SKR Drabble: A Walk In The Royal Garden

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Sita sighed as she walked down along a path of beautiful flower beds glowing in the moon light...
S: ye teeno bhi na! sadaiv mujhe chedti rehti hai...
She pouted...

She felt someone's presence behind her and immediately recognised who it was...

R: aap soyi nahi?
Ram asked as he stood beside her...

S: ji...vo...mujhe nidra nahi aarahi thi...toh bas...

R: ( smiling) meri avastha bhinn nahi!

He confessed making her give him an utterly shocked look...

S: aapke...bhraata bhi...aapko...

Ram nodded...scratching his head giving a sheepish smile...
Who had seen the great dadhrath nandan Shri Ram...like this?

S: vo...Urmila,Mandvi aur Shrutkirti...mujhe...

R: sankoch n kijiye...
Ram gently nudged her...

S: vo...ve teeno mujhe vivaah geet gaakar...
She blushed...

Ram blushed mentaly...

S: aap...ko nidra nahi aayi?

R: nahi...aap..apne vishay mein kuch bataiyye?

S: main?...ji mujhe chitrakaari atyant priy hai...tatha main pratidin yah karti hu...

R: avashya...aapki chitrakari maine dekhi hai...

Sita smiled and suddenly shivered...thus didn't go unnoticed by Ram...

Ram immediately took of his utariya and covered her with it...

S: ( shocked) yeh..yeh...aap kya kar rahe hai dashrath nandan?...yeh..aapka...

R: ( smiled) aap meri honewali patni hai...aur aapki raksha ka daitv mera hai...
He replied...

Sita was still hesitant and was about to remove it when she sneezed lightly. ...

R: ( worried) dekhiye...aapko jwar hojaayega...kripya isse grahan kar lijiye...
He requested with concern dripping from his voice...

Sita gave him a shy smile...
But it was replaced by an embarrassed look as she realised she had been looking at him all this while...admiring him...

S: kya hum...prasthaan kar sakte hai?

R: avashy...chaliye...

He said escorting her out of the garden...

They were having a silent...romantic walk through the corridor when they heard Lakshman...

L: bhaiyya..bhaabhi...shyaama kijiye...main chalta hu...
Lakshman said embarrassed as he saw them together with Ram's utariya around Sita's shoulders... when he came to look for Ram...


S: nahi bhrata Lakshman..mujhe..prasthan karna chahiye...aap dono ko shub raatri...

She wished...

The two smiled at her and left...and so did Sita...clutching his utariya tightly to herself as if taking in his scent..


They couldn't wait for the wedding! ANYMORE!!!!




The End 😳

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rajshrip thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the scene👏. So beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cho chweet !! totally dripping with honey and liquid chocolate !
kitna cute likhtey ho tum yaar ! and your hindi is so nice...like I could almost hear them talking ! nice possible scenarios ! write more !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey riya seem u and me watch same type of show loved the os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH MY GOD..yaar You have made sure I go to mental hospital is it, ? as it is I am not able to control my madness for AshNa as RamSiya and u have written this sequence so romantically awesome na ki mere toh 🤪 yeh heat hai ki...There is no hope left..😆😆😆

BRILLIANT..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet and Romantic
I was literally imagine them... while reading this ufff too cute
Plz write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Stupefying...striking...majestic...wonderful...mind-blowing...

Wondrous...overwhelming...loved it😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Isn't that true that you have got some magic ?
Definitely yess. Riya dear, you are turning me crazier.
Reading this feels like heaven.
Keep posting. N make us all go CRAZY 😆
You literally made the murder plan to kill all ur readers with ur amazing stuff.

Love,
Sruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so beautiful...Thank you so much Riya for writing such a beautiful piece.

It's awesome...Brilliant...Loved it.

Please do write more...Would love to read more of your work.
Edited by NEIRAlover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Beautiful piece of writing riya...

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