Dhruv and vedika's short story contest - Page 3

Originally posted by: srk_rulz

Didnt that name originally come from the fan-fiction of sindoor? 😉

Okay..ermm im working on mines..havent written one in ages..but lets see wat i can come up with..reemz u better be writing too! 😉

ive already written one for the Mrs Dhruv contest...that was hard enough!!😆 But I'll read urz for now!!

Well doe guys...wicked job!!👏

ok pm ur stories only if u want 😃

Mines is looong, sorry i dunno if its gna qualify... 😆 I kinda rushed the ending to make it shorter..njoy! 😛

Love at first sight?


Firstly let me introduce you to Vedika, Vedika just finished MBA, and was now looking for a job. She lives with her sister Niharika and her mum Uma. Her sister and herself are both single. Vedika has no interest in boys what so ever..well this would soon change!

Uma: Vedika, beta..get up your going to be late for your interview.
Vedika: Maa, mujhe sona hai..
Uma: Fine! Sleep, forget about finding yourself a job!

10 mins later Vedika appears at the breakfast table, all ready to go for her interview at Raizada Industries.

Vedika: Okay maa, im going bye…she hugs her mum and leaves. After a short drive she reaches the office. (thinks to herself) Baghwaan mere raksha karna. She enters the building and goes to the reception office. Hi I'm Vedika, here for a job?

Reception Lady: Please take a seat, sir will be another couple of minutes.

Vedika looks around the whole room and there seems to be a long queue of people for this job, she starts to get worried now.

Reception Lady: You may go in now Vedika maam.

Vedika takes a deep breath and pulls the door open to find herself facing a handsome young man in a handsome suit! 😆

Hi, Please take a seat. I'm Mr. Dhruv Razaida. Vedika smiles politely. Thank you sir.

Dhruv looks at Vedika's files, so Vedika you just finished your MBA? First job?

Yes sir.

Dhruv: I'm sorry to break your heart but we are looking for someone experienced. Nice meeting you. Bye

Vedika: (thinks to herself) BYE?!? 😡 How rude is this man? She gets up abruptly and leaves the room, full of anger!

Following week:
Vedika decides to do some shopping for herself to cheer herself up for not getting the job. She is in a clothes shop looking at a yellow top.

"Nahh…this colour wont suit you"

Vedika turns back to see who said that and what a surprise it is Dhruv!

Vedika: Jee? Tum yahan?

Dhruv: Jee main yahan…buying some clothes, that's what you do in a clothes shop ryt? 😆

Vedika walks away from Dhruv but he runs after her.

Dhruv: Hey..wait, please..i'm sorry!

Vedika: She stops suddenly..Kya kahan tumne?

Dhruv: Sorry…That day I didn't mean to be so abrupt, I was having a bad day.

Vedika: (angry tone) Well you didn't have to take the anger out on me. That job meant everything to me! 😡

Dhruv: I know, I know..In the end nobody got the job, I refused everyone. But the thing is….

Vedika: Kya…?

A long silence….

Dhruv: I can't stop thinking about you..

Vedika: Kya? I don't believe im hearing this..look I have to go

Dhruv: No, plz…I..I

Vedika leaves before Dhruv can finish.

Next day: (at Vedika's house)

Ring Ring!! Ring Ring!
Someone was ringing the doorbell at 7:30am

Vedika appears and opens the door…Tum?!

Dhruv: Yes, me…look I got you a present, the yellow top you were looking at yesterday. I think it will look fab on you!

Vedika: (laughs) Tum bhi naa...Come in

Dhruv: Wow nice house,

Vedika:I'll get some juice for you.D

Dhruv stops her by holding her hand 😳 No its okay...i dont need anything except from..(kneels down) Vedika, I know you think yeh sab kuch filmo main hota hai..but do you believe in love at first sight? Because I sure do. 😉

Vedika: (Shocked) What are you trying to say?

Dhruv: Well how would you like it if I gave you a job?

Vedika: Job?

Dhruv: Yes…the job of spending the rest of your life with me? What say…mujhse shaadi karoge?

Vedika: (laughs)…

THE END

Aw i know its cheesy but its coz i was gna make them fight and stuff after the interview, then finally begin to love each other...hehe..but then it wouldnt be a short story 😉

ok i had the worst story ever and i am so stupid i named humm saath saath hain wow .....i dont like my story and know u gut=ys dont like it either

its nice who care its just a story don't feel bad

Originally posted by: pooja_15

thank u

I just read all the stories...and all of them are superb!!! Pooja urs was really nice too...! 😃 😛

WOW! Khushi....soooooooo sweet!! I just love to imagine all that 😳 😳

Reminds me of our old days...sindoor FF!! 😭 😭

Originally posted by: DkDish

WOW! Khushi....soooooooo sweet!! I just love to imagine all that 😳 😳

Reminds me of our old days...sindoor FF!! 😭 😭

i know ryt..when i was writing it i thought i was a part of V.S.R.K 😭 and that this was one of the chapters i was writing..hehe, thanks hunni! 😛

thank u srk-rulz yeah but i know my story was stupid 😳 😭

AW! khushi i loved ur story it was soo cute! 😳 .. and everyone else was cute too! 😃 😃