The steps a poem lakshman's feelings on meeting urmi - Page 2

Originally posted by: Milaksh

This is too too good😃😃

Loved it❤️

👏🤗👏

This is the first time I felt that the native feelings were perfectly and flawlessly conveyed in English😳

👏👏

Keep writing more dear😊😉

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Charvi I loved the last rhyming lines too much starting from let me be her groom, she my bride

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

this was sooo beautiful

I loved the lines, I will be trust nd u my believe

This poem just showed ur beautiful thoughts nd mindset
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Keep writing sweetie

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Wonderful Charvi

You seem to have put in a great effort to pen down this Beautiful and emotional Poem👏

Originally posted by: asmitag

Marvellous and beautiful Charvi 😳👏

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Too beautiful to be described in words,Charu.
What should I say?You left me into tears.
Each step was just like each beat of the heart,each tide of the wave and each glitter of the moon.
The Wows❤️
The last lines were absolutely bliss.
Wow!

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Unres

Char, Char, Char 👏👏

Lakhan's thoughts were so perfect.

Seven the eternal number. Seven heads, seven steps, seven meet, seven form. The symbolism was apt 😳

I got everything you are saying here, Char :)

The last line was so perfect, that the moon was so touched 😳

Originally posted by: raji91

Nice post

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Reserved

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Unres

Okay, where do I begin?

Each line of the poem had depth and brought the feelings out perfectly.

The lines about his vows. ❤️ I am speechless, mindblown.