LakshMila SS- Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai,Part 5 pg 6 updated 31/3 - Page 5

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Realyy nice one trina. Sorry I could not comment yesterday even though I read it in between my work as it was year end pressure.
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Realyy nice one trina. Sorry I could not comment yesterday even though I read it in between my work as it was year end pressure.

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment
I am glad that you liked it

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Part -5

The next day, both Urmila and Lakshman were very excited to meet each other.

But as soon as Urmila got ready to go to the temple with her sisters, her mother Sunaina called them.

Kya hua maa aapne hume bulaya kya, Sita asked her.

Haan beta, mujhe pata hai ki tum log abhi mandir ja rahe ho par abhi mujhe tum logon ki madad chaheiye. Tumhari shaadi ke liye muje kuch aabhooshan chunne hain, Main chati hun ki tum log bhi mere saath chalo.

Thik hai maa, hum abhi aate hai. Sita replied.

After her mother had left, Sita turned towards her sisters.

Chalo abhi maa ke saath chalte hain. Baad mein mandir chale jaenge.

Mandavi and Shrutkirti smiled and nodded.But Urmila seemed sad yet she said agreed.

Kya hua Urmi tum udaas lag rahi ho, Sita whispered in her ears.

Nahi didi aisa kuch nahi hai. Main toh bahut khush hun akhir aap ke liye hume gahane jo chunne ja rahe hai, She replied hiding her inner sadness.

Sumitranandan mera intezaar kar rahe honge par abhi toh mujhe sita didi ke madad bhi karni hai. Koi baat nahi main Sita didi ki madad karne ke poorv unse mil lungi.Woh mujhe jaruur maaf kar denge, she thought.

The sisters then went to help their mother choose jewellery for their lovely Sita didi.

On the other hand, Lakshman had told Ram that he had to go for some important work and was waiting for Urmila near the tree where he had told her to meet him.

Abhi tak Mila kyun nahi aae hain. Mila toh kabhi bhi der se nahi aati hai. Mujhe mandir mein nahi wo dekhi aur nahi unke behane dekhi hai. Pata nahi kahan hongi.
He was getting very impatient.

Par Lakshman chinta mat karo. Mujhe pata hai ki meri Mila mujhse milne jaruur aaegi akhr usne mujhe vaada jo kiya hai aur wo vaada kabhi bhi nahi todhegi. Mujhe lagta hai ki wo kisse jaruuri karya mein phaas gayi hogi. Abhi kuch hi der mein aa jaegi wo dekhne, he reassured himself.

Here in the palace after they had chosen jewellery for Sita, Urmila was very happy and after tellling Sita that she had to do some important work, she left from there.

Sita was smiling, Mujhe pata hai Urmi tumhe kon sa aavashyak karya hai, she thought.

Urmila ran from the palace towards the destination.
Akhir yeh karya jaldi khatam ho gaya.Isme bahut samay bhi nahi laga par Sumitranandan mera intezaar kar rahe honge isliye mujhe jaldi jaana chaheiye.

But while waiting near the tree, Lakshman heard someone calling him. He turned around to see rishi Vishwamitra calling him.He went towards him.

Pranaam guruji, aapne mujhe bulaya. Mere liye koi aadesh, He said folding his hands and bowed infront of him.

Haan Lakshman,mujhe abhi kisse aavashyakkarya se raja Dashrath ke kuch baat karni tha aur abhi kuch chhaatr yahan par prashikshan kar rahe hain. Main chhaata hun ki tum unki abhyaas karne mein maadad karo.

Jaisa aapki aagya hai,he bowed again. and rishi Vishwamitra left from there.

Arey agar Mila yahan aa gayi toh main kya karunga par mujhe guruji ki aagya ka palan bhi karna hai. Koi baat nahi we jaldi hi aa jaenge, he thought and went towards the ashram.

During this time, Urmila had reached the tree and she was surprised when she found no one there.

Arey yeh Sumitranandan kahan chale gae. Haan mujhe aane main thodi der toh ho gayi hai par unhe toh yahin par hona chahiye tha. Chalo koi baat nahi, main yahan intezaar karti hun.
She looked around to see if he was nearby but it was of no use. At last she decided to wait and sat down on the ground.

After sometime rishi Vishwamitra returned to the ashram and then Lakshman took his leave.
When he reached there he could not see his Mila for the area was surrounded by many bushes and she sat on the opposite side.

