Lakshmila OS : Is my wait over? Is it really not a dream? UPDATED !!

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Omg, our lil kiddo writes really well haan😆. U described every scene perfectly. I would love to see these scenes in SKR but hopes are very less😒.

Hanuman urmilla

Ram urmila

Lakshmila

Sira lakshmila

Nd then all couples together

And all the pictures are really good .

All those scenes were really cute. Keep writing.

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pragprag

@pragprag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Amazing.i Love how u used pictures,it really made me picture the story.I wish they show this in skr.It shows the pain lakshman and Urmila felt.

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

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Sumi dear this is so beautiful!! Their reunion and the lovely bonds you showed here!! Really amazing!! Loved it! 👏

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Sumi i reviewed , check post on page 2

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Awww..this is sooo cute...Sumi...well done girl. Continue the good work. Loved how much in depth you went.👍🏼

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Sumi this is the best reunion one could imagine wrt the nidravdevi track.

Pictures are perfect and the bonding between each of them is uperbly depicted.The moment when Urmi opens up her eyes❤️

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Sumi, this was beautiful

The reunion ❤️

You are very talented 😳 Write more 😊

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Shivam...
This was really Nice
And i am glad after long time i got to read a very long version

All characters given a very proper amount of space , and the choice of putting pics in between only made the visualization better

Lakshmila was really the core , but i think the latter scenes with Hanuman prooved to be cherry on top

Great going , and do write more😃

Thanks a lot bhaiya !!!! 🤗 😃 😳 When I write about Lakshmila, I usually forget that how long it is going !! 😆 😆 Yeah , bhaiya , I want to put Hanumila too in this !!! 😳 And yes , Will write more !!! Thanks !! 😃 😳