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POST NO. 3

SCENE : KISHKINDHA FACES LAKSHMAN'S WRATH

( Book : Ramayana : Modern retelling of the Great Epic by Ramesh Menon )




The next day, the sun shone from a cerulean sky that had not a
cloud in it. In Kishkinda, Hanuman looked up and knew it was time
Sugriva kept his word to find Sita. But the first months of his
kingship saw Sugriva mired in an orgy of indulgence. As if to
make up for his stark years of exile, the vanara left the governance
of his kingdom to his ministers, and steeped himself in wine and
women, as if to live just by them, to heal the wounds of his years
of terror by them, to forget Vali's death by them"even as if to
find immortality through pleasure.

When the sky cleared, Sugriva had forgotten all about Rama
and his promise to him. They had a month of clear weather, of days when the sun dried the sodden forest, of nights when a charmed
moon hung low in a lucid sky. Still, Sugriva made no move to keep
his word to Rama; indeed he seldom emerged from his harem.
One day, Hanuman went to see his king, who lay drunk among
his women. The son of the wind said quietly, "My lord, you have a
kingdom now and your wife back. All the pleasures of Kishkinda
and the power of its throne are yours to enjoy. But have you
forgotten the friend who gave you all these things? What about
your pledge to Rama that you would find his Sita as soon as the
monsoon passed?
"The sun has shone on us for a month. It is time you called your
vanaras to you and combed the earth for the prince's wife. He waits
patiently in his cave for your help. Don't delay any longer,
Sugriva, lest Rama's love turn to anger."


Sugriva blinked his wine-red eyes. The merriment faded on his
lips and he grew very still. For a moment, he seemed to struggle
with some inner conflict; his eyes blazed briefly at being disturbed
at his pleasure. Then his expression sobered, and he clapped his
hands for a guard to fetch Neela, his Senapati.
When Neela came, Sugriva said to him, "Send our messengers
abroad; summon my vanaras from every jungle in the world. In
fifteen days, I want them all in Kishkinda. Those who do not come
shall die. Let Angada collect our forces here in the city. Hurry,
Neela!"
Sugriva turned to Hanuman with a smile, "Thank you, my
friend, for reminding me. And now, if you allow me..."
Hanuman bowed and left the harem. Sugriva called for another
flagon of wine as he turned back to the delectable Ruma and the others.


More than a month had passed after the monsoon: a month of
aching nights, when he lay awake, and Sita's face and her tender
form drifted before his eyes like visions and stoked his despair.
One day, Rama broke down.
Lakshmana returned from his foray into the jungle, where he
had gone to hunt. He found Rama laid out at the cave mouth. His
face was tear-stained and anguished; his mind had sought relief
from its agony in unconsciousness. Lakshmana sprinkled sparkling
stream water on his brother's face, and Rama revived. He sat up, shaking his head in misery, helpless pleading in his eyes.
Lakshmana cried, "I should never have left you alone. You
must not torture yourself with memories; they only rob you of your
courage. The rains are over. Sugriva must already have sent his
people on the quest for Sita. Take heart, Rama, the way ahead is
shorter than you think. You will be with her soon."
But Rama said, "The season and the mood of the forest inflame
me with longing. There are times when I cannot help myself.
Lakshmana, she is in the hands of a devil. My heart tells me he is
no ordinary rakshasa, but a great creature of darkness. And I fear
for her life.
"Sugriva swore he would begin his search for Sita as soon as
the rains broke. Sharada has been with us for more than a month,
and there is no news from the vanara. These four months have been like a hundred years for me; but it seems Sugriva has forgotten his
promise. He is indifferent now that he has what he wanted. You say
I must be calm. But I cannot help myself any more; my body is on
fire.
"Go to Sugriva and tell him from me: The most contemptible
man is he who forgets his friends after he has used them and has no
further need for them.' Ask him if he wants to hear the sound of
my bowstring again. Remind him how I killed Vali, and of the debt
he owes me. Rouse him from his lust; wake him to my pain and my
need.
"Tell Sugriva I said, The portal through which Vali left the
world is still open. If you break your word to me, you will follow
your brother out of this life. Hurry, Sugriva, before despair
becomes my master and I come to kill you. You are still my friend; but don't mock my friendship any longer.'"
They had heard of Sugriva's long debauch from some
wandering vanaras. Lakshmana said softly, "The monkey does not
deserve his throne. I will go and kill him in his harem. Let Angada
rule Kishkinda. Vali was right: he would have helped you sooner
than his brother has cared to. Sugriva has forgotten he owes you
everything he has today."
Lakshmana strapped on his quiver. At once, Rama said, "I wish
I had not showed you my anger. You must not be hasty,
Lakshmana. Give Sugriva every chance to justify himself, before
you even think of killing him. Tell him gently that by the covenant
we made with Agni as our witness, he and I are friends for life. He
must have reason for his delay: be patient when you speak to him,
speak kindly."


