Superbly written shreya.
Loved the dialogs.The events unfolded perfectly.A request. Would love to see siya as a warrior also.A few scenes of sword training horse riding would be awesome.A huge thumbs up.Waiting for next chapter
Sorry Jay for my late reply! I saw your post just now.
Thank you so much for your encouragement. and your suggestions !
seeta as a warrior princess ?? hmm...kaafi interesting !
from mytho-historical point of view, it would be accurate if I put some scenes like that. coz royal women were trained to be good horse riders as it was the only medium of transport and wield a sword for self defense.
thank you. Itz a good idea. Dekhtey hain, how and where I imply them.