SKR Os: His Better Half

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OS: His Better Half



Urmila gave out a happy squeal as she reached the ashram Ram was residing in...


She asked one of the inmates there if she could enter...to which the inmate led her to the hut the two were in...

Ur: Dashrath nandan v Sumitra nandan ko Urmila ka pranaam...

Urmila said folding her hands...

R: aiyye raajkumari aapka swaagat hai...



Ur: dhanyawaad parantu raajkumari kyu? main Sita didi ki choti behen hu toh ab aapki bhi hui na...toh mujhe keval Urmila kahiye...

R: avashya Urmila...aapke aane ka koi vishesh karan?

Ur: haan haan haina! na bataya toh ma mujhe maar hi dengi...
Vo ma ne aap dono ko bhoj ka aamantran diya hai...

R: unse kahiyega hum avashya aayenge...


Ur: aap jaante hai ma abtak pitaji se rusht hai kyunki unhone aapko roka nahi raatri ke bhojan hetu...
Urmila bit her tongue realising what she just said...

R: parantu ismein Rajrishi ki koi truti nahi ...hum iss samay keval anteh vaasi hai...

Ur: yah aapki mahakta hai aur ek vo. ..kya kaha tha uss Ravan ke bachche ne..." mujhe tumhari putri mein koi ruchi nahi parantu Mahadev ka dhanush unke sabse bade bhakt ke saath shobha deta hai" huh!!!!!!



She mimicked in a manly voice...making Ram laugh...

R: aapko itne katuvachano ko prayog nahi karna chahiye...



Ur: shyama kijiye jijaji...parantu main apni Sita didi ke liye ek bhi apshabd nahi seh sakti...

Ram smiled at her and was about to speak when she piped in again...



Ur: ( cute pout) parantu ek samasya hai!

R: kaisi samsya?

Ur: hume toh gyaat hi nahi ki aapko konse vyanjan priya hai...meetha ya teekha...samanya ya raajsi?

R: aap jo banayenge hume wahi sabse adhik priya hoga..



Urmila smiled...
Ur: aap shayad nahi jaante jijaji parantu aap aur didi ke vichaar ek hi hai...jaise do shareer kintu ek hriday...
She replied dreamily before getting up and folding her hands asking for permission to leave...

***



Sita didi! Sita didi! vo aagaye!

Sita almost burnt her hand hearing this due to excess happiness. ...

She had just prepared the lunch and now headed quickly to get ready for her Dashrsth nandan...

J: aiyye Ram,Lakshman...aapka swaagat hai!
Janak greeted the the princes...



Ram's eyes were continuously searching for Sita...Lakshman smirked at this...
L: bhaiyya aati hi hongi bhaabhi...chintit na hoiyye...

Ram just smiled at Lakshman...

They bent forward to take the blessings of Janak and Sunaina...

Su: aap dono kal raatri itni shigra chsle gaye...bhojan ke liye bhi n ruke...aur kuch logon ne unhe rokne ka prayas bhi na kiya...



She muttered...making Janak go almost numb...

Ram caught his sisters in law supressing a giggle seeing the cute fight between their parents...

He smiled seeing this adorable family...

R: shyama kijiye mata...
He apologised making her come to him...

Sunaina smiled...patting his head in a blessing. ...

***

Soon everyone had settled down and were waiting for Sita to arrive. ...

Sita arrived...dressed beautifully in a sky blue dress...


She folded her hands in a greeting to both the princes...

Ram was just awestruck seeing his Sita...
He was quite a calm and composed person...very gentle...he being called as Maryada Purshottam Ram...but today seeing tge love of his life so beautifully dressed he was lost in her beauty. ...

Urmila cleared her throat breaking their reverie...



Su: Sita...putri...bhojan nahi parosogi?

S: ji...ma...

With that started serving...soon she reached the person she was eagerly waiting to serve...

As she leaned towards him to put the food in his plate...she got lost in his chocolate brown eyes..yet again...she could almost feel his warm breath on her face due to the proximity and that sent shivers down her spine. ...



She never realised where she was or what she was supposed to do...she could think nothing but Ram...and same with him...

L: Sita bhaabhi!
Lakshman cried out as the two keot looking at each other...
The two suddenly came back to their senses and that is when Sita realised she was going to put the halwa straight in his lap...Instead of the plate...



S: Shyama kijiye Dashrath nandan..main..vo...



She looked embarrassed while the others except Ram could barely supress their giggles seeing this couple lost in love...

R: n..nahi...koi baat nahi...
He said awkwardly trying to control the situation. ...



Sita had always seen her mother and choti ma stand behind their husbands while they ate and so she did the same and stood behind Ram...


R: aap mere peeche kyu khadi hai Sita...aap hamare saath baithkar bhojan kyu nahi karti?
He enquired. ...



Sita looked diwn whike choti ma explained. ...
CM: yahi parampara hai rajkumar ki patni pati ke bhojan ke pashchaat hi bhojan grahan karti hai...aur aap dono ka vivah kuch hi dino mein sampann hojaayega...

Ram smiled...
R: main iss parampara ka aadar karta hu...parantu Bhagwaan ne purush v stree ko bina kisi bhedbhaav ke banaya tha...


Ek patni apne pati ka aadha ansh hoti hai...isiliye toh uski ardhaangini kehlaati hai...ab ek shareer ke do ango mein bhed kaisa?

Janak smiled...
J: aapke aise vichar sun...mujhe ekbaar phiryyah anubhooti horahi hai ki aapse adhik yogya var meri putri ko mil hi nahi sakta...



At this Ram smiled at Sita...making her blush furiously. ...

Ma: ( in Sita's ear) didi ab bas kijiye...varna gaal sadaiv ke liye laal pad jaayenge!
She teased...getting a look from Sita...



Sita looked at Ram with her eyes full of love and extreme respect for him...as she settled down besides him to eat...



The End 😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello ,

First of all thank for the lengthy post😃

I just loved Urmila being so naughty , I wish you write something about Lakhan n Urmila also .
But never the less, I m loving this completely.
SIta in sky blue , Oh godd , How I wish I could see her !
Ram-Siya lost in Love , Eye Lock , Oh god thats gonna death of me.
And that Sunaina-Janak thing is so natural. I LOVE THEM !

How do you write it soo good ? With so much of perfection ?
And your Hindi , Its just so perfect 👏 You must be a very good student at schl !

Waiting for the next one ! Apt title "His Better Half"
Why dont you start you Index ? Pls do that .
Saluting your imagination.

Love,
Sruthi


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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
lovely story
you potrayed the characters really well
everything apt , loved it
please write on urmilla lakshman as well
I really liked urmilla's naughtiness
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Awsome post... Interesting and hilarious too😳😆
Thank you for wonderful posts

Do write more👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
beautiful os
loved it
SitaRam..fully lost whenever they just see each other...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
such an adorable OS ... I just luved it 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
awww...this is so cute...so wonderful😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
This is so cute...beautiful as well.
Fantastic OS.

Please do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh man ! You are amazing. Kaise Chote chotey moments ko eternalize kar deti hain.
And I agree with shruti. Plz make an index.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Adorable OS 😳
Loved it

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