Arey Mila abhi tak nahi aae hai mujhe toh laga tha ki wo ab tab aa jaegi par nahi, he was very upset as he was going towards the tree. But someone placed his hands on his shoulder and he turned around to see his brothers Bharat and Shatrughan

Lakshman bhaiyya aap yahan,hum aapko hi doondh rahe the.

Main kuch karya se aaya tha.Tumhe bhi koi karya tha

Nahi ashram main sab bhojan grahan karna waale hain. Maine tumhe dekha to soocha ki tumhe bhi boola lun.Ab chalo bhi tum, Bharat replied.

Thik aap jao main aata hun.He said and went to check for the last time.

Woh abhi tak nahi aae hai.Unhone mujhe kaha tha ki main unka intezaar karun par woh abhi tab nahi aae hai itni der ho gayi hai. Mujhe ab chalna bhi hoga, Urmila was also very upset on not finding him there.She got up and went home during this time.

When Lakshman reached there she had already left. Woh nahi aae na mujh se milne. Unhone mujhse vaada bhi kiya tha par unhone aapna vaada toodh diya.Urmila ab main tumse bahut gussa hun.

Rajkumar Lakshman aapne thik nahi kiya. Aapne mujhe bhulaya par aap nahi aae wahan. Maine aapka kitne der intezaar kiya. Mujhe laga tha ki aap mujhse prem karte hai par nahi...Urmila was so sad that she didnt realise that tears were flowing from her eyes.

When she reached the palace she wiped her tears and quitely went to her room. She didnt want anyone to see her like that especially her Sita didi as she would get worried about her.

When Sita came into her room, she tried to behave normal but her Sita didi realised that something was wrong.

Urmi hum mandir hi jaane wale the. Accha hua hi tum aa gayi ab tumbhi chalo.

Nahi didi aap he jao.Mujhe nahi jaana hai.

Kya hua Urmi. Tum thik toh hona.

Haan didi, main toh thik hun.

Mujhe accha lagega agar tum chalogi.

Thik hai didi aap keh rahi ho toh main bhi chalti hun, She smiled hoping that her could hide her sadness from her sister.

In the ashram when everyone had finished lunch, Ram and his brothers decided to go for a walk.

Aaisa karte hain ki hum sab bageeche mein ghoomane ke liye chalte hai, Ram suggested.

Haan bhaiyya, Bharat and Shatrughan were very excited.

Lakshman tumhe kya hua, tumhe nahi chalna hai kya, Ram looked at his brother.

Nahi bhaiyya aap log hi chaleyie.mujhe nahi aana hai.

Kyun lakshman, tum kyun nahi aa rahe ho, Bharat asked him.

Haan bhaiyya agar aap nahi aaoge toh hum bhi nahi jaenge, Shatrughan said.

Haan Lakshman, tum nahi chaloge toh hum bhi nahi jaenge, Ram realised that sometime was wrong with him. Ever since he had returned he was behaving unusual.he seemed too quite and was trying to hide something from them.

Thik hai, main bhi chalunga. Lakshman at last gave up for he knew that there was no point arguing with his brothers.

When the sisters were returning from the temple, they ran into the brothers.

Pranaam , aap log yahan. Sita asked.

Haan hum log yahan ghoomane aae the. aap log yahan, Ram asked her.

Hum log mandir se wapas ghar ja rahe the, Mandavi replied.

Accha, Ram said.

Waise bhabhi, aap log bhi hum log ke saath kyun nahi chalti hai. Shatrughan suggested, smiling at Shrutkirti.

Haan Sitae, aap log bhi humare saath chaleiye na, Ram said looking at Sita.

Thik hai, the sisters agreed readily.

But there were two people who didnt like that idea-Urmila and Lakshman.

Didi, main bahut thak gayi hun.main ghar ja rahi hun, Urmila told Sita.

Kya hua Urmi, main bhi chalun, Sita looked at her with concern.

Nahi didi, aap yahan rahiye, main akeli chali jaongi, she said and left from there.

Bhaiyya main bhi ja rahun, mujhe kuch karya hai, saying this Lakshman also left from there.

Ram and Sita looked at there siblings with concern.

Pata nahi, Lakshman ko kya ho gaya hai, bhaiyaa. Bharat asked.