Lakshmana bowed to his brother, as formally as he might have
in the sabha of Ayodhya, and strode away through the jungle
toward the secret city of the vanaras. As he went, his mind swung
between reason and anger. He must obey Rama and give Sugriva
every chance to explain himself. But if the monkey king could not
satisfy him, Lakshmana would not wait for Rama to come and kill
Sugriva; he would do it himself. Didn't the knavish creature know
Rama's plight? Had he place in his heart only for his own grief?
Such a selfish heart should be cloven with an arrow.
Lakshmana could not bear to see Rama as he had been these
past months. He couldn't bear the hunted look in his eyes, the lines
of pain that had appeared on his face. As all men do who love
another as intensely as Lakshmana did his brother, he felt Rama's
anguish as if it were his own. At times he felt it even more than Rama did: during the long nights when he sat and watched his
brother toss and turn in his sleep, and wept for him.
His bow clasped in his hand, gleaming like a sliver of a
rainbow with its jeweled inlay, Lakshmana stalked grimly toward
Kishkinda.

Kishkinda lay between two green peaks. It was cleverly concealed
in a valley, into which the only way was through a long tunnel,
high on one hillside. As Lakshmana climbed to the mouth of the
tunnel, he saw the fierce vanara guard posted outside it. Those
vanaras did not know him, and when they saw him coming, they
began to jump up and down as monkeys do when they are alarmed.
They bared their fangs and danced about, waving long arms,
snarling"frightened themselves, trying to frighten him away.
When they saw he came on, they scrambled to pick up rocks and tear up young trees with which to attack him. But his face
burning like the flames of yuganta, Lakshmana approached in quiet
fury. In his hand, and sensitive to its archer's mood, his bow
burned with its own fire. When he reached behind him to draw an
arrow from his quiver, the vanaras lost their nerve. They dropped
their rough weapons and fled.
These monkeys ran to their king's wooden palace. One cried,
"A warrior with death on his brow marches on your city, Sugriva."
Another said, "His bow was not made in this world and his
arrows shine like time."
Another whispered, "He is no ordinary man. He comes like
Yama."
But Sugriva was drunk, and he was lost in the long embraces of
Tara, his dead brother's wife, now his own favorite. Baring his fangs at them that they dared disturb him, he chattered angrily at
the guards. He chased them out of his apartments, built quaintly
half on the ground and half along the trunk and branches of an
immense tree. But the king's ministers had gathered outside his
palace. Terror-stricken, they called for Angada, and he quickly
summoned his army to the several entrances to the city hidden in
the mountain.
Lakshmana saw the vanara army marching out through the city
gates. His eyes turned crimson and his hands shook on his bow. At
the head of his legion, Angada came out to meet Lakshmana. The
young vanara stood bravely before the kshatriya. But not a word
came from him, because his tongue stuck to the roof of his mouth
and his body trembled at the awesome power that Lakshmana
exuded.

