SKR SS: Newly Married! ~|| Chapter 10 : page 20 ||~ - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
beautiful romantic sweet os
loved it
Lakshmila lolll they r super cute n SiRa is too adorable...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Uff uff uff siyaram luv them
Chumeshwari yrrr 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Laxmila cute
Sira divine.

Awesome update. I would request you to give recap in the starting. As u know we read so many stories so I feel recap immediately take us to story land.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
FANTASTIC UPDATE...😳😊👏
Loving ur story...😊😊
if u don't mind then plzzz PM me d next update...
And keep going...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Do continue.. I am addicted to this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
awesome update. loved lakshman urmila's cute fight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Your writeups are amazing , I eagerly await eeryday for the updates
Totally addicted !!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
I have read every chapter of the story...liked all the build up and how the story has unfolded till now..pls keep writing and updating.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 7:




Bh: Lakshman...Urmila na theek kaha...tum jaane do...

L: bharat bhaiyya!!!!

Ur: ( proudly) dekha!!!!!

With the commotion. ...Sita woke up...slowly realising her surrounding she looked down to see Ram's well built figure clinging on to her petite frame...his head buried in her chest...


She suddenly looked up to find all her devars and sisters looking down at them...

She tightened her grip around her him trying to steady herself. ...


L: bhaabhi...aap dono...yaha isprakar kaise pohonche?

Sita smiled and whispered carefully not to disturb Ram's sleep...

S: ji...ji...v..vo...hum bas ... ghoomne aaye the aur na jaane kab nidra aagayi...

Shr: ( naughty) haan haan...aap suryoday se poorn andhakar mein ghoomne aayi thi...

Sita bit her tongue...getting caught. ...

S: Shrutkirti!
She said a bit sternly...

Shr: ( whining) didiii!!!

S: shhh!!
She indicated at the sleeping Ram who snuggled closer to her chest as sunlight fell on his face...


For a moment she lost in him and caressed his silky hair softly...

The others smiled at this...

In the meanwhile Ram too woke up and felt himself something extremely soft...Sita shuddered as she felt his arms trail upwards...resting on her back. ...covered with. her silken long tresses...


Ram slowly rose up from her cgest and looked at her...giving her one of the loving smiles reserved only for her...


Removing her dupatta off him he gently put it across her chest and shoulders. ...


R: chalein...Sita?
He asked gently to which she nodded...She always wondered how her husband always managed to respect her so much...he never ordered her to do anything as a husband could do to his wife...never desired her body nor did he ever show his rights in a wronh way on her...


He always treated her like a doll...his dear doll...always soft and sweet to her...bo matter what...always asked her her opinion. ...she couldn't ask for a better life partner for herself. ...



*****


Now that they were in the rath...on her insistence that the palki bearers needed rest having carried them for almost a day and a half...he marvelled at her yet again...thinking how he got so lucky to get this selfless beauty as his wife...


She came out of her thoughts as she felt her hand slip into his...
Taking her hand into his...placing it on his lap...he asked...

R: priye...aap chintit kyu hai? koi samasya hai? aap mujhe nisankoch bata sakti hai...main aapki sahayta ka vachan deta hoon...


She smiled at him and that is when he realised that her beautiful doe eyes were brimming with tears...and suddenly one trickled down her cheek...


Her innerself blushed hearing him call her his priye...

A tear rolled off her cheek and he instantly caught it in his palm...
R: aap inka mulya jaanti hai? yeh amulya hai...inn ashruo ko isprakaar pravaahit n kijiye ...main nahi jaanta ki aapke liye inka kya mahatva hai parantu mere liye yeh apne praano se adhik mulyavaan hai...


She closed her eyes as she felt her face cradle in his palms and his thumbs move upwards...wiping every tear of hers...


R: maine aapke pitaji v mata ko vachan diya tha ki main aapke inn sundar netro mein ek bhi ashru nahi aane dunga...parantu aaj innmrin ek nahi..anginat ashru hai...


S: shyama kijiye mujhe swaami...parantu n jaane aaj inhe rok na saki...main apni ma se ek din bhi door nahi rahi...bas thodi bhaavuk hogayi thi...


R: shyama mat mangiye aap...iss ek baat ke karan mein mahilao ko shresth maanta aaya hoon...mere liye apni kisi bhi mata ke bina rehpaana narkvaas ke samaan hai...parantu mahilaye toh apne samuchay jeevan ke liye iss peedi ko sehti hai...main iss shakyi ke liye aapko naman karta hoon...

He said joining his hands only to be immediately held by Sita...

R: ab asp mujhe ek vachan dijiye...ki aap inn amulya ashruo ko iss prakar pravahit nahi karengi...


Sita smiled and shook her head willingly...
R: aur main aapko vachan deta hoon...jab bhi aapki apne mata pita se bhet karne ki ichcha ho main swayam aapko Mithila le jaaunga...


She smiled gratefully. ...falling short of words to describe this great man...her man...


With that she wrapped her arms around him...burying her face in his chest... trying to feel his love in the form of his warmth...

His arms too instinctively wrapped around her petite frame as his fingers slipped beneath her veil...

He too closed his eyes loving the feel of having her in his arms always...something that made him feel possesive about her...


L: bhaiyya-bhaabhi!...uh...shyama kijiye...

He turned away embarrassingly seeing them hug...why does he always come at the wrong time...


R: ruko...lakshman...
Sita was so lost in his arms that she didn't realise Lakshman's presence...



