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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_16

hello...🤗

Asu check out Tha and Mine's update...from our drabbles corner

Okk😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I updated :)
Read and comment :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Astoria

Okay,my friends.Here is a glimpse of my modern LakshMila SS which I am planning to post in the Fanfiction Column.I know that I may be welcomed with sandals,rotten tomatoes,etc for this.Yet I decided to take the risk anyway.I would continue only if you guys approve.Please tell me your views about it.All sorts of views are welcome.Rotten tomatoes and sandals are welcome too.But no eggs please.And I am sorry for the grammatical errors if any.



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Still not asleep?? Is there a problem??',he asked
No.Not at all.',she said.
But you have called at 3:00 AM,Mila!!! Wait!! Maybe you are missing me.',he chuckled.
Don't be stupid,!!! I am not missing you!! Its just that...',she began
What's the matter?? Mila,you can tell me.Is everything alright??',he sounded concerned.
I was just thinking...if we,if we could possibly...',her voice broke.
Mila,are you crying???? Please,tell me!! Is it about the wedding???Are you not happy with it??Tell me,Mila.I can stop everything right now.You don't have to worry.I will take the responsibility.No one will blame you.',he said.
Mehul,calm down.Let me finish.I had called to ask you if we could possibly pre-pone the wedding.',she said.
Oh!! Mila,you just scared me for a moment.',he said.
I would have loved to see your expression right now.',she said.
No,seriously.I was scared.This marriage.Everything.Its happening so soon.And moreover,I know how difficult it must be for you to move on after what happened between you and...'
Stop it,Mehul!! We had a deal.Never again would you mention him in front of me!! Nothing would remind me of him.You had promised.Remember??',she said.
All right!!! Mila,all right!!! I won't mention him again.So,are you sure??',he asked.
About what?? The venue?? I have told you.It has to be the Palace in Udaipur.I am not getting married anywhere else.',she said in a playful voice.
Hold on,girl!! How will I manage with a wife like you if I get bankrupt??',he feigned horror.
You are not getting bankrupt before the earth stops revolving around the Sun,Mehul!!'she said.
Okay,okay.Udaipur,it is.Now be a good girl and go to sleep.Love you!!',he said.
Lov...good night,Mehul.Take care of yourself.',she said and hung up.
She was really lucky to get a friend like Mehul who was caring and supportive as well.And moreover,she would be getting married to him in a few months.Mehul would help her to forget her traumatic past.She was sure of that.Then,why was her heart heavy??Was it because of...him??His mere thought gave her an unimaginable pain.But the most surprising part was that she did not want this pain to leave her.It reminded her of him.A part of her,actually,her entire heart and soul longed for him.She reached for the locket which she kept under her pillow.
It was looking a bit pale.She caressed the L' that hung from the silver chain.She could still feel his touch on it.Whenever she wished to believe that he was only an illusion,that he had never existed,this little locket would remind her that he had once breathed.She could not stop the tears from coming out.
Why are you doing this to me???You are gone!! You are dead!!! I am supposed to hate you!!Why??? Why am I unable to hate you???Why??',she cried.


He was sitting alone in the darkness.He was accustomed to it.It helped him think better.
Not feeling sleepy?',asked a man.
How did you enter my room??',he asked.
Through the door,in case you haven't noticed,you have kept it open.',said the man.
I wish to be left alone Zahid.For now.',he said.
You are alone,Sam!!You are always alone.You always were alone.',said Zahid.
Not always.',he said.
Thinking about her again??? Saumitra Raj Bansal,do you realise that you have become obsessed with that girl??',said Zahid shaking his head.
Obsession is too strong a word,Zahid.However,no other word can describe my feelings for her at this particular moment.',he remarked.
Feelings??You and feelings?? Come on,Sam!! Since when did you have feelings??',laughed Zahid.
I did once.Though,I don't have much of them left in me now.',he said.
But you do feel for this girl.Admit it,you are counting the days left for you to meet her.',said Zahid.
Yes,I am.Though,I am not sure.',he said.
Not sure about what,Sam??',asked Zahid.
I am not sure about how I should kill her.',he whispered.




This is so wonderful...will be waiting eagerly now for the update. 👏 👏 👏
Modern LakshMilaq...modeled around Count of Monte Cristo...I am already hooked.👍🏼
Hum to avashya padhenge Swami...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is anyone alive here?
Rishivar, kahan hai aap?
Shivam... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Everyone ,
So sorry I am Late today.

All day went in travelling with a french client 😆 ,

now I back at hotel 😃.


Edited by Shivam... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Hi Everyone ,

So sorry I am Late today.

All day went in travelling with a french client 😆 ,

now I back at hotel 😃.


And now, as a little sister orders her big brother, go read my update :P
SriMaatangi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Ryan :)
Rii and I updated our drabbles on our common thread. Read :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Hi Ryan :)

Rii and I updated our drabbles on our common thread. Read :)


okay tha ...will try to read it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi friends , check out my latest story
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4592374
Please tell me our views about it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: trina134

Hi friends , check out my latest story

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4592374
Please tell me our views about it.


It very nice

Was It your first write up on Lakshmila ?

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