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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good morning guys..
I'm really touched by the appreciation I've received for my previous two stories...here is another one...
dedicated to Manas and Shreya...my first friends on this forum...




Os: A New Sita



It was the day after the Swayamwar...
Not just Janak's capital city Janakpuri but also the entire Mithila was decked up like a bride for the wedding of their elder princess...




In the royal Palace...
Everyone was in the Bhojan gruh...having dinner...relishing the delicious royal meal...

Lakshman smirked seeing his brother * how delicious* face as he ate a bit of kheer...
Urmila too caught it and nudged Shrutkirti standing besides her with her elbow...



Shrutkirti passed her a surprised look and Urmila pointed slightly towards Ram and then the Kheer...
Shrutkirti smirked getting the hint...



Sh: uh...badi ma! yeh kheer toh atyant swaadisht prateet hoti hai...mujhse toh raha nahi jaata ab!



Chandrabhaga ( choti ma) glared at her...



Sunaina smiled and said...
Su: putri...tum bhool gayi yah kheer toh tumhari Sita didi ne banayi hai...

Ma: arrey haan! Shyama kijiye badi ma...ye kadachit vikshipt ( mental) hogayi hai!!!



Urmila bit her lip to control her laughter while Shrutkirti pouted...

Su: awww...na meri putri...( commanding tone) ab koi meri putri ko nahi chidaayega...

Shrutkirti hugged Sunaina...like a baby...



L: ( in mood to tease Ram) achcha...isikaaran bhaiyya kheer ka kuch adhik hi anand se sevan kar rahe hai...

Ram choked on the water he was drinking and shot a embarrassed and utterly shocked look to Lakshman...



L: bhaabhi...vivah ke pashchaat toh main bhojan ke liye aaphike bhavan aaunga!

S: avashya...main prateeksha karungi...
She said smilingly...

L: ( still naughty) bhaiyya...aap bhaabhi ko batayenge nahi...kheer kaisi lagi aapko?



Ram looked at him with an open mouth..while the others tried their best not roll on the floor...laughing because of his epic expressions...

Ur: haan haan...jijaji...bataiyye na...

Ram smiled hesitantly at her and nodded...



He was feeling really embarrassed in front of her elders who were having a hard time controlling themselves...

R: a..avashya...achchi...hai...at..atyant swaadisht!

He managed to say...



S: dhanyawaad!
She replied...blushing at his praises...

J: Ram...humne Ayodhya naresh ko sandesh bhej diya hai...ve jald hi saparivaar padhaarenge...

R: dhanyawaad Rajrishi...



J: aap mujhe pitaji bulaiyye...kyunki ab Sita aapki honewaali patni hai...

R: avashya..pitaji...

Ma: vaise Sita didi...aapki vah aasmaani nerle rang ki chunri kisprakar phat gayi?

L: ( whispered in Ram's ear) bhaiyya..ye vahi chunri haina..jiska tukda aapko ashw ke oair mein mila...jise aap raatri ko aapne paas rakhkar sote hai...



Ram simply wanted the earth to open up...so that he could hide...

Later...
In Sita's chamber...



S: Shrutkirti...kya tha vo sab?

Sh: didi...yah sab Urmil...

Ur: asatya mat bolo Kirti! mujhpar aarop lagaaogi...ruko!!!



With that Urmila started hitting her with a pillow...
It soon turned into a pillow fight with all sisters participating actively...



Just then...
the dwaarpal came...
D: rajkumari...rajkumar Ram aapse bet ki anumati chahte hai...



Ur: ( still hitting barely realising their state) haan...unhe bheetar le aiyye...

Ram got the shock of his like as he entered in...

R: Sita...

S: hmmm...


Sita turned around casually still smiling widely. ...she dropped the pillow as soon as she saw Ram and tucked a strand of hair behind awkwardly...

Ram was quite happy to see this bubbly side of hers...

R: main yeh dene aaya tha...



He said extending the peice of her chunri...she had tied on the horse's leg...

S: ( smiled awkwardly) aapne..kasht kyu kiya...kintu dhanyawaad...yah meri sabse priy chunri ka tukda hai...



She replied. ...

R: avashya...maain chalta hu...aap apni pratiyogita ka aarambh kijiye...
He said teasingly. ...making her blush...

Ram gave her polite smile before wishing them goodnight and leaving...




The End😳






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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Riya i was just reading ur os i got your pm😃
thanks for dedicating it to us😊
lovely😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such cute OS 😳
I must say u write so well... actually feel like I'm seeing n hearing them 😳
Hahaha loved the way Laxman teasing Ram... his reaction is worth watching 😉
Loved it
Plz PM me whenever u will update
Edited by priyu03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayee, how do write them so good ? #InLove
I am just going out of this universe everytime I am reading them.
Its my pleasure reading them. Pls do write more.
I won't mind even if you write 2-3 a single day.😆

And wait, you wrote 2 stories already ? Bt I read only one.
Can I get the link pls .

Waiting for your next update eagerly, actually I cant wait.
I am dieing to read your next ...

With love,
Sruthi


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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
lovely os
loved it
I loved how all teased Ram...
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Awsome... please give us cute posts as such!!👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so sweet...Loved it Riya.

It's awesome.

👏 👏 👏 👏

You write so well!!!! Please do write more.

Please do PM me.
Edited by NEIRAlover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!so cuuuttteee
Pleeeaseee write more *puppy face*
;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Hey wait wait wait wait wait...
First of all amazing written Di
Second I am a silent reader actually but read your every FF,OS,TS,Drabble written on Kaya and I know you are the Queen of these
So Welcome to SKR Forum Riya Di😊
Already you have written 3 OS and I wait for more kam se kam 2 se 3 toh expect kar hi sakte 😉😆
😆I am just a fan of your writings of KAYA and now same goes for Siya and Ram, U know U just shocked me when I saw you here and your all 3 OS are just beautifully written

With Lots Of Love
Anushka😳

P.S. Please continue Royal Love and Marriage for revenge stories as i just love them and PM me your all new writings and Welcome once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing...awesome...lovely...

fantastic...fabulous...astonishing👏

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