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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Bhaiya congratulations for that yuck I mean yellow 😆
You have still not updated your OS?

It's on page 4, mad child :P

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Bhaiya congratulations for that yuck I mean yellow 😆
You have still not updated your OS?

And that Goldie often sounds OLDIE to me😆😆

For the update of the four , it should be done by monday as those are the longer updates as well as more difficult to write as I have to make it funny

The story which I posted here on "Patni " was thought and written in half an hour😆

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Shivam...

And that Goldie often sounds OLDIE to me😆😆

For the update of the four , it should be done by monday as those are the longer updates as well as more difficult to write as I have to make it funny

The story which I posted here on "Patni " was thought and written in half an hour😆

I guess after so many pre-assumptions about you here,you are scared of words 'AGE' and 'OLD' 😆

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LakshMila

I guess after so many pre-assumptions about you here,you are scared of words 'AGE' and 'OLD' 😆

Add Boy and Girl to that assumption list😆😆

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Rex_Ryan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

nice drabbles everyone!!!
can anyone review here (and when)???

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Ryan,reviewing starts tomorrow after 10 AM and winner will be decided hence.Get ready!

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Rex_Ryan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

okay!!!
need to tell the reason in comment or only like the drabble??

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

People start reviewing now.
Point out your top 5.

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

First of All I have to say that all the writers have done a wonderful Job in posting their stories.

Main objective should be to participate . But as we have to pick only 5 , the ones not picked by me doesnt mean that those updates werent good .

My picks would be the ones below

1. ROLE OF A WIFE

2. HIS PATNI

3. WITHOUT HER , HIS WIFE

4. THE BETTER HALF

5. MY WIFE.

Once again I would firmly say that all the updates were wonderful

The best one I liked was Role of Wife as it showcased new side of Urmila as to how she gave answers confidently to each family member , keeping in mind that all those questions were quite valid from their point of view .

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Anokhisharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

All the updates were awesome... I wish I could select all but unfortunately we have to choose only five... So I pick the following stories as top five

1. The better wife
2. My wife
3. Without her his wife
4. His patni
5. The better half

I chose the story "the better wife" coz when lakshman was speaking about urmila, I could feel the love nd pain in his speech... I felt as if all those incidents were taking place right before my eyes
But all the stories were very well written and portrayed Lakshmila very nicely

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