But the human prince said gently to Angada, "Go and tell your
uncle that Lakshmana has come to his gates. Ask him why he has
not kept his word to my brother. If he has a shred of dharma, he
should not break his solemn pledge. Give him my message and tell
me what he says."
Though the prince spoke gently, Angada sensed Lakshmana's
mood and the menace of him. He turned and ran back to Sugriva,
who was at his endless pleasure while death had come to his gates.
Angada burst in on the king, his uncle, who was making love with
the prince's mother Tara.
Angada turned his gaze away and cried, "Lakshmana is at our
gates!"
But Sugriva was so drunk he could hardly open his eyes. By
now, all the monkeys of Kishkinda were shouting outside the king's palace. Sugriva heard the noise through his stupor and it
roused him.
Sugriva's ministers ran in to him in panic. Their king rose
unsteadily. He asked for water, with which he splashed his arms
and face. The water stung him; he squealed at its coldness and
shook his fur. At last, the vanara king was more or less awake. He
stood swaying slightly before his nephew and his ministers. But
now his eyes were wide open, and he asked in a clear voice, "What
is all the fuss about?"
Hanuman said, "Rama and Lakshmana are princes of dharma.
You swore friendship with them and they helped you recover your
kingdom. Lakshmana stands at your gates with his bow in his hand,
and our army is terrified because the unearthly thing shines so
brightly. The prince's eyes burn in wrath, Sugriva. Tell him you mean to keep your word to Rama, or we are all dead."
Suddenly Sugriva grasped the peril he was in. He gave a moan
and cried, "I have done nothing to offend the princes of Ayodhya.
Why does Lakshmana come here with anger in his eyes? Some
enemy of mine has poisoned his mind against me. Not that I am
afraid of him; I am not afraid of him or of Rama. But it pains me
that our friendship is at risk. Oh, the mind is fickle, and the
smallest slip is enough to kill sacred friendship. And you all know
I owe Rama everything I have today."
Hanuman said, "You must reassure Lakshmana that you have
not forgotten your debt of gratitude. Rama is not really angry, only
anxious. But you have lost track of the seasons. The monsoon is
over, when skies were dark and rivers turbid; it has been tranquil
Sharada for more than a month. While you have been happy at love and wine, Rama has pined for his wife. He counts not the seasons
and months, but each moment of his life that passes without Sita;
and every one is like a wretched year to him.
"He has sent Lakshmana to you in anguish. Don't be offended
if the messenger's words are harsh; he has cause to be aggrieved.
You say you are not afraid of Rama. But if he strings his bow, the
three worlds cringe, because he can extinguish them with his
arrows. He loves you, Sugriva; keep that love. Rama is more than
you or I can imagine.
"Forgive me if I speak too plainly, but it is my dharma to save
you from folly."
Sugriva stood staring thoughtfully at his quiet minister. Slowly,
the wine-sodden fog lifted from his mind. The vanara king bowed
solemnly to Hanuman, to acknowledge his wisdom. Sugriva sent his doorkeepers to escort Lakshmana through the king's own
underground passage.
Like the sun entering a rain cloud, Lakshmana came into
Sugriva's palace. Along carved wooden terraces, curling corridors,
and polished halls, he was led through the labyrinthine edifice. He
paused at the threshold of the antapura. He heard exquisite music
within, and saw the beautiful women of the vanara's harem. The
tinkling of their silver anklets, the warm, breathy whispering of
their voices, the fragrance of their delicate bodies invaded him like
a seductive army.
Growing confused, he pulled violently on his bowstring and
Kishkinda shook to its foundations.

