OS- Lakshmila- Saat Phere - Page 2

Amazing Os !!!!

Yes Kayal when I wrote the OS also I had them in mind.

Oh God how beautiful is it...

I am at loss of words to describe this...Brilliant.

this was gr8 shruti di...😳
really heart warming
ah their respective povs...😳
specially those las few lines...frm urmi's pov...😳
loved it...😃


love shruti...😃

''Lakshman didn't know what to feel. The teeki mirchi he was teasing was going to be his wife. The one he never thought would get along with him, he knew she was his soul mate in her own way. Yes she had the teekapan, but then she hided her mithapan perfectly with that teekapan, sweetness visible only to those she allowed.''

Thank you guys. Actually Karan and Yukti are giving me more reason to write on Lakshmila. They are so awesome together.

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Anushka how many demands. Let me get a handle on other pairs. I will write. Siya-Ram to be frank very difficult yaar. What to do. I have tried, but somehow cant bring their sublime feelings in words, because they are at a different level al together.

Lakshmila fighting. When I was writing nostalgic I was getting demands write romantic. Jab romantic likha now fighting😆😆. Will try 😆😆

Sorry Di par aap likhoghege itna achha toh phir demands bhi badegi
Uss main mera kya kasor
Iss innocent si bachhi ki ankhe twinkle karti hain jab aap likhti ho
But seriously take u r time
I am not saying to write just now as we all have our daily chores also to do na
Even I am busy with my studies
😆😆No that's not the case write what u want to, I was talking about onscreen they should show some fighting scenes even after their marriage 😉but in your writing u can write on your own will after all that is what os means
Anyways Thank u for writing this😊

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka
😆

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Anushka how many demands. Let me get a handle on other pairs. I will write. Siya-Ram to be frank very difficult yaar. What to do. I have tried, but somehow cant bring their sublime feelings in words, because they are at a different level al together.

Lakshmila fighting. When I was writing nostalgic I was getting demands write romantic. Jab romantic likha now fighting😆😆. Will try 😆😆

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Thank you guys. Actually Karan and Yukti are giving me more reason to write on Lakshmila. They are so awesome together.