Dhruv and vedika's short story contest - Page 2

u guys try write a story with 2 sentenc
like this vedika dhruv are th best couple but some one is trying to stop them who could be
se like that

alright, i'll try. here it goes:

Vedika and Dhruv are sitting in a restaurant when a waiter comes who looks exactly like Dhruv. Vedika sees this and tells the Dhruv with her: "Dhruv, you have a twin, I see." The waiter answers: "Yes,I do. He laughs" Vedika asks him she was talking to Dhruv. The Waiter tell her that he is Dhruv. So then Vedika goes all crazy saying that the Dhruv with her disgraced her and cheated on her. That the one with her isn't Dhruv, but an imposter. Vedika goes to the Raizada home with the waiter Dhruv and the Dhruv with her, who keeps asking her what she is doing. Vedika opens the doors of the house and tells the whole family that the Dhruv she has been with is an imposter. The real Dhruv is him: "points to waiter". Vedika then hits the Dhruv who was with her with a chapal and he starts pleading to Vedika, "Arre, Vedika, mujhko maaf karro. Mujhe sirf washroom ku jaana tha. Thumharai ghar mai atchai, saaf, sutrai washrooms hai, isi liyai mai uus Dhruv ku aik drink thaikar waiter banaadiya. Mujhe maaf karro." Vedika tells him, "arre, jabsai thum aye ho, mai thumhai washroom kabhi nai daikhi. tho thumhai washroom ku kaisai jaaana tha?"
He says: "washroom jaanai nai daikha? mai tho hamaisha washroom ku gya. Vo room jo Sundari ki tasviir hai, mai samaja tha ki vo hi washroom tha? kya, ghalat tha?"
Vedika then thinks, that that is why Sundari left the house in a hurry.

its the best i can do in 3 minutes

its the best i can do in 3 minutes
its a nice story 😃

thanks. 😛
i like the other ones better though

okay I have one!

Everyone thinks Dhruv is dead since he has been missing for four years now.

Yet he is alive!

One day he stumbles into the bushes near his home. He spots a little boy playing in the garden.

Then he looks in the other direction and sees Vedika coming over to pick up the child.

" Aryan I have been looking all over for you," Vedika exclaimed.

Dhruv sees the remblance in the child to Vedika. Then he sees that Vedika has sindoor in her mang.

Dhruv wonders if she remarried.

Vedika hears the rustling in the bushes.

" Who are you? Show yourself!," Vedika demmanded.

Dhruv emerges.

Vedika is shocked and faints.

Vedika come to in her room.
The whole family along with Dhruv are around her.

" Where have you been Dhruv?," Vedika asked.

" In an accident I was injured badly but it took me time to regain my memory and health," Dhruv stated.

Vedika smiled.

" So did you reamrry?," Dhruv asked.

Vedika shook her head. " I believed in my love. I had to believe that you would come back to meet your son Aryan," Vedika replied.

From then on, little Aryan ahd both his parents.

hey adventure girl ...
you picked the name aryan of my story...
anyways good story!!

Originally posted by: soniajhee

hey adventure girl ...
you picked the name aryan of my story...
anyways good story!!

Didnt that name originally come from the fan-fiction of sindoor? 😉

Okay..ermm im working on mines..havent written one in ages..but lets see wat i can come up with..reemz u better be writing too! 😉

Hey one more thing...i think we should PM the stories to you mary kate because that way no one can copy/steal ideas. 😊