Sugriva turned pale when he heard the thunder of Lakshmana's
bowstring. For all his boasting, he dared not face the angry prince.
Terror gripped the vanara king and his fur stood on end. He turned
to the lovely Tara and said, "My queen, this kshatriya's real nature
is gentle, and he is as easily calmed as he is roused. Go to him,
Tara; he will never show his anger to a woman. Pacify him, then
bring him here and I will speak to him."
Lakshmana waited alone in a corner, away from the eyes of the
women of the harem. When the lovely Tara came to him in the wooden hall where he stood, she sensed his tenseness and his fury.
Hesitantly she came, her long eyes cast down and only half open
from all the wine she had drunk with Sugriva. Her slender body
quivered with fear, like a lotus in a breeze. Yet she came with great
poise, and was entirely queenly. Lakshmana knew who she was, but
not why she had come. Thinking, even, that she had been sent to
seduce him, he turned his back on her and stood glaring out a
window. But Tara came softly up to him.
She said, "Be welcome to Kishkinda, O Kshatriya. But, great
Lakshmana, you come in anger. Tell me, what is the cause of your
rage, at which our city trembles? Who has been foolish enough to
light a fire in a forest of dry trees?"
She touched him swift and deep. What man could ignore Tara's
beautiful voice or her utterly feminine presence? This was not the kind of battle Lakshmana relished. With an effort, he steadied
himself and quietened the disconcerting tumult in his body.
He said to her, decorously, "My lady, your husband has sent
you to placate me. But don't be blind to what he has done. Once he
became king, he has forgotten my brother Rama, who restored his
kingdom to him. Wine and women are all he remembers, and
dharma is far from his mind. These months that Sugriva has spent
indulging himself, Rama has languished in the forest, with grief
driving him to the edge of madness. Is this the friendship that
Sugriva swore, with Agni as his witness? He has betrayed us, and
an ingrate comes to a bad end."
Lakshmana spoke quietly. But there was truth in his words and
his eyes still smoldered dangerously. Tara did not reply at once;
she considered what to say. Her task was a delicate and grave one, and she knew it.
At last she said, "Kshatriya, even great rishis fall prey to the
temptations of Kama. What, then, of a fickle monkey whose nature
you well know? After years of being denied in the wilderness,
Sugriva could hardly help indulging himself. He fell so avidly to
pleasure that he left even the governance of the kingdom to his
ministers.
"But, noble Lakshmana, Sugriva had no desire to hurt Rama or
you. It isn't that he does not value your friendship; he was merely
lost in a sensuous dream. You have woken him from his stupor;
now let Rama, who is tolerance embodied, forgive him."
Lakshmana looked at this bewitching queen, and thought, who
could refuse her anything she wanted? But he also made no
immediate reply, only gazed evenly at her. Tara said, "I think you should also know, my lord, that Sugriva
has already ordered his vanaras to come to Kishkinda. He means to
send them forth in every direction on the quest for Sita. He did this
even before you came here. Hundreds of thousands of monkeys
from all over the world already fly to us at their king's command."
She saw Lakshmana give a start at this news she had subtly
kept for the last. She saw his eyes soften and knew her little battle
was won: she had saved Kishkinda and its king from immediate
danger. Tara said, "Come with me to the antapura. I can see you
are pure and strong, and will not be tainted by its sights. Sugriva is
waiting for you."
She walked before him through winding, climbing, simian
corridors, along knotted branches of the ancestral tree into which
the complex palace was built; and they came to the antapura, Sugriva's harem. Inside, the vanara king sat upon a couch of gaudy
brocade. He wore fine ornaments. He sat among his women, with
his arms around the delectable Ruma. Lakshmana's fury sparked
alive again, and Tara sighed to herself at how indiscreet her lord
was.
Sugriva sprang up when he saw Lakshmana. The kshatriya's
eyes sparked with anger. But the ways of monkeys and men are a
world apart, and little could Sugriva understand that seeing him
with Ruma could infuriate the human as it did. He came forward
guilelessly to greet the fair prince, shambling up to him, his long
arms trailing the floor. He folded his hands solemnly to
Lakshmana, and stood silent, his moist brown eyes gazing at the
warrior's face.
Between his teeth, Lakshmana said, "A compassionate king, who is concerned about the suffering of others, gains fame for
himself in the world. A truthful king, who remembers favors he has
received and is grateful for them, deserves his renown. But a king
who strays from dharma, who forgets his solemn oath sworn to his
friend: there is no one worse than him. There is redemption from
every sin in this world, prayaschitta for even the murder of a
brahmana. But where is the salvation for an ungrateful man?
"Sugriva, you lied to us when you swore you would help find
Sita. Rama kept his word to you; for your sake, he took Vali's life.
But when you had what you wanted, you ignored Rama's need. The
gates through which Vali went are not shut. If you don't honor your
oath sworn before Agni, Rama's arrows will send you after your
brother. Rama bids me tell you there is still time for you to relent.
But hurry, Sugriva; before both your time and his mercy run out."Lakshmana spoke fiercely. It seemed the calmness that Tara
had brought to his spirit was shaken at the sight of Sugriva at his
dalliance, while Rama was waiting in anguish for the vanara to find
Sita. Tara wanted Sugriva to be quiet, lest, in his inebriated
anxiety, he say the wrong thing.
She said quickly, "You leap to the wrong conclusions, my
prince. Sugriva is not a liar, nor has he forgotten his oath. Sugriva
loves Rama. For Rama this vanara will sacrifice everything, even
his kingdom. Why, he would gladly abandon Ruma and me, for
Rama's sake. Even in my bed, my husband speaks of Rama. I have
told you, mighty Lakshmana, Sugriva has already called his legion
vanaras to him, to send them to the corners of the earth to seek Sita
out. Shed your anger, good Kshatriya. The vanaras will discover
Sita swiftly, wherever she may be hidden."As Tara spoke of Sugriva's devotion to Rama, the
transformation that came over Lakshmana was quite marvelous.
His body grew calm and a smile lit his handsome face like the sun
breaking through dark clouds. Sugriva breathed a sigh of relief; his
drunkenness had left him. He took Lakshmana gingerly by his hand
and led him into his apartment.
He sat him down on a couch and, crooning in affection, said,
"How can you ever think I would forget Rama, when I owe him
everything I have today? Nothing can repay my debt to your
brother. I may be just a vanara, but I am not such an ingrate. Not
that a kshatriya who can shoot one arrow through seven sala trees
needs my help. But for what it is worth, all my resources are
Rama's to use. Why, my very life belongs to him.
"And when he sets out to kill the rakshasa who took Sita, I will follow him with my army. I will follow Rama anywhere: let him
forgive me just this once." Wringing his hands, he stood before
Lakshmana.
The vapors of anger had risen away from that prince's mind. He
said slowly, "With you at his side, loving Sugriva, Rama will
surely vanquish his enemy. But now come with me to Prasravana.
Rama needs to see you to restore his faith. As for me, I spoke
harshly only because I have watched my brother's anguish these
five months and found it hard to bear. Sugriva, forgive me for what
I said impetuously."
There was genuine sorrow in the vanara's eyes as he heard
about Rama. He turned to Hanuman: "My monkeys from Vindhya
and Himavan, Mahendra and Kailasa, march on Kishkinda even
now. Send word to them to make haste. Fifteen days was the limit I set. Five have already passed. Rama is in pain; my people must be
here in ten days."
Before he had finished speaking, they heard an alarm in the
streets below them, and the noise came toward the palace. Through
the window, Sugriva saw that his colorful people had begun to
arrive from far-flung parts of the earth. They came to his door with
gifts for their king, and he welcomed them graciously.
When he had seen to the comfort of those first troops, Sugriva
called for his palanquin. He climbed into it with Lakshmana and
they set out for Prasravana.

