didn't see her face as she was standing high on the stool trying to hang the garland' He shrugged off and seeing everything was fine was just about to go to Ajay's room when he glanced at the entrance and saw the stool the lady was standing on, teeter'

Aryan: (Shouting) Hey!😲

stunned he rushed to help her'. Just as the stool slid off her feet the lady lost her balance and fell' Right into his arms'. He held her in his arms sighing relieved that nothing had happened'.

Worried Aryan looked down at the person in his arms to check if she was okay'. But the lady shocked by the fall had her face covered expecting a bad blow'.

Aryan: Excuse me'. Aap theek to hain?❓

Hearing his voice she immediately opened her hands and looked up surprised at him'

Seeing her Aryan received a pleasant shock, not expecting her at all'.

They kept looking at each other surprised and stunned a little'. Embarrassed??!? No' But surprised and actually loving'. 😍

Having no support to catch Dipika was feeling uncomfortable and her neck had started aching' Sensing it Aryan shifted his hands a little so that she felt a little more comfortable and said softly..'.

Aryan: Pakado!😳

Dipika looked on at him as he nodded his reassurance' She lowered her eyes and slowly, hesitantly wrapped her hands around his neck as he pulled her higher, closer to him' Something happened to her breath due to that closeness'. She looked up at him looking at her' Only at her' Her only! She averted her eyes!😳

Aryan smiled a little seeing her blush in his arms' Then becoming stern again he asked'

Aryan: Kya kar rahi thi?

Dipika: (Looking up at him indicated the garland up at the door) Vo' Toran' It was hanging' Socho ki use'

Aryan: (Angry😡) Pata hai' Lekin tum kyun kar rahi thi? Kisi aur se karva sakti thi'.

Dipika: (Indignantly) Sab busy the Aryan' Waise ek toran hi to tha'

She became upset seeing him scold that way'. Seeing her becoming dull he said'😔

Aryan: Gir jaati to? (Softly) Chot lag jaati to?

At this Dipika kept looking on at him seeing the concern in his eyes, hearing the concern in his voice'. She then realized'. Even if she had hurt herself it wouldn't have hurt her so much as it would have for him'. It had been so like that ever'. Even before when she had fractured her hand, he was the one very worried'. Most!❤️

Aryan looked at her looking up at him and breathed a relief that nothing serious had happened' If she had gotten hurt he knew he wouldn't have been able to bear it'. He himself didn't have any rights to hurt her'. So how can anybody else have'? Living or non-living'. No' No one had it' Not even Dipika herself!❤️

Kya scene tha, ................................................
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krithu. ..❤️All aryan-deepika's romantic scene always give me broad smile on my face.😃...coz the way you write their dialogue & expression , i can imagine actually them in video...👏👏👏
& poor aryan, oh god....i think vishal should be there...he can give better answer to girls...😆😆

Vishal: (Looking at her casually thinking the other way, smiling a little) Kya hua? Girrrr gayi? (Glancing at Aryan) Ya janaab ke haathon me'.😃

Vishal: (Hand on his head) Please don't tell me my scolding has gone waste! Into deaf ears!😵

Hearing this comment Mrs. Malhotra and the others puzzled looked at him' They saw him look at Dipika and Aryan in turns and they themselves saw and understood'. His scolding definitely had gone waste' Into deaf ears!
Boxer: (Clearing his throat) Definitely Vishal'Your scoldings have gone into deaf ears!😆

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I must say...you have created Vishal charecter very strongly with ur brilliant imagination...👍🏼.i just fall in love with this vishal's charectre...😃.he is such a nice guy, true gentele men,,, very careful person, best friend,,, brilliant cop..👏.just like aryan...i can imagine hiten in this role....if it potraye in actually , hiten would be perfect choice for that...😊
& Frenemies relation between Aryan-vishal is just too good...👏👏👏i love scenes between them specially when vishal clearly talk with arayn about deepika in deepika's birthday party...& those all scene when vishal tried to jeouls aryan flirteing with deepika..😆
so as my little cutie, baby sri.......🤗each & every scene between Aryan & sri was so so so adorable....plz come back her soon...
Edited by saifeena143 - 16 years ago

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