L: bhaiyya hum Ayodhya mein padhaar chuke hai...chaliye...
He managed to say...still witnessing his bhaabhi in his bhaiyya's embrace...



R: tum chalo...hum aate hai...
Ram gently bought his hands on her shoulder and broke the hug...

R: hum Ayodhya pohonch chuke hai Sita...chaliye...

Sita just smiled and he held het hand and the two walked towards the palace with the others...

L: bhaiyya...bhaabhi ko kya hua? ve theek toh haina?
He asked worriedly noticing Sita's puffy eyes. ...

R: ( smiled seeing his concern) kuch nahi...thodi bhaavuk hogayi thi...use apne mata pita ka smaran ho aaya tha...


After a warm welcome from all the mothers everyone had finally settled down...



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S: pranam mata...aapne mujhe bulaya?
Sita asked Kaushalya...

K: haan...aao putri humare saath baitho...

Sita smiled and sat diwn beside her as Kaushalya asked the dress dealer to show her his items as well...

Seeing Ram passing through there she called him as well...
R: ji ma..
Ram answered...

K: aso putra...kabse tumhsre saath baithkar...tumhare sang samay vyateet karna chahti thi...aajkal mere Ram ke paas apni ma ke liye ssmay nahi...

R: Ma...
Ram said side hugging his mother...
R: aisa kadapi nahi hai...ab aapka putra keval aapke saath rahega. ...

K: hmmm...Sita...putri tum apne liye vastro ka chayan karo... tumhe jo priya ho use le lena...
Sita nodded obidiently...and started going theough the hundreds of embroidered lehengas and sarees...


Ram was helping Kaushalya select something for herself when his eyes caught Sita admiring a beautiful orange dress...

Ram slightly shook his head looking at her...realising he didn't like it she kept it...Soon he had rejected a couple of dresses more...

Finally. ...Sita bought a beautiful Royal blue and gold ensemble... which was heavily embroided with gold and studded with precious stones yet elegant...she draped it over her shoulder and looked at Ram...


She found him give her smile stating it was perfect and she bought the same one...

Next came jewellery. ...
Sita was looking at very simple sets...when Kaikeyi noticed this...


Kk: Sita...putri tum itne saamanya haar kyu dekh rahi ho...tum Ayodhya ki kulvadhu ho...Ayodhya ki bhaavi Maharani ho...

Manthara twitched her nose and replied...
Man: chodo na Kaikeyi...bechaari ko kaha inn sab ki aadat hogi...inn saare haaro ki kimat mein toh Maharaj sampoorn Videh le le...ise kaha itne aishvary v itni mehengi vastuo ki aadat hogi...aadat chodo usne dekhe bhi...

Kk: Manthara!
Kaikeyi thundered...

Kk: tumhe aabhaas hai tum kiski baat kar rahi ho...mere Ram ki patni hai Sita...yadi uske virudh ek shabd bhi kaha toh...tum...tum...niklo yaha se...

Man: Kaikeyi...

Kk: niklo...

Lakshman's eyes grew red with anger as he saw his beloved bhaabhi lower her eyes...as if trying not to cry...

He lunged forward...
L: iss toh main..But Ram held him back and shook his head...
L: par bhaiyya iska sahas kaise hua meri bhaabhi ke liye aise apshabd kehne ka...
Ram blinked his eyes...



R: ve humse badi hai Lakshman...hum isprakar unka apmaan nahi karsakte...main jaanta hoon unhone Sita ka apmaan kiya hai...



Lakshman nodded and sighed sadly seeing his bhaabhi like that...



Kk: tumhe sunne mein aapatti hai...maine kaha ABHI ISI SAMAY YAHA SE NIKLO! SAMJHI?

She said pushing her out...and put a reassuring hand on her shoulder. ...



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Ram entered his chamber and found his wife arranging their bed ...
R: Sita...
he called...

S: ji swaami...
she answered looking at him...


R: aaj jo hua...uske liye...main shyama prarthi hoon...

S: nahi nahi Swaami! mujhe bura nahi laga...unhone kuch anuchit nahi kaha...pitaji ko aur mujhe bhi kabhi aishvaryon mein ruchi thi hi nahi...unki koi truti nahi...

She said with a smile...making him admire her all the more...


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Lakshman threw the glass of water that he was holding due to which Urmila came running. ...

Ur: kya hua?

L: uska itna sahas!

Ur: kiska?

L: use toh main chodunga nahi...

Ur: ( irritated) arrey kise???

L: ( angrily) uss Manthara ko...
He said throwing another glass angrily...

R: Lakshman...
Ram called as he and Sita entered their room with Ram holding the glass his brother had thrown...

L: bhaiyya...bhaabhi...pranam...

He and Urmila greeted them...

R: Lakshman ab shaant hojao...

L: mujhe yah kadapi swikasr nahi hoga ki mere samaksh meri bhaabhi ka isprakar koi apmaan kare aur vaha se jeevit laut jaaye...

Sita went forward and put a hand on his shoulder. ... .
S: aapne mere vishay mein itna vichaar kiya...mujhe prasannata hai mujhe aaj aapke roop mein aisa bhai mila hai...

She said taking him in a sisterly embrace...

L: aap jaisi bhaabhi roopi behen bhi kisi ko prapt ksha hoti hai...
He said with a smile...



TBC😳



Edited by akyabiggestfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
hi..
I'm slightly busy so will reply to all comments a little later...
thank you to all who took out time and commented😃

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