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nice read bhai😃
great going😃
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Awesome awesome collection Shivam👍🏼
What an amazing character our Lakshman is .

Waiting for Karan to portray these situations...he will do complete justice.

Keep them coming bhai
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@sumana , swati , priya , manas
Thanks a lot for liking the content.

Will post more shortly.
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POST NO. 4

Book : Ramayana stories in Modern South India

Scene : Lakshman's uncontrolled Laughter upon return from exile



It was a moonlit night.
The king of Kosala, the great ruler of the entire world,
was holding court out in the open.
Thousands of seats were set up so all the people could sit.
Vibhishana arrived with a bunch of betel leaves and offered them to
King Rama.
Rama gave betel leaves to the Brahmins that came.
The monkey army sat to the left of Rama, the warrior who killed Vali.
Rama gave Vibhishana lots of gifts, clothing, and jewels.
There were tributes of chariots, horses, and gold
and Rama viewed all seven million of them.
Sugriva sat near Rama's feet serving his lord, who was stronger than
a lion.
While the court was in full session, Rama's brother, the mighty
Lakshmana, felt sleepy.
His words were faltering and his head was heavy.
He tried to stay awake but he began to doze.
He stood up straight in his brother's court, shook his head and started
to laugh.
Right in the middle of Rama's court, Lakshmana laughed, laughed
aloud.
He laughed and laughed, and the king was upset.
Something seemed to worry them all and the court suddenly fell silent.
Shiva thought that Lakshmana was laughing at him.
Everyone knew he fell for a fisher girl
and carries her on his head even now.
Jambuvan thought that Lakshmana was laughing at him.
Once, when he was invited to Shiva's wedding
he broke his back walking with his short calves.
He felt ashamed and hung his head low.
Adisesha thought Lakshmana was laughing at him.
He had served as the bed of Vishnu all these years
but now he was serving Vishnu's rival, Shiva.
He felt ashamed and bent his head low.
Nila never told anyone why his rocks fl oat on the ocean.
As a child he sank things in the water, so his father cursed that
everything would float.
Lakshmana surely was laughing at him.
And Angada was sure he was being laughed at.
He was shamelessly enjoying himself
at the victory feast given by his father's killer.
Now Sugriva has something to be ashamed of, too.
He killed his brother and took his brother's wife.
No doubt Lakshmana was laughing at him, and he hung his head in
shame.
Vibhishana thought that Lakshmana laughed at him.
He was the one who revealed the secret of his brother Ravana's power
to Rama.
So he caused Ravana's death, and now he rules Ravana's kingdom.
Hanuman thought of his own defeat
at the hands of a young fellow, Indrajit.
He was sure that was why Lakshmana was laughing and bent his head
in shame.
Bharata and Shatrughna knew too well
that their mother grabbed all the land in the kingdom
by throwing Rama into the dark forest.
Lakshmana must be laughing at them for this, so they bent their heads
in shame.
Sita thought that Lakshmana was laughing at her:
How could Rama put her on his thighs?
She lived in Ravana's house for six entire months

