LakshMila TS: Pehli Nazar *COMPLETED* - Page 4

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra

Update please

so sorry for making you wait 😭
I'll update all the 4 parts tomorrow which will be the end of this ts.
As I said I'll upload it in 3 parts so tomorrow is the last part, just finished writing it.
Tomorrow afternoon the last part will be up. 😃

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS

so sorry for making you wait 😭
I'll update all the 4 parts tomorrow which will be the end of this ts.
As I said I'll upload it in 3 parts so tomorrow is the last part, just finished writing it.
Tomorrow afternoon the last part will be up. 😃

Part 5
R: MITHILA tumne saahi kaha tha ki ve avashya kisi aache rajya se hogi aur mithila se pavitra rajya aur koi nai. Mithila gyaan ki nagri hai, stree aur purush mei koi bhed bhau nai vahan. Maine sunna hai ki veh apni putriyon ko shastro ki hi nai yudh ki bhi kala sikhai jaati hai unhe
L : sahi kaha bhaiya apne isliye toh ve humare saath bhi yudh kar bahithi parantu bhaiya abb toh aapko bhi ichaa ho rahi hogi na rajkumari sita se milne kii app dono ke vichar kitne milte haii
R : Lakshman
L : Bhaiya ashwamedh ke ashwa ko rokha thaaa
R:LAKSHMAN
( FAKE ANGER )
Lakshman laughs seeing the way his elder bro reactd
R: Milna toh hai parantu unka aabhar vyakt karne ke liye aur tumhe unse shama mangne ke liye
L: Bhaiya uski aap chinta naa kare maine kuch soch rakha hai
R: kya karne wale ho tum
L:bhaiya aapko sheegra hi pata chal jayega
// here guru vishwamitra tells all the sisters abt ram and lakshman
V: yeh dono bahaut hi aache yodha hai , kafhi mehenti hai aur yahan par logon ki seva karne avem tadka ka vadh karne aaye hai. Aasha hai ki aap sabhi unka dhyaan rakhengi.
The sisters are very happy hearing abt the warriors ^-^.
They decide to go to mandir to pray for their victory.

Part 6
All the sisters are in the mandir which is in the ashram.Ram and lakshman also come there to take blessings.
Lakshman thinks that today he will apologise to her. Sita senses that someone whom she knows is here and turns ,
Sita and ram are just looking at each other and just at that moment all the sisters turn. They are surprised as who they are but then remember that guru vishwamitra brought them here for fighting with tadka.
Mandvi:pranam mai sita didi ki choti behen mandvi
Shrutkirti: mai sita didi ki sabse choti behen shrutkirti
Urmila:sita didi ki choti behen urmila ka aapko pranam. Both ram and lakshman nod by accepting their pranam.
L: (in mind ) mujhe toh laga tha ki ek behen hi hogi parantu yaha par toh 3 hai :o (gayi bhais paani mei)
Mandvi nai ho sakti, itni lambi toh vo thi nai.
Shrutkirti bhi nai hongi kyonki sabse choti hoke ve van mai aaye sambhav nai.
Then looking at urmila it felt as if his heart identified that she is the same girl. Her eyes expresses that excitement when his brother and devi sita met.
Just then he saw that scratch on her arm and felt guilty for what he did. Now he was 100% sure about that she is the one. But how will he speak to her when everyone is around. Lagta hai koi bahana banana padega unse baat karneka par kya bolu mai .
Devi urmila kya mujhe aapki sahayat mil sakti hai , vo kya haina hume kuch cheezo ki avashyakta hai!
Urmila was confused as why was this rajkumar calling only her but ram understood what his brother was upto.

Part 7
After taking permission from sita urmila went with lakshman, after walking some distance
U: aare aap bataiye na aapko kya chahiye?
L: maafi
U: arthat?(confused)
L: ji vo...vo mai..mujhe...nahii..aapko...nahii..shamma...:"(
U: spasth khaiye rajkumar, aap yodha hoke ghabra rahe hai , yeh aapko shoba nai deta.
Lakshman was just amazed seeing her outspoken nature and confidence as never did she even ask him as where they were going.
L: ( bass lakshman bolde jo bolna ) mujhe shama kar dijiye, meri koi mansha nai thi aapko chot pohochane ki. Mujhe bhaut hi zyada krodh aagaya tha. Maaf kar dijiye mujhe.
U: (still confused) theek hai maff kia parantu aap kya keh rahe hai , hume kuch nai samajh raha, aapne kab hume chot pohochai, aapkona galat femi hui hogi.
L: aapko pata bhi nai hum kaun hai aur aapne hume maff kar bhi dia:0
U: vo aapne itna kashth uthaya na isliye, par bataiye na kaunsi baat ke liye -_
L: vo uss din van mei aap bacho ko yudh kala sikha rahi thi aur humare saath apne yudh bhi kia thaa
U: (she finally realised who he was and about which incident he was talking about)
Arthat aap hi hai vo rakshas. Samajhte kya hai aap swayam ko. Ishwar hai kya ki aapko toh sab malum hota hai .
L: suniye toh
U: aap suniye, aapke vajah se mujhe choth lagi, kitna jal raha tha hume :'(
Lakshman felt as if someone pierced something hard on his heart.
L: isliye shama mang raha hoo urmila
U: naam bhi maat lijiye aap humara aapki vajah se sab hume chida rahi thi."-" ( starts to cry)

Part 8 last part
L: sits on his knees , abh toh kijiye shaama . Hum bhaibhit ho gaye thae , yade kisi ko kuch ho jaata toh hum kya karte.
U:(his concern was genuine and somewhere she felt that this guy in front of him was just...)
Theek hai shama kia :) vaise aap aiae kafhi pyaare dikh rahe hai.
L: KYAA :O
U: ( realises what she just said) kuchh nai.
These two cuties were just looking at each other then Lakshman gave her a pretty bangle which was simple yet very elegant to urmila.
U: yeh kyu de rahe hain aap? Iski koi aava shyakta nai.
L: aavashyakta hai, humne aapke haato mei choth pohochai na toh uss choth ko toh kuch nai kar sakte magar ussi hath ke liye yeh kangan :)
Urmila was very happy with his gesture.
U : (taking the kangan )mujhe jaana hoga didi intejaar kar rahi hongi. (Dis was the feeling which she never experienced in her life)
L : punha mulakat hogi kya aapse?
U : agar niyati ne chaha toh ,
lekin iss baar yudh nai karungi :p
(Saying this she ran away leaving a smiling lakshman behind)


Was this the end of their meeting or was it a beginning of something which will change their lives about which they themselves were not aware yaa but their hearts were as they had already chosen each other for life.

THAT'S ALL FOLKS.
hope you guys enjoyed it
Love kriti :)

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Yup;)

Enjoyed it!

👍🏼

thanks 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Ankita.11

Haha😆

nice one!👏

thanks Ankita 😛 😛
- kriti

Lovely Kirti. thanks for the updates. Why did you stop it so soon? Please continue with new parts.

Originally posted by: deejagi

Lovely Kirti. thanks for the updates. Why did you stop it so soon? Please continue with new parts.

Thankk youu soo muchh 😳
But it was just a three shot and continuing this one won't be possible bcoz writing what all convo they do and showing their daily routine is not my cup of tea.
But no issues I'll be back with some new os very soon 😃
But you're name?
😊