freedom from evil. Very short story 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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On the battle field strewn with death, mandodari sat with her lap soaked with blood, gently cradling the dying Ravana.
Pativrataanaam naakasmaat
patantyashrooni bhootale
She laments.
My purpose on earth is fulfilled she heard him whisper.
Waiting for my Achyutha to free my soul.
A bright light illuminated the skies and beyond and Narayana stood silhouetted, go forth laxmana his deep voice resounded.
Listen with care from the most learned.
Laxman leaned close to Dasagriva.
In a voice so musical, from the depths of evil,
pure goodness was being extracted.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You are so gifted Jaya. I was able to visualize it.(But with Karan n Jayaram😳)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u so much @gmgi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful...hats off to you.
Would love to read a long one from you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This one is so amazing Jayashree! Hats off! 👏 It would be a delight to watch this pan out in the show, i.e., if they go for this track.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you @neira and anu.
Neira will try a longer one.
Anu they might show. Ravanv is getting loads of screen space. So his death will be covered well. Hopefully

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