and she spoke so many harsh words about Lakshmana.
Lakshmana must think that women cannot be trusted.
So, Sita felt ashamed and hung her head.
Seeing his wife, Rama felt sad.
Rama has been ruling the monkeys for some time now.
Why is everyone sad today?
He was furious with Lakshmana for laughing in court,
And raised his sword to chop off his head.
But Shiva and the women stopped him.
They protested, "Lakshmana is a little boy
so it is not right to strike him down.
A hero like Rama should not act in haste."
Then Rama asked Lakshmana why he laughed.
"You are a kind man," said Lakshmana.
"You are giver of wishes and king of kings.
Listen, lord, to what I have to say."
"When we were in the forest and I was keeping guard outside your hut, Sleep
came to me. I asked her who she was and she said, I am Goddess Sleep. I rule
the world. All people obey me, even the kings of heaven and the elephants that
bear the earth. I move across oceans, and rivers, and move around mountains
and trees. Surrender to me,' she said, you cannot resist me.'
I walked around her three times, fell at her feet, bowed and begged, I am
standing guard over my brother and his wife. Go to Ayodhya, where my wife
lives. She is lonely, away from me. Hold her, day and night, and leave me alone.
One day, my brother will return to the city in full glory and hold court while his
armies and ministers serve him and you can visit me then.'
She left me alone all these years and returned now" not one minute late, and
that's what amused me, and I laughed."
Rama cried out in grief, thinking of his hasty action and wanted to kill himself
to atone for his sin. Vasisththa intervened, saying, "It is not right for you
to have such thoughts. Instead, make Lakshmana a bed on which to sleep and
then massage his feet."
Rama called all his attendants to sweep the streets, make floor designs
of pearls,
light lamps of gems, festoon gateways, light lamps on pillars,
set out golden pots, and fetch bunches of jasmine.
They made a bed in the seven storied house,
and put a sheet of golden hues on the bed.

They brought fresh chrysanthemums and abhyanga flowers,
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought thick jasmines that blossoms after dark,
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought parijatas right from the vine
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought kanakaratnas freshly opened
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought heaps of water lilies
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought loads of mogali fl owers
and spread them gently over the bed.
They brought jaji fl owers that opened afresh
and spread them gently over the bed.
They made pillows of mogali petals.
The beauty of the bed was beyond words.
God gave only two eyes to see,
but you need a thousand to take in this sight.
Angada, Hanuman, and Sugriva came;
hand in hand, they came at once.
Lakshmana walked around Rama thrice
and fell at his feet, asking for permission to leave.
They lifted Lakshmana from Rama's feet.
Rama said, "Sleep my brother you are so tired."
Lakshmana bowed to Sita's feet.
Now they put him on the royal elephant.
Musicians followed and singers praised him.
Lakshmana entered the royal gate.
Lakshmana's wife [Urmila] was waiting there.
She had washed her hair and put on a yellow sari.
She wore a necklace worth a thousand and a pendant worth ten
thousand.
She wore her favorite earrings and jewels studded with precious
stones.
She walked to the bed with loving glances
and her sari slipped down from her shoulder.
Seeing her mood, Lakshmana said, "woman, this is not the time for you
to come."
When Urmila left, Lakshmana slept.
He slept for an hour and it felt like several.
He slept several hours and it felt like a day.
Rama was surprised at his brother's slumber.
He sent Hanuman to see what was happening.
Was he sleeping, chatting with his wife, or maybe, playing water games
with her?
Hanuman took a peek inside and said that no woman was there.
Since there was no woman there, Rama felt eager to see him.
He asked his ministers to stay, and entered there with Shatrughna.
He went in and began to massage his brother's feet.
He took Lakshmana's feet on his lap and began to massage them gently.
Lakshmana was quiet when Rama massaged him once.
When Rama massaged him a second time, he thought he was
dreaming.
When Rama massaged him a third time, Lakshamana was frightened.
He opened his eyes, stood up, and fell at Rama's feet.
"Brother, you are older, and I should massage your feet.
Your feet gave life to Ahalya,
Your feet adorn Bali's head.
All the gods bow at your feet.
Lord of the World, you should not massage my feet."
Rama raised Lakshmana and made him sit on the golden throne.
"Brother," he said,
"My court without you is like a night without the moon.
My court without you is like a house without lamps.
My court without you is like a wife with no husband.
My court without you is like a pot with no water in it.
My court without you is like a cage without a bird in it.
Come to my court, my little brother."
The king and his brother entered the court.
Rama asked him to sit on the seat of pearls,
and he himself sat on the throne of jewels.
To those who sing this song or hear it" God will give them the highest world's
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Oh god!it frightened me at first 😆
Anyways keep updating!
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Waiting for more bro😃
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Originally posted by: Priya.