Haan, Urmila bhi bahut ajeeb vyavahaar kar rahi hai jab se woh aae hai, Mandavi told Sita.

Mujhe lagta hai ki in donno ke bheech mein kuch jhagra hua hai, Sita said.

Haan par is baar baat kuch alag hai, Ram said thoughtfully.

Haan, mujhe lagta hai hume kuch karna padhega, Sita smiled at Ram.

Haan aap sahi keh rahi hain bhabhi, par hum kya karen, Bharat asked them.

Bhaiyya, mere paas ek yojna hai, Shatrughan seemed excited.

Nahi tum toh rahne hi do, Ram said. Pata nahi kya ajeeb se yojna hogi tumhare paas.

Bhaiyya ek baar sun toh lijeye, he said making a cute face.

The sisters tried to convince ram.

Accha thik hai, batao bhi ab,he gave up at last.

Shatrughan whispered something slowly.

Aapko lagta hai ki yeh kaam karega, Shrutkirti asked him.

Haan aap log vishwaas kariye yeh jaruur kaam karega, he reassured them.

Urmila was in her room lying on her bed thinking about lakshman, aapne yeh sahi nahi kiya. aapko aisa nahi karna chahieye tha.

Suddenly her sisters entered there,

Didi, becchare rajkumar Lakshman,

Haan Mandavi, becchare devarji. kitne joor se lag gayi hai unke paaron mein. Kitna rakt bhi bah raha tha...

Kya hua didi, unke kya hua, Urmila looked worried.

Kuch nahi didi,aapko unke baare mein chinta kyun ho rahi rahi, Shrutkirti asked her.

Haan Urmi, tumhara toh unse jhagda hua tha, Mandavi said.

Nahi woh toh bas aise hi pooch liya maine.Urmila was quite sad.

Waise tumhe chinta karne ke koi jarurat nahi hai, Sita said placing her hands on her shoulder.

Main kaise chinta na karun didi, she thought.

Waise unke kaise lag gayi,she asked her really worried about him.

Tum yeh sab chhodo waise bhi.., mandavi said.

Didi main abhi aati hun maa ne mujhe bulaya hai, she said and went towards the ashram running as fast she could.

Didi, dekhiye na kaise Urmi yahan se gayi hai,Mandavi told Sita.

Haan Mandavi, mujhe lagta hai yeh yojna aavashya hi saphal hogi, Sita said.

Here in the ashram, the brothers also said the same thing to Lakshman and he ran towards the palace.

Mila tum chinta mat karo tumhara Lakshman aa raha hai, he was thinking.

Both of them were lost in their thoughts that they couldnt see each other coming from the front and they clashed with each other.

Aahh!!Urmila said.

Aap dekh kar nahi chal sakti hain,Lakshman said and they both looked up to see each other.

Aap thik hain na, urmila asked.

Haan, aapko toh chooth lagi thi na, he inquired.

Nahi, main toh thik hun. wo toh aapko lagi thi na...

Suddenly they both realised that their siblings had fooled them.

Accha, toh yeh baat hai, Lakshman said looking away.

Waise aap kyun yahan aae, haan. Waise bhi aapko toh meri chinta karni ki koi jaruurat nahi hai.

Accha, chinta ko aapko meri nahi hai, Lakshman replied angrily.

Haan, haan,galti toh meri hain na.pata nahi kya sooch kar main aapse prem kar bathi, she said
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he looked at her and said,Waah!aap mujhse prem karti hain. Agar aap mujhse prem karti toh mere saath aisa nahi karti. Pata nahi maine kyun aapse prem kiya.Mujhe laga ki aap bhi mujhse prem karte hoge par nahi,,,

Accha, aap ko prem ki baate na hi kariye toh accha hoga.aapko shoobha nahi deta.Baade aai prem karne waale. Aap ko pata bhi nahi hai ki prem kya hota hai.

He held her hands and pulled her towards himself.
Aapne kya kaha ki mujhe prem karna nahi aata hai, haan.accha.agar mein prem nahi karta toh us din mein aapka itni der ped ke paas intezaar nahi karta samjhi aap.Par aapko kya aapne vaada kiya par aapne usse nahi poora kiya.

He left her hands after that.

Kya kaha aapne ki maine apna vaada nahi poora kiya.Jhooth mat boliya.Main us din aae thi aap ki nahi aae the. Yeh baat jaruur hai ki main der se aae thi par main aae thi. Par aap hi nahi aae the.

