LakshMila TS: Pehli Nazar *COMPLETED*

Hello peeps
new to india forums and my new obsession is LakshMila. Finally my boards are over so here I'm wid my first fanfic. Hope you guys like it coz its my first attempt in writing a story on any couple 😆
I need you're feedback and do let me know if there should be any changes or not.
Actually it is a two or three shot story and I have mixed hindi and English dialogues so pardon me for that.

Note: there are chances that some scenes might be repeated from serial or could be similar to other fanfics but it's a mere coincidence

INDEX
PART 1: Page 1
PART 2: Page 1
PART 3:Page 2
PART 4: Page2
Part 5: Page 5
Part 6: Page 5
Part 7: Page 6
Part8 Last part : Page6

1Okay so lakshman along with ram was in the ashram along with urmila and her sisters.
Location 1 :
Urmila along with her sisters are trying to calm down the people who were affected due to tadkas attack.
So our dear urmila is trying to play with the kids but they were so scared that they couldn't even move from their position in which they were sitting. That's when urmila said' bacho darne se kuchh nai hoga agar apne mann ke darr ko bhagana hai toh usse ladna hoga.'
The kid askd Btw how can we fight against it, what if tadka comes here and attacks us again :'(
Urmila: so let's find a way for it (pretends to think)
Urmila: yess :) I can teach you all some fighting skills so that if dat lady dragon (tadka) attacks u all can scare her away:)
Kids: you know how to fight? But you are a princess right?
U: so what if I am a princess, I am a normal human being only right? So let's get started.
Urmila teaches them some of sword techniques and all of them follow her. Just then an idea strikes her
U: okay so now I'll attack you all and you have to fight me back. Let me also see if you guys are good learners or not.
(Imagine Urmila wearing that patila kind of dress which she wore onscreen with only a pair of small earings and a simple neckpiece)
Urmila covered her face with a dupatta and started scaring them and fought with the kids. Lakshman was on a walk there to check if people were fine or not? Just then he heard some noice and was shocked to see a lady fighting with some kids .

2He went to that lady and thought that she was one of the rakshasni sent by tadka and that was actually our urmila
L:such a coward rakshasni you are! Instead of scaring the kids fight with me
Urmila was shocked with this man's behaviour and by the time she could reply lakshman had attacked her and she too defended herself in reflex action . Both of them were fighting just then urmila got a scratch on her left arm but still she did not stop and continued . the kids were amused watching them . Then one of the kid said
K1- princess you're truly an amazing fighter
K2- we are no more scared of tadka and her army
When lakshman heard this he was ashamed of himself that he should have thought before taking any kind of action. He recollectd how ram bhaiya on many occasions advised him to keep control on himself. He stopped the fight and was about to say something but urmila was is no mood to hear anything.
U: aapko mai rakshasni dikhti hoo. Bacho ki madat kar rahi thi magar aap toh sabki raksha ke badle ulta mujhe choth pohocha di
L: I am sorry . I had no intensions of hurting you.
A kid comes and says didi lets go sita didi is searching for you.
U: Yeh mulakat toh aapne jeevan mai kabhi nai bhulugi. Dhanyavaad ki aap humari rakhsha kar rahe hai parantu swayam ke krod par kabu paiye. Aagya dijiye
Urmila along with kids left Lakshman couldn't see her full face bcoz of duppata only her eyes were seen buthe felt really bad . It felt as if he hurted some who is one very near to him.

Hai. 😊

Nice Start , Pls continue the good build up to the story👏

Welcome to the forum dear.

Part 3
Well our urmila also did not see his face bcoz he had covrd it with a mask(ik it's filmy @_@)
L :(talks to himself)
L: mai nai jaanta ki kaun hai aap parantu aapse milkar laga ki kisi apne se mil raha hoon. Lagta hai punha bhavishya mei mulakat avashya hogi devi.
Here urmila wass soo angry , she narrated the whole thing to sita and sita started laughing
S: Urmila tum bhi na,parantu yeh chot
U: ussi rakshas ke wajah se laga :"(
S:aise nai kehte vae bhi humari raksha kar rahe haina. ( applies some medicines on it)
U: yaadi vo mujhe mil gaye naa toh mai naa unhe chodugi nai.
//Lakshman told ram everything
R: tumne shhama maangi usse? Kaun thi vo?
L: haan bhaiya parantu unhone kuch kaha hi nai. Pata nai bhaiye magar bache usse rajkumari pukar rahe thae. Hume laga ki vann mai kaunsi rajkumari aayegi =_=
R:mai sadaiv kehta hoo ki dhairya se kaam karo
L: bhaiyaa ( makes a puppy face) mai kya karta , veh krodhit lag rahi thi kafhi
R:chodo yaadi vae phirse mile toh mujhse kehna mai maanguga shaama
L: nai bhaiya aap kyu itna kashta karenge maine bhul ki hai toh shama mai hi manguga punha. Bhaiya bacho ko yudh kala sikha rahi thi vae , avashya kisi aache rajya se hoongi aur baache bhi bhaibhit nai thae, sab khush thae unke saath;)
Ram was surprised with his younger brother bcoz never did he spoke about a girl with so much enthusiasm.
//again on a normal day lakshman was working on some of his weapons when some kids came to him
K1: bhaiya hume yeh hatiyaar dijiyena

Part4:
K2:haan hume nai darte tadka se
K3:hum bhi yudh karenge unse.
(Lakshman identified them as they were those kids whom urmila was teaching)
[Lakshman ki dimag ki baati jaali $_$]
L: theek hai mai doonga yeh parantu yeh batao ki vo rajkumari kaun thi jisne tumhe yudh karna sikhaya?
K1: aacha vo vae toh parantu aap kyu itne utsukhta ho rahi hai? Aur apko kaise pata chala ki hume kisine yudh sikhaya?
L: kitne prashna pohochte ho tum?! Mere saath hi unhone yudh kia tha!
K2: aap thae vo O.o
K3: unhe aapne hi ne choth pohochai?
K4: kitna krodh aata hai aapko
K5: aapko aisa nai karna chahiye thaa
L: bass karo shaama mangna chahtha hoon isliye puch raha hoo ki kaun hai vo?!
K1: ohh pehle kyu nai bataya aapne
L:(murmers) kabse toh puch raha hoo
K2: aapne kuch kaha?
L: nahii nahii tum batao na
K3: ve mithila ki rajkumari hai. Unka naam hum nai jante, parantu unki badi didi sita avem behno ke saath ve aai hai.
L: ohh dhanyavaad! ^-^
(Kids leave)
Lakshman quickly goes to ram
L: bhaiyaa pata chal gaya
R: kya pata chal gaya itne kyu khush ho?
L: ve mithila ki rajkumari hai aur jaante hai kyaaa
Ve unki choti behen hai jisne ashwamedh ke ashwa ko rokha thaaa
(Ram ke mann mei ladoo foote)
L:haan kya naam tha unka sita haan ve rajkumari sita ki chotti behen hai aven sabhi behno ke saath yaha logon ka dhyaan rakh rahi hai