Shivam

Waiting for more bro😃


Sure Dear , You will get a lot more

A couple of posts may be repeated in future , the ones which i already posted on the AT.
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POST NO. 5

Book : Scion Of Ikshvaku

Scenes : Urmila's description
The marriage
The Separation



Urmila's description

Lakshman instinctively looked up to see Urmila, even as Ram stood up to receive the
prime minister of Mithila. The two women climbed down swiftly but Lakshman
remained rooted, entranced by the vision above. Urmila was shorter than her elder sister
Sita, much shorter. She was also fairer; so fair that she was almost the colour of milk.
She probably remained indoors most of the time, keeping away from the sun. Her round,
baby face was dominated by her large eyes, which betrayed a sweet, childlike
innocence. Unlike her warrior-like elder sister, Urmila was clearly a very delicate
creature, aware of her beauty, yet childlike in her ways. Her hair was arranged in a bun
with every strand neatly in place. The kaajal in her eyes accentuated their exquisiteness;
the lips were enhanced with some beet extract. Her clothes were fashionable, yet
demure: a bright pink blouse was complemented by a deep red dhoti which was longer
than usual " it reached below her knees. A neatly pressed angvastram hung from her
shoulders. Anklets and toe-rings drew attention to her lovely feet, while rings and
bracelets decorated her delicate hands. Lakshman was mesmerised. The lady sensed it,
smiled genially, and looked away with shy confusion.


The marriage

The wedding was a simple set of solemn rituals, observed in the afternoon of the day
that Ram won the swayamvar.
To Ram's surprise, Sita had suggested that Lakshman and Urmila get married in the same auspicious hour of the day.

To Ram's further disbelief, Lakshman had enthusiastically agreed.🤣

Sita cast an eye over her husband as he rode beside her.
Lakshman and Urmila rode
behind them. Lakshman was talking non-stop with his wife as she gazed at him earnestly.
Urmila's thumb kept playing with the massive diamond ring on her left forefinger; an
expensive gift from her husband.