Kya kahan, main aaya tha.Haan ein beech mein rishi Vishwamitra ke karya se kuch der chala gaya tha par main aaya tha.Maine bahut der intezaar kiya par baad mein guruji ke jo karya diya tha unse karne chaala gaya tha.Par aapko na dekh kar main chala gaya baad mein.

Kya aap aae the, mujhe maaf kar dijeye. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap wahan aae the.mujhe maa ne bulaya tha isliye main der se aae the aur maine aapka intezaar bhi liya tha. Par aap nahi the toh main bhi chale aai, she said making a cute face.

Arey Mila, tum kyun maafi galti toh meri bhi thi. Par ab tum aa he gayi ho toh main tumse kuch kehna chahta hun.

Mila, main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun. Main tumhare bina nahi rah sakta hun.main tumhe apne saath ayodhaya le jaana chahta hun tum apna bana kar.Kya tum mere saath apni zindaagi guzaarna chahti ho.

Hearing this tearing started flowing from her eyes.She hugged him as tightly as she could.he was also very happy.

Arey Mila tum ro kyun rahi hua.kya hua, he asked cupping her face and slowly wiping her tears.

Yeh khushi ke aansoo hai. Aapko nahi pata main kab se yeh sab aapse sunna chahti thi. Aapko nahi pata par jab maine aapko pehle baar dekha hai swayamwar mein tabse aap mere dil mein bas gaye hai.Maine bhi aapse bahut prem karti hun.main aapke bina nahi rah sakti hun.

Sacchi main bahut khush hun tumhari baat sun kar par.

Kya hua aap thode dukhi lag rahen hai.kya hua.

Mila wo baat hai ki... dekho baas mein yeh kehna chahtu hun ki..Main ram bhaiyya se bahut prem karta hun aur.. tumhe kaise baataun ki..

Aap chinta mat kariye.Mujhe pata hai ki aap jijashree se bahut prem karte hai aur aap poori samay unki sewa karna chahte hai.Agar aap yeh sooch raahe hai ki main aapke iss karya main baadha banungi toh aap chinta mat kariye.Main aapko vaada karte hun ki main aapke aur jijashree ke beech kabhi nahi aaungi aur aap par kabhi apni patni hone ka adhikar nahi jamaungi.Aap aur aapke sewa ke beech main kabhi bhi nahi aaungi.

Lakshman was so happy to hear these words from her mouth that he hugged her tightly.

They wished that time would stop at this very moment.It was a special moment for both of them.Neither of them wanted to leave the other.After all love is that only.After sometime they came out of their trance.

Sumitranandan ab toh aap mujhe chhor dijeye.kisse hume dekh kiya toh wo kya sochenge.

Jisse jo sochna hai wo sochne do. Akhir kya main apni hone waale patni ko gale nahi laga sakta kya.

She loosened his grip over her.

Aapko uske liye thoda intezaar karna padhega. Aur waise bhi yahan bahut log hain.

Arey Mila toh phir kyun na kahin aur chale, he said winking at her.

Seeing his twinkling eyes she realised his naughty plan.

Aap bhi na, she said and started running from there.

Mila arey aise tum nahi ja sakti.ab mila tum mujhse bach nahi sakti.Tumhe main apne se dur jaane nahi dunga.He said and ran after her.



This was the last part. Hope you all liked it.Sorry if I am not able to meet your expectations.
Please read and don't forget to comment.
Bye
Trina😊
Edited by trina134 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Nice Trina , And certainly you have written more than my expectation.
Keep it up and do write more plots , dont finish it here.😃

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Originally posted by: Shivam...

Very Nice Trina , And certainly you have written more than my expectation.

Keep it up and do write more plots , dont finish it here.😃

Thanks a lot Shivam
I am happy that you liked it

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Thanks alot for reading and liking
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Yaar trini it was grt...
Superb...
Dono ke naak pe gussa rehta h...

Ej request ho sake toh iska season 2 banao vid marriage rituals n marriage n uske baad ka ek adha part...
Plzzz vil luv if u fulfill dis req.
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Thanks for the nice update. Will write more later
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Too gud Trina,especially the last part!
Nothing could have been more awesome ;)
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I really love your updates!!! If there was to be a show on LakshMila I swear they would use some ideas from this!! Keep up the good work!
From a fellow SKR Ff writer, Anu

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