The Separation

Lakshman had just entered Ram and Sita's sitting room. He wore the same attire that
his elder brother and sister-in-law did: one of a forest hermit.
Lakshman dared Sita with determination blazing in his eyes. I'm coming, Bhabhi.'
Lakshman...' pleaded Ram.
You will not survive without me, bro,' said Lakshman. I'm not letting you go
without me.'
Ram laughed. It's touching to see the faith my family has in me. No one seems to trust
me to be able to keep myself alive.'
Lakshman laughed too, but turned serious in a flash. You're free to laugh or cry about
it, brother. But I am coming with you.'
An excited Urmila greeted Lakshman as he entered his private chamber. She was
dressed in simple, yet fashionable attire. Her dhoti and blouse were dyed in the common
colour brown, but an elegant gold border ran along its edges. She wore simple, modest
gold jewellery, unlike what she normally favoured.
Come, my darling,' said Urmila, smiling with childlike enthusiasm. You must see
this. I have single-handedly supervised the packing and most of it is done already.'
Packing?' asked a surprised Lakshman, with a fond smile.
Yes,' said Urmila, taking his hand and pulling him into the wardrobe room. Two
massive trunks made of teak were placed in the centre. Urmila quickly opened both.
This one has my clothes and that one has yours.'
Lakshman stood nonplussed, not knowing how to react to his innocent Urmila.
She pulled him into their bed chamber, where lay another trunk, packed and ready. It
was full of utensils. A small container in one corner caught her attention. Urmila opened
it to reveal small packets of spices. See, the way I understand it, we should be able to
get meat and vegetables easily in the jungle. But spices and utensils will be difficult.
So...'
Lakshman stared at her, bemused and a trifle dismayed.
Urmila moved towards him and embraced her husband, smiling fondly. I will cook the
most divine meals for you. And for Sita Didi and Ram Jijaji also, of course. We will
return fat and healthy from our fourteen-year holiday!'
Lakshman returned his wife's embrace gently; her head reached his muscular barrelchest.
Holiday?
He looked down at his excited wife, who was obviously trying very hard to make the
best of what was a bewildering situation for her. She has been a princess all her life.
She assumed that she would be living in an even more luxurious palace in Ayodhya.
She is not a bad soul. She just wants to be a good wife. But is it right of me, her
husband, to agree to her following me into the jungle, even if she wants to do so? Isn't
it my duty to protect her, just like it is my duty to protect my Ram Dada?
She will not last a day in the jungle. She won't.
A heavy weight settled on Lakshman's heart as it became obvious what he had to do.
But he knew he must do so gently so it would not break his Urmila's tender heart.
Keeping one arm around her, he raised her chin with his other hand. Urmila gazed at
him lovingly with her childlike innocence. He spoke tenderly, I'm worried, Urmila.'
Don't be. We'll handle it together. The forest will be...'
It's not about the forest. I'm worried about what will happen here, in the palace.'
Urmila arched her spine and threw her head back so she could get a better look at her
extremely tall husband. In the palace?'
Yes! Father's not keeping too well. Chhoti Maa Kaikeyi will be controlling
everything now. And, frankly, I don't think Bharat Dada can stand up to her. My mother
will at least have Shatrughan to look after her. But who will look after Badi Maa
Kaushalya? What will happen to her?'
Urmila nodded. True...'
And if Chhoti Maa Kaikeyi can do this to Ram Dada, can you imagine what she will
do to Badi Maa?'
Urmila's open face was guileless.
Someone has to protect Badi Maa,' Lakshman repeated, as if to drive home his point.
Yes, that's true, but there are so many people in the palace. Hasn't Ram Dada made
any arrangements?' asked Urmila.
Lakshman smiled sadly. Ram Dada is not the most practical of men. He thinks
everyone in the world is as ethical as he is. Why do you think I'm going with him? I need
to protect him.'
Urmila's face fell as she finally understood what Lakshman was trying to say. I'm not
living here without you, Lakshman.'
He pulled his wife close. It will be for a short time, Urmila.'
Fourteen years? No, I'm not...' Urmila burst into helpless tears as she hugged him
tight.
Lakshman eased his hold as he gently raised her chin again. He wiped away her tears.
You are a Raghuvanshi now. We hold duty above love; we uphold honour, even at the
cost of happiness. This is not a matter of choice, Urmila.'
Don't do this, Lakshman. Please. I love you. Don't leave me.'
I love you too, Urmila. And I cannot force you to do anything you don't want to do. I
am only requesting you. But before you give me your answer, I want you to think of
Kaushalya Maa. Think of the love she has showered upon you over the last few days.
Didn't you tell me that after a long time, you felt as if you had a mother again, in
Kaushalya Maa? Doesn't she deserve something in return?'
Urmila burst out crying and embraced Lakshman tightly again.
A cool evening breeze blew through the palace at the fifth hour of the third prahar, as
Sita walked towards Lakshman and Urmila's private chambers. The guards immediately
stood at attention. As they turned to announce her, they were halted by a pensive
Lakshman emerging from the chambers. Sita felt a lump in her throat as she looked at his
face.
I'll sort this out,' said Sita sternly, as she attempted to walk past him and enter her
sister's chambers.
Lakshman stopped her, holding her hand with a pleading expression in his eyes. No,
Bhabhi.'
Sita looked at her giant brother-in-law, who suddenly seemed so vulnerable and alone.
Lakshman, my sister listens to me. Trust me"'
No, Bhabhi,' interrupted Lakshman, shaking his head. Forest life will not be easy.
We will face death every day. You know that. You are tough, you can survive. But she
is...' Tears welled up in his eyes. She wanted to come, Bhabhi, but I don't think she
should. I convinced her not to... This is for the best.'
Lakshman...'
This is for the best, Bhabhi,' repeated Lakshman, almost as though he was convincing
himself. This is for the best.'
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